Pokémon - Nightshade Blossom (Handrawn)

Started by Rouenne June 20th, 2008 11:23 AM
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Seen July 4th, 2009
Posted July 4th, 2009
29 posts
15.4 Years
Well, since the other topic faded awy I decided to repost it here. Especially since is kinda hard to let others know about it on deviantart. Well you may not remember it but it's a doujinshi made of the origina series and the main cast. Well, may not be the best but is worth a view. Check it out =)


Chapter 1:

Warning

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Title
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Chapter Title
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Chapter End

Chapter 2

In Progress...
Age 27
Southeastern Wisconsin
Seen December 30th, 2011
Posted August 5th, 2008
312 posts
15.7 Years
You're a great artist, but this doesn't really connect with the reader. In the first 8-9 pages, I didn't have a clue what was going on. And the rest seemed really long for a conversation. You show emotions well, though. And I can understand the characters. All I think you should do is wrap up ideas and dialogue more quickly to make room for some needed action.

I'll be gone July 19-25 at camp.