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Old August 21st, 2009 (9:26 AM).
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    Seriously people. I go to sleep for the night and I find three new page plus a Writing Contest. Cool!

    This place is so volatile at times...

    I just got a barebones idea for my contest entry. It is now just a thing to overcome my current writer's block and forgo a barbecue and party I was invited to for Saturday.
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    Old August 21st, 2009 (9:33 AM).
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    I think I'm going to have a girl as the main character for once... XD

    This is what I'll be including in my fic:

    lego radishes wearing bikinis and drinking orange juice an

    Add a snowy background and a sad death scene
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    Old August 21st, 2009 (9:49 AM).
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      My fic character is as usual, a boy. Not because I'm sexist but because I'm not good at emulating a woman's thoughts.

      Also, hooray for temporary avatar change. ^____^
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      Old August 21st, 2009 (9:52 AM).
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      My fic character is as usual, a boy. Not because I'm sexist but because I'm not good at emulating a woman's thoughts.

      Also, hooray for temporary avatar change. ^____^
      My character won't be speaking or thinking XD Only actions will show her for who she is...

      This makes her look disembodied and unnatural, but also there is a history behind this, but I think I'll only mention it briefly.
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      Old August 21st, 2009 (10:13 AM).
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        My characters are going to be two Pokémon. I'm not going to bother with genders or species until I need to. :D

        I have to work around a couple of things with the prompt (and beat up Writer's Block), to create a story where time is more of a meta-setting than an abstract element or a plot device or a character of sorts. But at least I think I can have something done for tomorrow.
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        Old August 21st, 2009 (10:15 AM).
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        Oooo good, I've just thought of something proper for time. I think it will be my character's only line, and be at the very end... Of course, time will be mentioned throughout though too.
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        It would have to be. A third of your score is based on use of the prompt. :P

        I'm not sure whether I'll enter yet, although the fact that it doesn't have to be tear-jerkingly sad means there's a chance of it. :P
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        I think I'll do a story about...
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        a pokémon in the first slot of some kid's party in one of the pokémon games, where the kid decides he's too old for pokémon and stops playing. Over the following years, the pokémon (who is now stuck indefinitely in his pokéball) keeps faith in the player that one day he'll pick up the game again and the two will return to being "a perfect team, just like before," even if that never happens. It's time-centric, a bit melancholy, and gives me some wiggle room to decide whether I want to end on a positive, negative, or neutral note.
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        Old August 21st, 2009 (4:02 PM).
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          I think I'll do a story about...
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          a pokémon in the first slot of some kid's party in one of the pokémon games, where the kid decides he's too old for pokémon and stops playing. Over the following years, the pokémon (who is now stuck indefinitely in his pokéball) keeps faith in the player that one day he'll pick up the game again and the two will return to being "a perfect team, just like before," even if that never happens. It's time-centric, a bit melancholy, and gives me some wiggle room to decide whether I want to end on a positive, negative, or neutral note.
          txteclipse, you break my heart, you know? You made me remember my old GSC party, love and win; and my Quilava with those cute little eyes... *cries*

          I wish you the second best of lucks; I am going in for the contest too after all... :D

          I think I'll do a story about...
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          two Pokémon, long time friends who meet in the longest day in the year because they realize they are becoming older, and no longer have the time to be together and do pal stuff like they used to do in their youth; so they decide that now that their lives become even more busy with mates, battles, humans, and all sort of responsibilities, they'll enjoy a final homage to the days and the power of freedom.
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          I must read this. And txteclipse's one. And Solovino's.
          And a number of others, but I probably won't enter myself.
          Or will I? Not sure. Undecided.

          I hope that the rest of you enjoy it, though!
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          Old August 21st, 2009 (6:24 PM).
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            I wish all of you PC veterans and people who are new to fanfiction writing good luck in the contest!

            I have an idea but I'm not willing to reveal it just yet. I was planning on turning it into a novel but i couldn't find a suitable plot.
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            Old August 22nd, 2009 (1:22 PM).
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              Mine has a "what a twist" moment, that goes into full circle with the story, and yet, I am still able to relate it to Time, and for that matter Pokemon. XD
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              Old August 22nd, 2009 (2:25 PM).
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                Mine is essentially trying to put up a good face against an unavoidable Downer Ending (no, I won't link to TVTropes...). Not much cruel or happy either, it is more like, "you should really ponder whether this will actually matter at the end".

                Sorry to hear about your W'sB, SparklingDragon.
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                  I suck. I have writer's block and haven't written a word.
                  Writer's block is a... myth.

                  Just apply yourself. Sit down, start randomly typing something that sounds good but you know is ********, and before you know it you'll have a direction to take it. Just try, and if anything you'll have something to post for us to read and enjoy.


                  I'm letting the character carry the theme of time in my piece. The ending is the breaker/maker, so we'll see how I present it.
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                  Old August 22nd, 2009 (11:08 PM). Edited August 22nd, 2009 by Miz en Scène.
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                    Writer's block is a... myth.

                    Just apply yourself. Sit down, start randomly typing something that sounds good but you know is ********, and before you know it you'll have a direction to take it. Just try, and if anything you'll have something to post for us to read and enjoy.


