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Old August 6th, 2008 (11:26 AM).
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    I currently write for a local band intitled, iamthequarantine.
    I'm not that good, but they can't write at all.
    This is a song I wrote for them.
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    Its time I stopped hiding, My patience subsiding
    I’ll let it pass over.
    And now I Think I shouda’
    Lived a new one, For a little bit longer.
    I hate my paranoia.
    I think I shouda’, Ended it sooner.
    Its much less harder
    When you gamble, not learning their names.
    I think I shouda’ met a new one.
    A little earlier in the game.

    Ohh, my paranoia.
    It starts a new one, an unexpected problem.
    People are trying to get me.
    It sounds a little bit cliché.
    I remember the faces from my past.
    I turned every corner searching for a dagger,
    To stab me in the back.

    This emotion is heavy,
    We both know that I’m not that strong.
    I might as well collapse.
    I live to worry now don’t feel sorry.
    Its beginning to fight for control.
    Its madness inside and out.

    I wouldn’t say that I’m going mental.
    Its just another self induced battle.
    If I get out alive after this one.
    I have no choice but to sign up for another.
    My brain makes these decisions for me.
    These people don’t make it any better.

    Ohh, my paranoia.
    It starts a new one, an unexpected problem.
    People are trying to get me.
    It sounds a little bit cliché.
    I remember the faces from my past.
    I turned every corner searching for a dagger.
    To stab me in the back.
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    Old August 8th, 2008 (2:51 AM).
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      Nice stuff! The last paragraph doesnt strike me as well as the rest, but good job!
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