The devastating Misty Story!

Started by pokechu1234 November 1st, 2007 8:07 PM
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Posted November 1st, 2007
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The devastating Misty story!
After a long journey from the Hoenn region Ash goes home only to find out that Misty is there. He looked puzzled. Misty was talking to his mom about something. Ash couldn’t mouth out the words. Luckily, Misty and his mom did not know that he was inside the house. He went behind the green aqua couch that Misty and his mom was sitting on. He snook a light look over the couch. His mother was always wearing a light mahogany shirt with green aqua skirt. Misty however was wearing a bikini top with sweat pants.

“Wow, Misty looks hot!” Ash thought to himself. “I can’t hear them, maybe I should lean in”.

Of course Ash forgot that Pikachu was still on his back. It started tapping on Ash’s shoulder wanting food. Ash kept shushing it. Pikachu yelled “ PIKACHU!” to get Ash’s attention. Unfortunately that blew his cover. Misty leaned over the couch.

“How long have you been there?” she asked.

Ash checked the clock on the wall.

“About a minute” he replied.

Misty sighed and turned to face Ash’s mother. She started packing up her bag and her poke-balls. Right beside her bag was her yellow shirt. She took it and put it on. She started to brush her hair and put the brush in the bag. She took her hand and shook Ash’s mom’s hand.

“Thanks for the lovely chat, Ms.ketchum” said Misty.

“Anytime” replied Ms.ketchum.

As Misty walked out the door Ash was looking her suspiciously. Many thoughts came to his mind. Most of them was the conversation Misty and his mom was talking about and why was she wearing nothing but a bikini top for a shirt. He turned around to his mom and pointed out his index finger.

“What were you girls talking about?” he asked.

“Girl’s confidential code” chuckled his mom. She left the room leaving Ash by himself in the living room with a hungry Pikachu.

Ash poured Pikachu his food while suddenly the phone rang. Ash quickly gave Pikachu his bowl of food and went for the phone. Pikachu didn’t care about the bowl. It just ripped the food bag open and ate whatever was in there. Ash finally got the phone.

“Hello?” he panted.

“Hi it’s me, May” said a girly voice.

“Hello, May” said Ash.

“I was just wondering do you want to go out tomorrow,” asked May. “Like on a date?”

Ash paused. His heart rate started to slow down as if he were dying. He never thought one of the girls he hanged out with would go on date with him. He never said anything for awhile, leaving May on the phone wondering if he is still there.

“Y-y-yeah, o-o-ok” he shuddered. “I’ll go out with you.”

Even though it was faint Ash could hear a little scream on the phone. It wasn’t a horrified scream but a “yes” scream.

“I’ll meet you tomorrow at 7pm” said May.

Ash was very excited. He was finally going on a date, with a girl! He ran back to the kitchen to tell Pikachu the good news. He was shocked to see Pikachu had ate the whole food bag and was now fast asleep on the ground with a very big full stomach. He sighed and dragged Pikachu up to his bedroom. In another room Ash’s mom was doing online chatting with Misty.

“Do you think he has the same feelings for me?” asked Misty.
“He should” said Ash’s mom. “I’ve known Ash since he came out of me, I know he likes you but still, ask him on a date.”

Misty blushed. “Okay I’ll try” she said.

They ended their chat and went to bed. Ash couldn’t help but think about the date he was going to tomorrow. He looked beside him. Pikachu was now awake giving him the perverted smile. Ash couldn’t help but punch Pikachu across the bed. He heard a huge bump on the ground.

“Good night, Pikachu” Ash said.

“Pika” said Pikachu in agony.

Misty was now at home ready to take a shower when a stranger appeared through her window.

“Yo, you want to buy some pills?” he asked.

Misty screamed and kicked his little face. The pills in the stranger’s hand landed on Misty’s bathroom floor. Misty bended down and picked the pills up. They were stress relief pills. Misty has been under a lot of stress lately because of the whole Ash thing. So without further ado she took one and swallow it. A strange feeling came over her head. Her mind was starting to clear.

“Wow, I got these great pills for free!”said Misty to herself.

She took off all her clothes and stepped into the bath tub. She waited as the bath tub was filling with water and foam soap. Her hand to started to vibrate. It’s probably a side effect from the pills as she thought. As the bath tub was finished she sunk into the hot water. She gave a relaxing sigh. Her hand was still vibrating, which was now swaying the water. Then her arms and legs started to vibrate. Misty was now getting scared as now her whole body was vibrating now.

“What’s going on?!” she screamed terrified on what was happening to her.

Green veins were popping out of every part of her body. Misty was now in pain as her body grew a little. The green veins started to turn her flesh color skin to green color skin. Misty was now becoming very scared at herself. She gave a powerful loud scream that filled the night. Her eyes turned big red. She stepped out of the bath tub as a naked green girl. She was now a monster. She lost control of her mind so she has no idea of what she was doing. She had power like a Pokemon now. Green energy surrounded her body. She started to discharge the green energy. With all that discharge the energy made Misty house explode. She gave a monstrous scream and sent concentrated energy balls at other houses to destroy them. At home Ash was hearing these noises. He went to pick Pikachu off the floor.

