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Old February 6th, 2010 (4:42 PM).
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    Hey everybody. I just made a Digimon Fic, named Forbidden Jogress and I would really like people to read/comment/criticize(constructively, of course).
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    Old February 6th, 2010 (7:38 PM).
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      Chapter Four of "My Guardian Angel" is ready to read, for anybody who's interested. ^.^

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      Old February 11th, 2010 (8:50 AM).
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        Chapter 17 of Delta Species is up, in which Caro finally spills the beans about his not-related-sort-of-mentorly-detachedish-older-brother.
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        Old February 13th, 2010 (10:03 PM).
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          Chapter Five of My Guardian Angel is posted. :3 Yesh, the fic is now caught up with all the chapters I've written so far.
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          Old February 14th, 2010 (1:10 AM).
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          Well, I never posted in this thread about this particular story before, so I'll take a moment to explain it. I decided I'd do a short story of sorts. I guess you'd call it a novella by the time it's finished - it's at about 6,800 words and I don't plan to have it any longer than 20,000 at the absolute most, although I may explore the concept further in later fics.

          Anyway, this time, I figured I'd challenge myself, mix it up a little. I'm going with my favourite genre, sci-fi, as the base. However, I'm also using a) romance and b) tragedy as the premise. I've never done these genres before in the slightest, so I'm apprehensive about how it's gonna come out. I'm happy with it so far, though.

          So anyway, Part III of Artificial is out now - on Valentine's Day, as promised.

          Sound like your cup of tea? The start of the fic is here if you're behind. There are only three chapters up, so there's no major catchup to do.
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          Old February 14th, 2010 (7:01 AM).
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            Old February 14th, 2010 (4:26 PM).
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              I decided against rebooting my old fanfic. Too much time has passed, and I forget the plotlines (which I stupidly didn't write down... damn me if you wish)

              While looking for new ideas, I kept returning to a character I made for a roleplay here, and realized that I hadn't fleshed out his background very much. Possibly because he reminded me of myself, I decided to write the following fanfic, 'Death Before Dishonor' about him.

              Feel free to criticize, as I'm rusty at this.
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              Old February 14th, 2010 (5:30 PM).
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                opened new thread pokemon the new adventures. yay
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                Old February 24th, 2010 (9:41 PM).
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                What is the purpose of this Agency?

                Who are the mysterious, taciturn twins that Andre values so highly?

                And what in hell's name is Whittaker trying to do with that hairdryer?

                Mystery, suspense, action and laughs await. Just drop by, leave a card . . . we'll get back to you as soon as we can.

                Act One, Scene One out right now.
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                Old February 26th, 2010 (9:29 PM).
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                  Old February 27th, 2010 (3:55 AM).
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                  Wowzers, so. This is Operation MWMFU, where I update all of my active (?) fics at the same time. I'm pleased with today's progress - three of these chapters were written today, for a total of 4,841 words. Done better, but hey.

                  So, first up is my current pet project, the tragic romance of a robot whose AI is a little bit too advanced. Someone dies in this chapter; that's all I'll say.
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                  Part V is now posted.
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                  Next is my slightly cracky script fic. Some plot exposition is had, Andre gets nauseous, employees storm out the door and intestines are . . . um, find out for yourself.

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                  Andre's Agency
                  Act One, Scene Two is now posted.
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                  This is the first chapter of a comedy retelling of Pokemon Emerald I started a while ago. I love it too much not to include it in this MWMFU day.

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                  Bang Head Here
                  Chapter One is now posted - PC debut.
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                  And finally, my ongoing OT fic, which is, as always, looking to buck the trend and be awesome in ways that a trainer fic shouldn't be able to.

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                  Chapter Ten: Rawr is now posted.
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                  Note on Artificial: Part IV was posted earlier today. Many people will probably not have read it.
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                  Old February 28th, 2010 (11:51 AM). Edited March 6th, 2010 by Miz en Scène.
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                    Chapter 3(Really the fourth installation) of NG-137 Synthetic Integration is out.

                    Go read NAO! XD
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                    Old March 1st, 2010 (11:47 AM).
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                      In my urge to start writing again, I've started up another short story:

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                      Old March 3rd, 2010 (6:34 PM).
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                        Old March 10th, 2010 (1:58 AM).
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                          Chapter one is now up!
                          There are several more chapters I've already written waiting to be posted, but it will be an ongoing story!

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                          Old March 12th, 2010 (8:07 PM).
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                            Old March 19th, 2010 (8:54 PM).
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                              I posted a new fic, Silent Waves. I've got up to chapter four written but I'm spacing out the posting of each new part so that I can (hopefully) get some feedback on what I've already written. I'm probably going to post the first chapter tomorrow, but I'd appreciate it if those who read it let me know what they think!

                              You can get to the fic by clicking on the banner in my sig.
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                              Old March 23rd, 2010 (11:10 AM).
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                                Old March 24th, 2010 (8:55 AM). Edited March 24th, 2010 by Weâvile.
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                                  Hmm... not sure if Its any good, but I've just made my first Pokemon fanfic: A Vengeance Story. Tell me what you think.
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                                  Old March 26th, 2010 (7:45 PM).
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                                      Prologue and Chapter One of "Instance Decision" are up on My DeviantArt account and PC. See signature for links.
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                                          Old April 9th, 2010 (8:25 PM).
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                                            Old April 9th, 2010 (11:46 PM).
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