The tale of team Gale

Started by to-good-for-you January 16th, 2008 9:55 PM
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Posted April 20th, 2020
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Righto, buddy, but, next time, we need a story.

If this was meant as some sort of preview, it should've been posted in the lounge.
'It's been a prevalent notion. Fallen sparks. Fragments of vessels broken at the Creation. And someday, somehow, before the end, a gathering back to home. A messenger from the Kingdom, arriving at the last moment. But I tell you there is no such message, no such home -- only the millions of last moments . . . nothing more. Our history is an aggregate of last moments.'
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You know, if you hope that this will be a story, make it into a story. Don't just type one line and call it a day.

If you want people to think about your idea, write more about it. Right now, the "power to be feared" is just making me roll my eyes.

Guess all I'm saying is that you need an actual story if you want to create a thread, and more of an idea when you want to tease people. Otherwise, your thread's just pointless.

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