My favorite poem...

Started by John Denver July 25th, 2004 6:44 PM
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Age 35
War n' stuff
Seen October 2nd, 2006
Posted May 14th, 2006
8,290 posts
19.7 Years
I wrote this poem a while ago out of the spur of the moment...I really like it...

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A sweet bird sings to all who hear
And choose to think of yester-year
Of months ago
And weeks gone past
Will burst asunder far too fast

The whitest dove will always perch
To those who think of family first
To those who think
Conceidely
In them a thousand vultures be

A blue jay's feathers shown with flare
Are things all birds would love to wear
The ones who say
"That bird is fake"
To him? Ignore!...for heavens sake

A Raven's dark and shadowed hood
Is certainly mis-understood
He doesn't not mean
To send you back
He just thinks he looks good in black

Some birds are good and some are bad
And some give lessons to be had
To find the bird
That's surely thine
You have to open up your mind


Hope you like it
Age 31
Tennesse -_-
Seen September 28th, 2013
Posted May 23rd, 2005
828 posts
19.7 Years
Oh Dakota! This is so beautiful! I have but four corrections. Concietedly was mispelled and misunderstood does not have a hyphen. The phrase "heaven's sake" lacks an apostrophe. The verse "He doesn't not mean
To send you back" is a double negative, best said as "does not mean". That's it though... Sorry for the correcting you... I tend to do that... But oh... It's magnificent... Simply maginificent...

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Age 32
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Seen October 24th, 2004
Posted October 24th, 2004
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Magnificent!It's very good.I like it so much.


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