Originally Posted by Dark Quill
This takes place around a green Sandshrew, who has named himself Dark Quill. He seems peaceful enough on the outside, untill he spots a human and challenges them to a battle. Yes, he can speak, and has many other unique traits as well.
Dark Quill was captured by Team Rocket while young, and had been their lab rat for 18 years. For the past year, he had been living a free life which had been long delayed from him. He made friends, and even found love, but that was when the hand of man striked.
His girlfriend was shot and killed brutally by her owner, causing Dark Quill to let himself drown in his sorrow.
Eventually, Dark Quill evolves into a Sandslash (That'd be him in my avatar), which is when the fun begins.
Dark Quill decides to test his newfound strengths and abilities on the residents of Cerulean City. A very vicious and gory onslaught ensues, which ends with the city being evacuated, while the rotting corpses and blood-stained Sandslash give farewell to the sunset, and Dark Quill realises the magnitude of the task he has vowed to undertake.
He declares war against the human race.
Brutal comment: Thank you for telling me this story. Now I don't have to go read it myself.
Seriously now...
When a summary reveals way too much about the story, the readers lose interest in the story because the readers simply know too much. Read the sticky thread about Pokemon Fanfiction Writing Guide, and look under the summary section for more details about what I mean...
K I feel so compelled to add something in that guide against human-speaking Pokemon... changing canonic materials, such as Pokemon language, can't happen just for the heck of it people. Where's the explanation for this mysterious power to speak human for the Pokemon? >>;