GP's Art Page 9

Started by = GPR = July 18th, 2008 9:59 AM
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BurstX

Some old fart

Age 29
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New York
Seen January 23rd, 2023
Posted September 28th, 2014
1,056 posts
15.8 Years
hmmm, im really liking the new colors for milodos, it makes the shading flow a lot better.

honestly you can add more and more shdaing to your lance sprite but its biggest flaw is the anatomy. his right arm looks really weird and the fact that your colors look so alike its really hard to tell where the bottom of the arm attaches, it also seems really fat compared to the other arm. no for the left arm.

not only is it to shart and skinny compared to the other arm but the hand seems weird to me, not really sure why it just does...


yea thats all i got, peace
Seen June 24th, 2014
Posted February 19th, 2011
317 posts
14.8 Years
Ahem, I'm requesting Credit for my Trophy Gyrados... I did make the sprite. P.S. if you put it under the little legal thing at the bottom (Forgot what its called), put it as


Gyrados Trophy is copyright Darkwiz787, Doomed.&.dreaming and .|Dark|Wiz|.

All three because I dont know wich name ill be remembered by xD Also Im getting a name change tommorow or a few days sooo thats why .|Dark|wiz|. is there aswell.

Thanks in advance
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Age 32
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Posted August 3rd, 2015
655 posts
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even better, i put directly under the sprite!

Sorry about that! The credit got lost in the shuffle... due credit is given where it is owed... and you shall definitely recieve credit!

It should be there now!

Again, sorry about that... thanks again for letting me use that sprite! I still love it!
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Age 32
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Posted August 3rd, 2015
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BTW, thanks KageX. I'm taking your crit into account and am going to redo the arm... remember, this is my first scratched trainer... i'm not that good with people yet...

Anyhow, a little update: New Scratch & Recolor of scratch

Yellow Ribbon

Pink Ribbon

Ribbons may be used w/o permission, give credit though.

Keep Spriting
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Vannah☆

Spriter

Age 29
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Illinois, USA
Seen August 6th, 2016
Posted July 15th, 2016
424 posts
14.5 Years
Before I say anything else, what you've done here is great. Amazing, even. =3 I especially like Mr. Snorex and the Lance/Gyarados animation. Oh and the cockatoo. xDDD However, as for the fakemon, while some are alright, there are a bunch of factors that really need some fixing. It's hard to scratch sprite, I know. xD Especially when you don't even have a reference to look at. But, nevertheless, some of the designs (alone) are a little unoriginal and etchy. Humsaw, Sparkrust, and the ants for example, need a new fresh look. (If I have time, I'll make a Humsaw if you don't mind. xD) They look too 2Dish in some places and the shading is almost backwards (on Humsaw at least) Sparkrust is too big. xD Too much shading in there if we're talking about a potential fakemon. And on some of these, the anatomy is way off. When making a scratch, I've always found it helpful to look at a drawing of an animal or creature that the scratch most represents and an official sprite at the same time (for size, color, and shading references.) Overall, Lance is great, and everything in this collection you've made is fantastic. Keep up the great work!



Sherry
Spriter from 2008-present.




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Age 32
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Posted August 3rd, 2015
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Before I say anything else, what you've done here is great. Amazing, even. =3 I especially like Mr. Snorex and the Lance/Gyarados animation. Oh and the cockatoo. xDDD However, as for the fakemon, while some are alright, there are a bunch of factors that really need some fixing. It's hard to scratch sprite, I know. xD Especially when you don't even have a reference to look at. But, nevertheless, some of the designs (alone) are a little unoriginal and etchy. Humsaw, Sparkrust, and the ants for example, need a new fresh look. (If I have time, I'll make a Humsaw if you don't mind. xD) They look too 2Dish in some places and the shading is almost backwards (on Humsaw at least) Sparkrust is too big. xD Too much shading in there if we're talking about a potential fakemon. And on some of these, the anatomy is way off. When making a scratch, I've always found it helpful to look at a drawing of an animal or creature that the scratch most represents and an official sprite at the same time (for size, color, and shading references.) Overall, Lance is great, and everything in this collection you've made is fantastic. Keep up the great work!
Wowzer! Thanks!

You may do as you please with humsaw... i despise that sprite... it's has FAIL written all over it! As for the ants, they are very old, and have not been touched in more than half a year... i probably could go back and redo them... and sparkrust... that was just a shading experiment gone WRONG!!! I could probably go back and fix him too... although i think sparkrust is a lost hope since it isn't that original...

I think the ant's are original enough... well, at least torchant is... i know that their anatomy is WAY OFF... like i said, those were some of my first scratches... and i havent gone back to them...

As for looking at drawings, i don't have any of sparkrust or the ants... i made them up off the top of my mind in paint... but humsaw, i have some really rough skeches...

