TurtleKing worked hard on his story, and then you come along and slightly change the words. The format that your story is written in is even the same.
You have a different plot than he does, but you should also have different word choices and set up your story in a different format. The beginning format of the story is the same.
Originally Posted by TurtleKing
Categories: Manga, Original
Rating: PG13
Based on: Poke' Special Manga/Pokemon Adventures. This type of fanfic will be similar to that of the Poke' Special Manga/Pokemon Adventures. Meaning that it has some violence, romance, etc.
Originally Posted by Yours
Name:Legends Of Cyan!
Categories: Manga, Original , Fiction
Rating: PG13
Intro:I have decided to make a Fan manga but before the manga comes there must be a fiction to go with it so I have decided to write the fiction first.
Plus you both have trainer cards. And his came first. There's too many similarities between the two to not make it a coincidence.
And yes, even if the idea is not the same, using nearly-similar word choices and formatting runs the risk of plagiarism.
This fic also does not meet the standards of this section. Normally, I would just move this into the Revision Bin, but the similarities between this and TurtleKing's keeps me from leaving it open. If you would like to post your story, I would suggest not having your opening lines be so close to another fic's. Just rewrite it and use your own words that aren't close to another person's.