I think I owe you criticism. :D I read your poems out loud, or else I can't really feel it.
In the Assassination, I'm brought to the idea that dishonesty is a double-edged sword, and since it hurts your loved one, it swings back to take a shot at you also. It was powerful, yet soft, but I took every word in to totally feel it. :]
The second Poem, Ripping, Tearing, Breaking I also took into and visualized what your were saying in my head, and it played out, because I was able to see in description of how perfectly you set image in motion and I really liked that. Good read.
Forever sounds like something I would write. xD but, um... more of a song sorta flow to it. I don't really know who you're speaking as, or if it was in third person... or same sex orientation? xD I can't say for sure. But I enjoyed your poems, they're expressively out there.
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