I don't like that style either, but you can't really expect to tell people these things and expect them to listen to you, you know? Especially when you hold no particular authority in these forums whatsoever.
It's a nice drawing. I like the concept. The only thing I'm bothered with is that, your character looks like he's shorter than Jake. And Jake is well, 12.
Otherwise, the expression is very believable in that first drawing and I like how you keep things simple, including the coloring. Keep it up. :)