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Old May 4th, 2008 (8:15 AM).
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again, I'm bored, but I hope you'll like this poem, and this time, it rhymns.


I can see the water,
flowing down the river,
if love comes to a teenager,
then out comes a love letter,

so if you receive a love letter,
hide it well from your mother,
if caught, she'll tell your father,
dead comes your lover...


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Old May 4th, 2008 (3:11 PM).
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xD

That's great.

Although, I think my mom would have a go at my boyfriend rather than my dad.

I love eet. <3
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Old May 8th, 2008 (11:58 AM).
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    Me too! Nice poem, i liked it!
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    Old May 10th, 2008 (12:37 AM).
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      The peom is great <3 The first two lines don't really relate with the poem though...
      But this really teaches us a lesson, lol.
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      Old May 10th, 2008 (2:50 PM).
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      The poem is funny yet good. Your father will kill your lover XD
      I doubt my dad would do that, unless he killed a family relative or something.
      Funny yet excellent.
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      Old May 11th, 2008 (3:25 PM).
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        Aww, that's sweet :3 You're a good writer~
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