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Old December 17th, 2008 (12:58 PM).
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Old December 17th, 2008 (1:29 PM).
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    Old December 19th, 2008 (12:49 PM).
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      Old December 19th, 2008 (7:21 PM). Edited December 20th, 2008 by Bay Alexison.
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      A take on how Cyrus decides to not care about emotions no more, which all started with his passion with robots and his love for his younger sister.

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      Old December 20th, 2008 (2:54 AM).
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        Old December 20th, 2008 (8:45 PM).
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          Old December 22nd, 2008 (7:36 PM).
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            I've decided to re-write my epic failure (as in I didn't post the next chapter XD) fanfiction and have the prologue posted.
            For those of you who have been scarred by my first draft, please read my new one. It's approached in a completely different way and will not bring you any bodily injuries, I promise
            It's entitled Mira's Beginning (revised) and there is a link in my signature.
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            Old December 26th, 2008 (3:29 PM).
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              New Chapter up in the Diamond and Pearl Special fanfiction! it is located on page 2 of the fanfiction and page one of the fanfiction spot. C+C appreciated!
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              Old December 27th, 2008 (4:52 PM).
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                Chapter 5 of One Latias is up. It's been so long since I've posted a chapter, that this fan fiction has probably been forgotten. I hope that this chapter helps it to regain an audience.
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                Old December 28th, 2008 (4:32 AM).
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                Old December 29th, 2008 (7:05 PM).
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                  Wooh! Finally, my one-shot tribute is finished. Entitled Stopping by d' woods.

                  Well, I hope you guys will read it!
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                  Old December 31st, 2008 (11:48 PM).
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                    At any rate, the latest and most nonsensical chapter of Gary Stu's Unpredictable Adventure is finally up! For those who were wondering, I do in fact plan on riting moar.
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                    Old January 2nd, 2009 (8:37 AM).
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                      The National Defense Forces, the combined military of Japan, can usually be trusted to protect the people. However, after the series of events that left Polaris Institute practically devastated, they receive mysterious orders to apprehend and exile the XP-494 known as Codename Adam, whether his human self is dangerous or not.

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                      Old January 3rd, 2009 (12:52 PM).
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                        Old January 7th, 2009 (8:00 AM).
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                          Old January 7th, 2009 (8:05 AM). Edited January 7th, 2009 by Konekodemon.
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                          yey! another story to save for offline reading

                          I was thinking about making a cool Fanfiction about my character from the rp 'A New Professor In Town' entering in some type of Water League in the Battle Frontier, but I know nothing about the Battle Frontier, or what types of Water Badges to make up. I have the rules of the league though which are:

                          1: Only enter the league with Water Pokemon
                          2: Only Bring Water Pokemon with you.
                          3: Must Have Misty's Badge before entering.
                          4: Win 8 Water Badges, using only Water Types in battle.
                          5: Beat the Elite 4 and the Water League Champion and become the Champion.

                          The Water Gym leaders will also use Water Types. So it will be water vs water. But this type of fic would be too hard for me to write. Would someone like to co-author it with me? It would help me out a lot.

                          Kairi's Water Card:


                          Edit: Forgot to mention that she keeps her Poliwag outside it's ball with her all the time. It's kinda her replacement of Pikachu. And for some reason her Poliwag never evolves.
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                          Old January 9th, 2009 (9:25 PM).
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                            Old January 13th, 2009 (5:39 PM).
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                              In a departure from writing that shamelessly absurd parody, I have returned my attention to my main fic, Kanto: The Disputed Frontier. In this new chapter, we return to the perspective of Sean Crowe and company.

                              I wouldn't like this one to be my third chapter in a row without a comment, so please tell me what you think!
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                              Old January 14th, 2009 (5:18 AM).
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                              A new chapter of my fic 'Better late than never' is up, if anyone would read/review it that would be great. thanks.
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                              Old January 14th, 2009 (12:03 PM).
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                                Nurse Joy is the sympathetic saint. Officer Jenny is the skeptical guardian. Rose is the traumatized innocent. It's only natural that Bill can only find one friend out of these three, but even then, his luck (or perhaps fate) decides to make that short-lived when something else prowls the dark streets of Mauville City.

                                Meanwhile, Bill finds out that the enemy isn't just outside. It's inside him as well.
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                                Old January 16th, 2009 (1:21 PM).
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                                Hey look! A brand new chapter appeared on my fanfic As also C&C will be appreciated
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                                Old January 19th, 2009 (9:35 AM).
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                                After being betrayed by Jacob, both Bunny and Jenny weren't able to agree the next plan of action, so they went their separate ways. Meanwhile, Timmy and Lucas are finding it harder to put the piece together of this case.
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                                Old January 19th, 2009 (7:20 PM). Edited January 19th, 2009 by Venia Silente.
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                                  I thought it would be lost...

                                  That I wouldn't be able to write for quite a while...

                                  But all those pills with complicated names have proven again, the Miracles of Modern Chemistry!

                                  I mean, I am not fully healed yet... but I was greenlit to go back home for the week and spend some quality time with my word processor and my tusty Beta Reader. I thank Censored for being so patient and so... well... handy.

                                  So... here it is...


                                  Last time we saw Darius Mezze, he was granted an interview with the mysterious Leader of Team Rocket. This individual handed him and his contact agent, Syd, a special mission that would allow, if completed, for Darius to become an Admin of Team Rocket. The mission is to rise to the Indigo Tournament, fight and defeat in combat a specific Trainer who has been lost for some years... and who happens to be an old friend of Darius, Lou Varan.

                                  And then came the questions. Why me? Why him? Why this mission? Is this really the mission?

                                  Let's follow famous sportsman Darius Mezze as he tries to make out what is going on behind this offer of a lifetime...

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                                  Old January 20th, 2009 (5:44 PM).
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                                    New chapter of Poke Special Manga: DP finally up. I know it's short but, eh, I finally hit the wall. Sue me, lol. But do not worry, I've only hit the wall because of lack of personal ideas for this portion of the fic. Do not worry
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