Hey, Aqua! I say, quite like the story you have so far. ^^ Sorry if this review’s short, but it’s so far what I think of this story and also playing catch up. ^^;
One of the good things I love about this fic is the way you portrayed the Pokemon’s emotions in it and also so their personalities. For instance, love Freesk (he’s so cute! Why does he have to die? ;_;), love that Zangoose (he’s crazy! XD), and also Furega.
Speaking of her, love her interactions with Freesk and Kevin. Haha at first she’s a bit fuzzy about them but then trusts them more. Also, really love her evolution scene. Seriously, love how you portrayed her feelings during the evolution. Best one I’ve seen in a while. ^^
The only criticism I can give is the scene when Kevin let Freesk out to find Fuega, you didn’t really give another scene where Kevin and Clare couldn’t find both Fuega and Freesk. That makes me wonder if both of them became worried over the two Pokemon or not. That’s minor, though.
Again, liking the story so far. Interesting you’re doing a trainer story more on the Pokemon’s POV. This fic has potential. :) Well, hope to do a better review next chapter!