Pokemon Manga Special: Legends of Cyan!

Started by gotron228 December 2nd, 2007 3:58 AM
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Seen June 18th, 2018
Posted May 30th, 2018
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15.9 Years
Name:Legends Of Cyan!
Categories: Manga, Original , Fiction
Rating: PG13
Intro:I have decided to make a Fan manga but before the manga comes there must be a fiction to go with it so I have decided to write the fiction first.

Trainer Cards

Coming Soon!

Chapter 1

It was a beautiful, sunny day in the Cyan region the Chatots were singing. The Starly were flying and the Magikarp swimming like it was the end of the world. Yes , Not so many days appear like this in the Region of Cyan, Not many days at all. Inside a house sleeping was a boy named Abalone, Abalone didn't have many specialty's but the one thing he loved was Pokemon and today is his day to receive his Starting Pokemon to begin his Journey. Snoring, Abalone was tossing and turning in his sleep until suddenly BANG! he crashed on the floor, jumping up he quickly ran down stairs. "Mum, Mum today I get my Pokemon license and my starting Pokemon I can't wait!". "Yes dear but remember a trainer must take caution in all his acts including gettting, DRESSED!!!". Abalone jumped and ran back upstairs and in five minutes he had changed into his clothes and equipped his backpack on. "Now I can start my journey!" he exclaimed. "*sigh* Son after you get your pokemon come back home and I'll give you a special surprise He'll never suspect I only want to see his Pokemon!" "Ok Mum" then he ran out the door but ran into his old friend Oro. "Watch it Abalone!, Just because all the girls in town let you off because of your purple hair doesn't mean I will!" then she raised her fist and punched him in the face. "Grrr why do you have to always do that god Oro what is your Problem!, If you weren't a girl you'd get a punch in the face right back! grrr" then Oro giggled "Race you to Professor Oak's lab!" Oro said and then pushed Abalone over and ran Abalone got up "That's right Gary Oak moved here last week so he's giving me my Pokemon!" then Abalone caught up in time with Oro and got to the lab first. Abalone then pushed open the door "Ok Professor Gary Oak, Give me my starter Pokemon!" then Abalone ran right up to Gary. "I'm here!" "I know" Gary replied silently. "So where are the..." then Oro pushed in "I'm here Gary" and started to blush "Umm Ok then" Gary tried to avoid Oro. "Damn it Oro has a crush on Gary grrrr Gary this means war!" Abalone had a fiery red passion in his eyes. "This kid is starting to scare me I think he likes the girl who likes me! this cannot end well" Gary then walked over to the other end of the table to avoid getting kissed and to avoid getting punched. "Ok then let's get this started then!" "Here lay 3 Pokeballs of 3 different kinds of Pokemon" Gary said to them both. "The first Pokemon is an Eevee the normal type Pokemon she has 7 types of evolutions meaning the way you raise her will determen her final evolution". "The second Pokemon is the Lighting Mouse Pikachu, Pikachu are very rare in Cyan I had to capture one from Kanto before I moved here." "And the Final Pokemon is Aipom" "Aipom is also rare in Cyan I had to migrate this one from the Hoenn region from my good friend Emerald". "Now you must choose one of the three Pokemon to determan your Journey!"

To Be Continued
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Age 27
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Seen April 4th, 2020
Posted November 17th, 2017
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17 Years
Its good.

Good choice of starters.

But where are the commas?

And where did you get the name Abalone from (very different)

This also doesnt have description on the chracters but I like the story line for a frist chapter.

Keep going at it.
Seen December 12th, 2016
Posted July 9th, 2016
849 posts
15.6 Years
Yours: "It was a beautiful, sunny day in the Cyan region the Chatots were singing. The Starly were flying and the Magikarp swimming like it was the end of the world. Yes , Not so many days appear like this in the Region of Cyan, Not many days at all. Inside a house sleeping was a boy named Abalon.e"

Mines: "It is a beautiful, bright morning in the town of Twinleaf. Up in the cyan blue skies, fly a flock of Starlies, chirping soothingly as they glide overhead. Yes, this is the region of Sinnoh; a mountainous region. All seemed calm and perfect outside. However, inside a local house, was a whole different story."

CHANGE YOUR FIC.
Age 36
Seen 15 Hours Ago
Posted 2 Days Ago
TurtleKing worked hard on his story, and then you come along and slightly change the words. The format that your story is written in is even the same.

You have a different plot than he does, but you should also have different word choices and set up your story in a different format. The beginning format of the story is the same.

Categories: Manga, Original
Rating: PG13
Based on: Poke' Special Manga/Pokemon Adventures. This type of fanfic will be similar to that of the Poke' Special Manga/Pokemon Adventures. Meaning that it has some violence, romance, etc.
Name:Legends Of Cyan!
Categories: Manga, Original , Fiction
Rating: PG13
Intro:I have decided to make a Fan manga but before the manga comes there must be a fiction to go with it so I have decided to write the fiction first.
Plus you both have trainer cards. And his came first. There's too many similarities between the two to not make it a coincidence.

And yes, even if the idea is not the same, using nearly-similar word choices and formatting runs the risk of plagiarism.

This fic also does not meet the standards of this section. Normally, I would just move this into the Revision Bin, but the similarities between this and TurtleKing's keeps me from leaving it open. If you would like to post your story, I would suggest not having your opening lines be so close to another fic's. Just rewrite it and use your own words that aren't close to another person's.

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