pokemon battelers Page 2

Started by BurstX January 31st, 2008 5:09 PM
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you may want to work on the rock formation's floor patten it kinda shaky.
and the tent seems too small for a contest hall, yyou may want to find and apporiate building.
other than that, it looks like an awesome island :D
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You might want to tile with the one pixel breaks between them. That's what I do. Then it's always lined up. The only problem is that it then takes ages to put it back together.

I suggest using either the grand contest hall or a regular one. Maybe a battle tent. I'm also not to happy about the Dialga and Palkia sitting there. No mixing styles.

Once again with the Battelers, he could've sat down and talked with them, maybe gotten a present Pokemon or handy item or Batteler Fone or something. Yes, I spelt Fone wrong to match Batteler >.<

You don't just have a stranger brought in, give him food and then send him off. You talk for a while. Eat together. You Battelers have no manners *tsks*

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very interesting.. but can you work on the sprites a liitle please.
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BurstX

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You might want to tile with the one pixel breaks between them. That's what I do. Then it's always lined up. The only problem is that it then takes ages to put it back together.

I suggest using either the grand contest hall or a regular one. Maybe a battle tent. I'm also not to happy about the Dialga and Palkia sitting there. No mixing styles.

Once again with the Battelers, he could've sat down and talked with them, maybe gotten a present Pokemon or handy item or Batteler Fone or something. Yes, I spelt Fone wrong to match Batteler >.<

You don't just have a stranger brought in, give him food and then send him off. You talk for a while. Eat together. You Battelers have no manners *tsks*
ok im not adressing the batteler problem...but the map is important, heres why

1. the dialga and palkia on the building is a replica of the time space tower from movie 10
2. the shack like thing stays, youll see
3. dont bother me with batelers, they will be in chapter 7 reguarding chapter 6

i hope that solves our problems...oh one more thing

DONT BOTHER ME WITH STYLE MIXES, ILL DO WAT I WANT...maybe eventually ill go all fr/lg but not yet

EDIT: i tried fixing the map...hopefully you ike it better

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Have a fixed size for the squares, some are different. The easiest would be 16x16, obviously, but 4x4, 8x8, 2x2, etc. would work as well.

The umbrellas seem out of place, and on some of the houses on dirt you can see where there used to be grass.

What did you even change?

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I know it is very hard to see what you even changed and this episode is really dissapointing. But your comic is still good, I'll keep reading though.
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Great, that's what a great auther does! Listens to the problems then fixes them, for that I will rate this comic 8/10 for now.
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A bit of a filler comic, not much to comment on. Nice use of custom graphics though.

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...sure...like i always say give me credit...and give pokesho credit too

also heres another bio i did

duke hes a fisherman that lives on one island, hes been a big brother figure for cody but latly hes been a real jerk...i wounder why?

well its here pokemon battelers issue eight New Recruit
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Yay! New character!

Hm... I wonder if they could go beat a gym or something...?

anyway, nice comic to tie things up, nothing really extremely special.

But I wonder what ever happend to Ashley...? *Cough*
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