Pokemon Neo: Hoenn Armageddon

Started by Pogiforce-14 July 12th, 2004 7:05 PM
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I finally got the prologue done for my Fan fiction which I spoke of a few months ago. Those of you from the Pokemon Armageddon rp from a while ago may recall my saying that it was material for this very fan fiction. However, due to the violent nature of said fan fiction, Instead of posting it here I will provide a link where it can be found. I hope that those of you who decide to read it will enjoy reading it as much as i enjoyed writing it. It still isn't done, but it is in progress. here is teh link to "Pokemon Neo: Hoenn Armageddon".

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1960018/1/


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it's fine with me (afterall, it's a darkfic... and Codename: ASHURA was like much much worst) except the onometopia actually took something out of the scene... and evil people doesnt' necessarily have to swear to look evil but meh...

tried to submit review but then I need an account (which I don't have)... hmm... but I did read it. ^_^;
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Yeah, I did figure i might have been over doing it with Maxie. i'm going to try to tone him down come his next appearance.


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Yeah.But If I recall, you said you liek to do harm to your characters. :D

By the way, are still under a dare, or are you using the pink out of habit now?


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still under dare. this is lasting WAY too long..

i did. but normally my charecter is a pokemon, not human. but the RP did casue me to start having a rocket laucher around. quite helpful, lets me shoot Sparks and Shiney when they try to get me to do something girly.
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Cool! anyway, I have some ideas of how to start the first chapter, but I'd like some input as to how the readers think it should start. i'm pretty good at Prologues and endings, but it's everything in between that i'm usually quite sketchy about. :D


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get used to it. Shiney's the second in command, so i can't really get rid of him, which makes it that much more fun to use him as target practice.

and you didn't know I'm the daughter of the devil? hmm.. in that case, you probably didn't know that when not under a dare I have the Heartless insigna from Kingdom Hearts as an ava...
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I recall you using an image of a flygon as an ava. Do you know what my ava is?
(Getting offtopic, but not caring right now.)


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Sorry to double post, but I figured no one would notice this notice form four pages back. :\ I just wanted to lert everyone know I've finally uploaded Chapter 1 of my fan ficiton to fan fiction.net and have also modifiied the prologue as per teh influence of the reviews i've currently recieved. The link to the story can be found in the first post to this topic.


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Thanks guys, I appreciate that. :D And FT, you could write if you wanted to. :D Now if you guys ahve anything you'd like to see or not see, in terms of plot points or presentation style, just let me know and I'll see if can do it.


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personally, keep to your own style. as far as plot points, if you choose to introduse Eclipse into the story, I think it'd suit her if she was finishing destroying something when Seth first noticed her. Just a thought though.

And I don't really have the dedication to write a fan-fiction, I'm better in dinosaur based documenteries..
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I had plans on introducing Eclipse. She will still have her black flygon, but I can't have the whole team black like it was in the rp, it just wouldn't be practical. :\ sorry. And there will be plenty of expolosions. i didn't rate it R for violence and tehn not have any explosions in it. :D


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I was also wondering if it I would be permitted to raise your character's age to aroudn seventeen or eighteen. :\ it would seem more appropriate with teh adult theme I'm using.


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