=O Damn you, you copied my warning idea!!! =P
So? sue me =P
I really like this. I think at the beginning it's really effective and just pleasant the way you go on about the butterfly's "way of life", if you get me. It's quite cute. And then it's really sad when the butterfly suffers;
To be honest I'm actually the boy who made the butterfly suffers..yes I still remembered the day I tortured a butterfly when I was like 10?
you make it so obvious how delicate it is :( I think it's one amazing poem. I mean, I'm not a very good judge on this kind of thing, but that's what I think =P
Amazing? thanks Nikki, that's one good rating so far xD
Comments in quotes, yes I'm lazy...