Thanks for the liking on my gyarados ani... I LUV it too... it was my VERY FIRST animation you know... ^_^

and Mr. Snorex... that's my teacher Mr. Snoreck... his eyes are really like that! One is higher than the other! I do exagerate it though...

Thanks anyways! Your responsiveness and encouragement is greatly appreciated! Also, good job on the crit!

Keep Spriting!
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Age 32
Male
Zombieville South Carolina
Seen June 10th, 2012
Posted May 18th, 2012
387 posts
16 Years
Like the banette fools thing lol looks neat. Kinda scratchy but the concept is really great. Um quick question. Im struggling making GIF animations with gimp...... Any chance you use gimp and could walk me through it? If not its fine. Love your sprites and everything. And you are really helpful to the community.
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Age 32
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Posted August 3rd, 2015
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SytheXP... thanks for the comment, first off... it's greatly appreciated...

Secondly, thanks for the constructive criticism!

Thirdly, thanks for the pun... "it's kinda scratchy..." because it's a scratch! ^_^ No, i know what you mean... the shading is definitely a bit square, and the outline is a bit jagged as well... but still, thanks!

Anyhow, i'll talk to you elsewhere 'bout gif...

Anyhow, here is my May Pixel Art entry... i think it's wonderful... maybe a bit over done on the diveting... but i wanted to try something different...

Spoiler:

"Our World is crying"



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Age 32
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Zombieville South Carolina
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Posted May 18th, 2012
387 posts
16 Years
I LOVE IT 0.0 the shading looks good the only part that bothers me is one of the petals looks a little funny. Good luck...... ^_^ and NP about the comments. And I just noticed the pun =P lol
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Age 32
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Zombieville South Carolina
Seen June 10th, 2012
Posted May 18th, 2012
387 posts
16 Years
I hope you dont mind I edited it for you lol, well its only a portion to show you plz dont be mad at me. Also I circled the area so you can make the corrections you see fit, you may not even see it necessary but I made it a little bit more round.

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Zombieville South Carolina
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Posted May 18th, 2012
387 posts
16 Years
Fox deleted my last post, I thought it was constructive I guess I wasn't constructive enough. I hope this one is better lol. The chao looks nice. The shading is fairly near perfect however the anatomy seems off (I know its a chao and its supposed to be short and fat) but I think you should slim it up a little bit. As for your other work with the petal it looks great as I have mentioned countless times. The petal thing isn't to noticible Im just prone to finding small impurities and it seems a little un natural. Can't wait to see a revised version of it and what you have in store for us in the future.
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Phantom Dusk Plot and Story: http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?p=4678023#post4678023


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Birding Extraordinaire

Age 32
Illinois
Seen September 5th, 2015
Posted August 3rd, 2015
655 posts
14.9 Years
I'll do the chao later...

I made something new! I first started with girafarig's body... cut off the head... and scratched a new one... then i went in and redid the legs, so they weren't all knoby... then i scratched the mane and tail! I made my own shading... and voila! (there's two versions... and the gray mane ones are shinies...)

Rocinante (Wild Horse Pokemon)
Ground Type

Wild Rocinante roam in tight herds, keeping an eye out for one another.
These Pokemon are extremely loyal and will carry their trainer on their
back, no matter how far.

I also have once again redone Spinum's shading... this looks the best yet, in my opinnion...
"In a world of chaos, the picture is one small rectangle in which the artist can create an ordered universe."
~ Charley Harper ~

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Age 32
Illinois
Seen September 5th, 2015
Posted August 3rd, 2015
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Rocinante doesn't really look like a Pokemon... It doesn't have any abilities. It's just like a horse. Try making it more unnatural.
Snorlax doesn't either... except his obsesive sleeping and eating... nor does bidoof... he's a beaver...not very wowing...

But no, it's all good ^_^

Rocinante is ground type, a fast one for that matter... you don't see to many fast ground types. he can learn a whole slew of ground type attacks, as well as many normal type, rock type and even a couple steel and dark ones...

He's solid, maybe not overly impressive, but he's solid... like a linoone or a raticate... he's pretty much just there to fill space in your pokedex... and to look pretty! ^_^

Thanks for the comments though HFI!

Jackson, how would you recomend me changing the tail? I am having a bit of difficulty with it... i like the pose, but i can't work the outlining on the far left, nor the shading in the back...

BTW, i made a quick edit... but i don't like the teeth...

Gyarados with it's mouth closed...

Thanks everyone!

Keep Spriting!
"In a world of chaos, the picture is one small rectangle in which the artist can create an ordered universe."
~ Charley Harper ~

Age 32
Male
Zombieville South Carolina
Seen June 10th, 2012
Posted May 18th, 2012
387 posts
16 Years
I'll do the chao later...

