pokemon battelers

Started by BurstX January 31st, 2008 5:09 PM
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BurstX

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ok this is my first comic ever...so here we go you better love these and if you dont too bad ^_^

POKEMON BATTELERS



Character Bios:
COMICS:


CUSTOM MAPS
Spoiler:
batteler base
Eight Island
Contest Hall


credits:
the spriters resource
sweetsmoochum from pokecharms
pokesho

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hm...
as I said through PM before,

work on these:

1. Chariters
2. Plot
3. Effects
4. Layout

k?

I'm sure this will be atleast interesting. ^^
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Work on grammar. Periods, capitalizations, spelling.
Stop using periods. It really gets annoying after the third speech bubble in one panel with '...'

Don't mix styles. Styles are like Vinegar, Oil, and Water. Fr/Lg stays with Fr/Lg, RSE stays with RSE, and MD stays with MD. They don't like to be mixed up. That includes maps, sprites, etc.

And 'Battelers' is actually 'Battlers'.

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BurstX

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...i like the use of md sprites...and idont really plan on scratching all the sprites of pokemon i need...also i spelt it wriong for a reason that you will find out later in the comic...um as for the use of fr/lg sprites...other than places i wont be mixing ows again...so i think that solves all the problems

[NovaPirate]

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You purposely put periods right there, didn't you.
Anyways, you still haven't said anything about the periods or grammar. Are you going to address those?

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hm...

Your chariters bios are just sprites,

but since you sent to the new full ones through PM,
I have to say the bio text needs to be bigger. I could barely read it.

Keep up with the comic, Burst.
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...you have to click them...then it goes to the bio...but i will make the text bigger...also comic 4 will be out by the end of the weekend

EDIT:...um sorry for not getting the comic up...its not like people care...T.T well if you peopl;e want you can make a character for the comic...also you have to click the sprites to go to the bios...

...ok im making a new post because i feel like it yell at me later
heres
comic 4 now we're getting somewhere...sort of

EDIT: HERES COMIC FIVE Pokemon Battelers
also edited bios are up

[NovaPirate]

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Did you seriously say 'That's the cool way to spell it.'
Could you at least have come up with a reasonable excuse? Maybe make it a joke/pun that reoccur (like the bad guy/rival/random person/Pokemon comes and asks the same question).

And you need to explain why he took him to the Batteler HQ. 'Like, I just decided to take you to our Secret HQ for kicks. Because we have nothing better to do.'
Also, if you're going to spell Battlers wrong, I suggest yo spell it wrong all the time.

Work on your capitalizations some more as well.
Good luck!

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ok guys heres an update on the battelers

blue batteler specializing in water types, he has a wailmer mantine, and mudkip

red batteler, specializing in fire types, he has magmar and torchick

black batteler, specializing in ghost and dark types, he has banette shuppet and duskull

yellow batteler, specializing in electirc types, she has pikachu and magnazone

the pink batteler, specializing in normal types, she has delcatty porygon and aipom

the pokemon battelers headquarters
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to tell you the truth, the battlers are almost similar to the power rangers. XD

but they're neat, can't wait for the next comic.
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...lol they are actually based off the power rangers...yeah i was bored
Check out Abby's FC.

I asked if you wanted me to fix your OWs for the battlers.
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I think the comic is really good and quite funny. But there is one problem. You told us there is a reason for the mistake in the word Battelers. And the reason just looks like you thought, "Upps. I made a mistake, better make up a cheesy way to cover this up now!!!!" And it doesn't really please the reader, it's a bit dull. And I don't really like the Battelers. But there is one great thing. The backgrounds. Did you make that base yourself! Cos it looks really good.
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BurstX

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I think the comic is really good and quite funny. But there is one problem. You told us there is a reason for the mistake in the word Battelers. And the reason just looks like you thought, "Upps. I made a mistake, better make up a cheesy way to cover this up now!!!!" And it doesn't really please the reader, it's a bit dull. And I don't really like the Battelers. But there is one great thing. The backgrounds. Did you make that base yourself! Cos it looks really good.
...okay i cant tell you the importance of the spelling of battelers, but i did make the base, and also i will be posting anycustom maps i make fyi...oh and you may not like the battelers now but just wait...*evil laugh*
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it's more of a filler eppy,
and I don't think you gave cody any real interaction with the battlers that should of happend instead of
"Hi Cody!"
*One healing-poke'mon sesson later*
"Bye Cody!"

I was kinda dissappointed.
But I can't wait for the next episode. :D
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well hes really not supposed to get a big interaction with them, hes only supposed to vaguley know them...i know it all sounds weird but it will eventually make sence...or atleast i hope...

ok now since cody is goin to eight island heres the map


the tent is a contest hall