                    I'm letting the character carry the theme of time in my piece. The ending is the breaker/maker, so we'll see how I present it.
                    Well actually, Writer's block is a state of mind brought on from poor planning, stress, fatigue and a general lack of ideas. I'm not saying anyone who gets writer's block is stupid because I get it frequently but the point is that it's real, in a way...

                    Also, I'm doing something like a Ghost story. (kind of) I'll post the first paragraph here for you guys to enjoy first. It's a but cliche but don't worry that's not the main focus of the story.

                    I haven't fixed it yet so expect mistakes:
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                    Weather forecasts for that night predicted heavy rain and violent thunderstorms. The storm was destructive enough to cause property damage and as such had been labeled as a sudden tropical typhoon. It had come as a surprise to most meteorologists who had predicted a warm summer that year. The storm materialized directly above the Hoenn region spanning tens of kilometers and caused shelf clouds to appear at the borders. Travel was impossible in between the Mainland and the Hoenn Islands and most flights or boats were grounded that night. The Hoenn region was completely cut off from surrounding regions. Even the phone lines and satellite telecommunication were disrupted completely due to some form of electromagnetic disturbance.


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                    What is your favourite region in the Pokemon Universe to write in? Or do you come up with an entirely new non-canon region or city?
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                      Well actually, Writer's block is a state of mind brought on from poor planning, stress, fatigue and a general lack of ideas. I'm not saying anyone who gets writer's block is stupid because I get it frequently but the point is that it's real, in a way...
                      I didn't mean to say it was completely made up, but it is a typical excuse used by people that think not being able to come up with an idea after five minutes is a complete writing-killer. It's not. Writer's block is a combination of things, like you said, and as long as you have any one thing (an idea, inspiration, the drive, or a way to spin words), than the others will come.

                      I just wanted to give him a rough pat on the back and send him in fighting rather than say "That sucks, man". I want everyone involved! =D

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                      Also, I'm doing something like a Ghost story. (kind of) I'll post the first paragraph here for you guys to enjoy first. It's a but cliche but don't worry that's not the main focus of the story.

                      I haven't fixed it yet so expect mistakes:
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                      Weather forecasts for that night predicted heavy rain and violent thunderstorms. The storm was destructive enough to cause property damage and as such had been labeled as a sudden tropical typhoon. It had come as a surprise to most meteorologists who had predicted a warm summer that year. The storm materialized directly above the Hoenn region spanning tens of kilometers and caused shelf clouds to appear at the borders. Travel was impossible in between the Mainland and the Hoenn Islands and most flights or boats were grounded that night. The Hoenn region was completely cut off from surrounding regions. Even the phone lines and satellite telecommunication were disrupted completely due to some form of electromagnetic disturbance.
                      Looking good. I'm always up for a good ghost story if it's presented in the right way, and Pokemon has some great ghosts, both Pokemon and legend, to work with.

                      Keep your eyes out for overwriting and just get the message across: a simple story with a message gets across far more than an epic with no real ending.


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                      What is your favourite region in the Pokemon Universe to write in? Or do you come up with an entirely new non-canon region or city?

                      I've only played red/blue and diamond/platinum, so I know of Kanto and Sinnoh the best, however when I was watching the anime (not to long ago), I didn't mind the Hoenn series, so have a certain affinity for that.

                      I'd rather not create a new region [just yet] though, just because there is so much to pick on from the current regions.
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                      What is your favourite region in the Pokemon Universe to write in? Or do you come up with an entirely new non-canon region or city?
                      Even though my favorite region is Hoenn, I have been writing loads of Sinnoh stories, so you can say my favorite region to write is Sinnoh. Just the people, myths, and culture there are very interesting.

                      I have come up with a made up region next to Hoenn in the original NE, but I forgot what I called that region because I deleted the old version and can't find my notes. XD I do remember though having the cities be like Paris and London. Also, one city I base off of Big Bear, California. Took a family trip there and that place is so beautiful, even when there's rain. XD;
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                      Old August 22nd, 2009 (11:41 PM).
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                        New bolded topic???? Off to the Index!

                        What is your favourite region in the Pokemon Universe to write in? Or do you come up with an entirely new non-canon region or city?

                        It would be Johto, hands and legs up, if it wasn't because I already came up with not only one, not two, but three original regions. The first two not very developed, but the third one... ugh. Geography? Covered (simulated with the Sim City engine). Weather? Covered (annual isothermal and wind-vector analysis to make sure I don't screw with placing a rainforest beyond a desert...). Culture? European, mostly, a schema for picking city/town names and tree names for Professors, a quick model for inland trade commerce, Legendaries that fit in and a railroad system.

                        Oh wait... Do we get to brag here or we just mention in passing? I just finished cleaning up some b☣tard PHP code so I'm kinda trigger-happy...

                        Other than that, Johto as I said. There is something about Gen II that always called my attention. Maybe the whole Ilex Forest thing because it's so close to Goldenrod that it's alsmot a given that it has to draw an unnatural attention.
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                        Sinnoh. It has Cyrus. And solovino, your sig is floating. I can't read your post!
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                          Weirdness has kicked in... the sig was CSS-tested long ago and I even took advantage of a small detail in the CSS spec to make sure it wouldn't flow off-limits. If cleaning your cache doesn't help, then someone has been messing around with the code of the PC forum system... or worse, you're using IE.
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