“Pikachu we’re going to check something out!” he said.

“Pika-pika” said Pikachu.

Ash ran towards the town. He saw that most buildings were now destroyed. Ash and Pikachu followed the weird foot steps to the forest. They saw this green creature eating a small Pidgey on top of a rock. Ash looked towards Pikachu.

“Use thunder shock!” he commanded.

Pikachu sent a big bolt of electricity to the green creature. The electricity bolt did not effect the green creature. It finished eating the Pidgey and faced Pikachu and Ash. He sent a big burp causing the ground to shake. Pikachu was off it’s balance. The green creature saw it’s chance to attack. He leaped down and dug it’s sharp nails into Pikachu. Pikachu screamed in pain. The green creature leaped off a tree behind Pikachu and attacked Pikachu’s back. Pikachu landed head first on the ground.

“Pikachu!” cried Ash. “Use Iron tail!”

Pikachu got up and ran backwards to the green creature with it’s tail glowing. The green creature sent a concentrated energy blast at Pikachu. Pikachu’s iron tail cut through the energy blast. Pikachu’s iron tail sent the green creature hurling in the trees. The green creature started to retreat. It met it’s match. For now.

The green creature leaped into the city and went into this empty hotel house. The green creature’s skin was starting to turn back to flesh color. Back to the normal Misty unaware she was naked at that moment. She was too energized from that pill causing her to faint of exhaustion on the bed. Ash was left by himself in the middle of the forest.

“Who was that?” he asked himself.

“Pika” said Pikachu.

Ash and Pikachu went back to their house to get some more sleep. But as they got back, the sun went up. They groaned and just slammed themseves on the bed. He was asleep until 5:30 pm. He woke up.

“Oh no!” he yelled. “I need to get prepared for my date!”

After 1hrs and 30min he met up with May. The went outside to this sushi restaurant to have some dinner. They complimented each other and told jokes. Across the street Misty saw the whole thing from the hotel. She would have gone outside to ruin their date but she couldn’t because she didn’t have any clothes on her. She looked closer at May and Ash. They were making out! Lip locking some might say. That devastated Misty. She found a piece of cloth from her clothes before she transformed. She took out the pill. Once again the pill cleared her mind until she transformed into the green creature again. She blew up the hotel an landed in front of Ash and May. May screamed of fear.

“PIKACHU!” yelled Ash. “QUICK ATTACK!”

Out of nowhere Pikachu came and gave the green creature a tackle. It had no effect. May sent her Blaziken to help.

“Pikachu thunder shock!” commanded Ash.

“Blaziken, fire punch!” commanded May.



The thunder shock had no effect but the fire punch send the green creature hurling through the hotel building. A concentrated energy ball came and attacked Blaziken. Blaziken slammed into a building wall.

“Pikachu, use thunder punch” said Ash.

The thunder punch did the effect the green creature either. It was like it was immune to electric attacks. The green creature’s hand started to glow green. The green creature slapped Pikachu in the face with it’s glowing hand. Pikachu went hurling into the dirt. Pikachu was now defense-less. It could barely move. The green creature came to finish the job before it’s skin started to turn back to flesh color. Misty fainted, all nude in the middle of the road. Ash and May carried her to Ash’s house. Misty awoke.

“Why am I here?” she asked. “AND WHY AM I NUDE!”

May quickly handed her a towel. Ash decided to ask Misty some questions.

“When did you start turning into this, thing?” asked Ash.

“Ever since I took these stress relief pills” Misty replied.

Misty handed Ash the pills. Ash analyzed them carefully. He quickly threw them out in the garbage.

“Why did you do that?” asked Misty.

“Those aren’t stress relief pills for humans, Misty” said Ash. “It’s for Pokemon.”

“Maybe her body was getting energy like a Pokemon because Pokemon deal with stress by using their powers” said May.

Misty blushed. She was taking pills that are not meant for her species and now she is naked in front of her friends.

“C’mon, let’s find you some clothes” said Ash sweetly.

“Okay” blushed Misty.


The end.
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Well, it looked like that you took some time on this story. You have a plot, you have some description. Hey, I'm just happy that you included Pikachu!

Your grammar is kind of shoddy. You're missing the punctuation in your dialogue before the closing quotation marks.

“About a minute” he replied.
See? Like here, you're missing the comma after "minute". There were many instances of this in your story. Just take a look through your story again and you should be able to find them.

Also, you seem to have a little problem between "its" and "it's". "Its" is the possessive form to show that something owns something. "It's" is the contraction of "it is".

As for description, I would ask for a little more, especially about how the characters feel in the situation, and a bit more about the surroundings and battle. But really, you did rather well, and put more into this than other "first time" fics I've seen.

Oh, and welcome to PC!

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