I made something new! I first started with girafarig's body... cut off the head... and scratched a new one... then i went in and redid the legs, so they weren't all knoby... then i scratched the mane and tail! I made my own shading... and voila! (there's two versions... and the gray mane ones are shinies...)

Rocinante (Wild Horse Pokemon)
Ground Type

Wild Rocinante roam in tight herds, keeping an eye out for one another.
These Pokemon are extremely loyal and will carry their trainer on their
back, no matter how far.

I also have once again redone Spinum's shading... this looks the best yet, in my opinnion...
Hmm I don't like spinum to much he just frightens me Id be scared to run into a wild one. Anyway I wanted to coment on Rocinante. I love the concept and the shading. However there are 2 well 3 problem areas for me. the first 2 are the front legs. They still appear knoby...... 3rd would be the tail. It needs to be rounded slightly. Shading is great and it is a nice original concept. I like it a lot. Still scared of Spinum though.
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Phantom Dusk is back in production with loads of modifications. Will be updating soon! -2012

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Birding Extraordinaire

Age 32
Illinois
Seen September 5th, 2015
Posted August 3rd, 2015
655 posts
14.9 Years
I'm noticing now that Rocinante's far right leg looks kinda crooked and broken... i'm gonna have to redo that... as for the tail... again... i'm not sure how to work that... i'm not sure what scytheXP means by rounding it... in the far rear? near the tip... or the butt? As for the legs... i can go back and fix them up... i'll smooth em out...

Thanks to everyone who posted on him!

A little joke i made...
Diglette!
Spoiler:

I know, it's not that great... i made it in like ten minutes... i just thought everyone would get a kick out of it!

Take care everyone!

Keep Spriting!
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Age 32
Male
Zombieville South Carolina
Seen June 10th, 2012
Posted May 18th, 2012
387 posts
16 Years
I ment the top tip of the tail it looks like it makes a triangle sorta, sorry that I wasn't clear lol. It probably needs to be brought down by 1 row of pixels and that should most likely fix that (Hope that was understandable)
My Threads:
Phantom Dusk Plot and Story: http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?p=4678023#post4678023


My Sprite Thread:http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=179083

Phantom Dusk is back in production with loads of modifications. Will be updating soon! -2012

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Age 30
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Your Mother
Seen June 29th, 2010
Posted May 29th, 2010
2,796 posts
17.3 Years
A little joke i made...
Diglette!
Spoiler:

I know, it's not that great... i made it in like ten minutes... i just thought everyone would get a kick out of it!
XD

Anywhoo, that's actually really good, especially for a quickly made sprite. The shading, for the most part, makes sense, except for that first segment on the ground. It's shaped nicely, as well. I love the teeth. Teeth are hard to do, especially if you're doing that many at so many different angles.
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Posted April 21st, 2010
179 posts
14.2 Years

Jackson, how would you recomend me changing the tail? I am having a bit of difficulty with it... i like the pose, but i can't work the outlining on the far left, nor the shading in the back...

I really don't know. Maybe just make it longer and skinnier like a real horse's tail? It looks like a bunch of short hair, that is really awkward.
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Pokémon exDeltaSpecies Creator

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Posted April 5th, 2011
231 posts
14 Years
Wow, you put a lot of work into a lot of these. You The little details are easily noted.

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XD

Anywhoo, that's actually really good, especially for a quickly made sprite. The shading, for the most part, makes sense, except for that first segment on the ground. It's shaped nicely, as well. I love the teeth. Teeth are hard to do, especially if you're doing that many at so many different angles.
Yeah, the teeth took some time... i'm not really a fan of the shading, but if you think it looks ok, besides the bottom of the first half, then you would probably know better...

I ment the top tip of the tail it looks like it makes a triangle sorta, sorry that I wasn't clear lol. It probably needs to be brought down by 1 row of pixels and that should most likely fix that (Hope that was understandable)
yeah, i'll round that down... thanks.

Nice sprites! The Cody is cute

You have a lot of talent keep it your really improving
Isn't he... Thanks for the comments...

I really don't know. Maybe just make it longer and skinnier like a real horse's tail? It looks like a bunch of short hair, that is really awkward.
It's being whipped around the other away, in a clockwise position... it's entirely natural... it is just outlined and shaded a bit awkwardly... Thanks for you critism though...

Wow, you put a lot of work into a lot of these. You The little details are easily noted.
Thanks for noticing those little details...
nice gyrados collection there.

Quadiggins made me lol
Constructive Critism please...

Sorry guys that i'm so down... but Cody died a couple days ago in an accident... i just can't get over it... you all know how much i loved him...

Thanks for your remarks, responses, and criticism... i appreciate it...

Keep Spriting
"In a world of chaos, the picture is one small rectangle in which the artist can create an ordered universe."
~ Charley Harper ~