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    Ladies and Gentleman! I would like to announce the arrival of Chapter 16!! I've taken some of the advice of Bobandbill, and tried to add more description to my fic, and would also like to announce that I'm finally on page 2 of my fic!! -dances- To you guys who've been reading and reviewing my fic, YOU ROCK!!!
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    Old April 8th, 2008 (7:39 AM).
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    Chapter five of Just A Brother is now up.

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    Old April 12th, 2008 (10:22 PM).
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    Have both prologue and Chapter One up for Destiny's Tricks

    This is a parody fic dealing with all kind of things relating to journey fics and the aspects of Pokemon fanfiction overall. Join Destiny and her two friends as they travel through Sinnoh and many unexpected things happen. Jokes and breaking fourth walls are guaranteed.

    Everything's going down.

    And also, could be a chance the next chapter on "Nothing, Everything" will come either April 15 or April 16th. ^^
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    Old April 13th, 2008 (10:51 AM).
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    The Abomination Lives!!!
       
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      I-Lust of Feral Twilight is finally up. So, if anyone has the time, could you critique what I've got so far.
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      Old April 13th, 2008 (11:05 PM).
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      Introducing The Po-Ke Cen-Ter, a one-shot song parody!

      No plot, no character development, no description - just a song parody and the loopy dance that accompanies it!
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      Old April 15th, 2008 (8:09 PM).
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      Chapter Eight of "Nothing, Everything" is here!

      Chapter Eight
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      Timmy and Lucas' crusade on finding Bunny is getting more fierce as both slowly found some mess Jenny did. The two girls, on the other hand, are closer to finding the criminal but also met an old friend of Bunny's...
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      Old April 19th, 2008 (11:00 AM).
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        New chapter in Poke Special Manga: DP. Thus begins the 4th Volume!
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        Old April 26th, 2008 (4:56 PM).
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          The fourth chapter of my fanfic "Kanto: The Disputed Frontier" is up. It's heavily influenced by actual biology, but that doesn't mean that any of the scientific concepts described are completely accurate. I hadn't really worked on it since early March, but I've managed to find time now.
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          Old April 29th, 2008 (4:08 PM).
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            My one-shot for the fan fiction challenge.

            Also, seeing as I've finally got myself some spare time, the second chapter of Operation Main Frame should be appearing late '09 at the earliest.
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            Old April 30th, 2008 (5:14 PM).
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              Ack, after eight months of semi-writing troubles Chapter six of Fable is alive :D! It's still unbetaed so smaller errors will be fixed in the coming days, but I really wanted to post it so much after all this time :3
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                Chapter 39 of Poke Special Manga DP is finally up! In this chapter, Diamond, Dawn, and Pearl learn how they are connected to the Lake Trio. However, when Cyrus shows up to confront them, what will happen? Find out in Poke Special Manga: DP!
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                Old May 3rd, 2008 (5:30 AM).
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                  Hi everyone if your a fan of my fanfic: Jack's pokemon adventures then you should know chapter 6 is finally up! in this chapter Jack and Megan try to make there escape from the Team Elemental base. Also one island in the sevii islands is under attack. Also something dramatic happens at the end of this chapter - or does it? -
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                    I made two Minamo (May and Kelly) fan fics, one in the making. Tell me what you think!
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                    Old May 4th, 2008 (8:50 AM). Edited May 4th, 2008 by Bay Alexison.
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                    Chapter Nine of "Nothing, Everything" is here!

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                    Bunny and Jenny managed to solve the clue Ernest gave them but before they managed to read the next one, they was a delay. Also, both Jacob and Brenda have uneasy feelings that night...
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                    Old May 5th, 2008 (3:46 AM).
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                      Hi everyone chapter 7 of Jack's Pokemon adventures: The Kanto Saga is up! In this episode Megan meets the top coordinator, Laura and finds a clue to jack's whereabouts. Also marco and Moltres are back and have destroyed Pallet Town! If you wanna read the link is in my siggy :D.
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                      Old May 5th, 2008 (11:31 AM).
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                        Chapter Two of "Destiny's Tricks" is here!

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                        First Footsteps! Generic Designs, Crushes, and Chosen Ones!


                        We join our heroine Destiny as she meets with one of her friends and also another teenage boy that she already has a crush on. Also, at the beginning Lugia has a hard time trying to find her...
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                          Chapter two of Operation Main Frame has just been posted.

                          What's that? Four months after the deadline? I must be improving.
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                          Old May 6th, 2008 (8:53 PM).
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                            Old May 7th, 2008 (5:20 PM).
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                              http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=133633
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                                Hey guys, I finished up chapter four of my fan fiction story.

                                Krome finds the forest that Blaine mentioned and while he was in a trainer battle with a bug catcher a giant prehistoric Venasaur appears. Later on, Blaine sees that the solarbeam was from a Venasaur, he swam over there with his Gyarados. When he arrived just in time, he saw that the Venasaur was his creation ten years ago.
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                                  Ok after a while chapter's 8 and 9 of my fanfic are up. The link is in my siggy :D
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                                    Hey guys I made my first fan fiction story, it's called Aaron's Poke'mon Adventure, I hope you guys read it.
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                                    Old May 8th, 2008 (12:26 PM).
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                                      Hey guys, I finished the first chapter to my fan fiction story.

                                      SUMMARY: A boy named Aaron gets a Bulbasaur as a starter. He catches a Pidgey. When he enters Viridian City, he sees a gang of people walking in the poke'center. Inside the poke'center while Aaron heals his Pidgey from a battle, he accidentally bumps into a man wearing an army suit. The man appears to be Lt. Surge, a leuitenant for Team Rocket, and the gang appears to be Team Rocket. Aaron and Lt. Surge has a battle but gets stopped by Giovanni, the Team Rocket leader.
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