Look at these sprites, aren't mines neat?

Started by Tialgo August 14th, 2008 8:14 AM
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Tialgo

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Germany^^
Seen May 20th, 2010
Posted October 27th, 2008
51 posts
14.9 Years
Welcome to my Sprite thread^^. Here u can see my Sprites. Wouldn't you think, they are complete? Then give me a order ^^. Wouldn't you think, im the one who has everything? Than tell me a new category i can make :D

Trainer







Pokemon:








Newcolor:



Bags:





Other Stuff:


[img]http://img3.imagebanana.com/img/uvz6kmqy/14.gif[/img]
(Credit for that cranky dance goes to Kagex, sorry i thought it were free to use)
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Seen November 25th, 2011
Posted November 10th, 2011
209 posts
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...Default white is good when used with a light grey or blue shade. But anyways...

The trainers are awesome. A few outlining and shading errors (the one with the white t-shirt needs a slightly darker outline), but, overall good.

On the pokemon, shading and outline errors again. I know you should use not just black for outline, but only on the lighter areas, or use a darker outline for the dark places. Light comes from the top left, not just left, but that's not that bad. On the metal man, shading has too much contrast, and it's outline is weird. Look at pictures of humans and animals to find out there anatomy, then use that in your spriting. the Horsea developed line has pillow shading, like I said the light needs to come from the top left. Shellos are nice, I like the cat eared one.

Sorry if it's a lot of criticism, but I'm just trying to point out your errors to make you better. Overall, you show potential and I think you can get much better.

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Birding Extraordinaire

Age 32
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Seen September 5th, 2015
Posted August 3rd, 2015
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The Shellos are very nicely done! I commend you on the color choice, as well as the shading.

The trainers are also very nicely done... Froslass Maniac & Riceeman stole all my thunder though...

As for the fakemon, they need work in the shading, outlining and definition areas. The top brown guys with the Flygon looking tails, as well as the brown and purple guys under them are very "lignt" in coloring, and in the shading, making them look 2D. As for the mutant alien ant thing and the whispy grey guy... are they supposed to be pokemon? I dont mean to sound rude...sorry. They are just different. I'll wait for your reply to ask a couple more questions about those...

Anyhow keep up the great work! You do great trainer sprites... so don't stop! Hope to see more!
"In a world of chaos, the picture is one small rectangle in which the artist can create an ordered universe."
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Tialgo

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Seen May 20th, 2010
Posted October 27th, 2008
51 posts
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My newest work, it don't look very good (Cause i made this in 20 minutes^^), but it looks don't like an accident :P.


My second newest work, the Teacher from GSC, good, or? With icons if you wanna use it^^.

@gp_arts39
They aren't supposed to be Pokémon, the black thing called "Heartless" and the grey thing called ... I don't know in english^^. But they're from a Game called Kingdom Hearts, I though it were funny if I make them in Pokémon-style^^. Thanks for the comments and critic.

@all
sorry, but the outlines aren't my best works^^. I can't do them good.

Eletj

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Posted March 12th, 2010
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15.5 Years
These are really cool! I escepially like the Fakemon, the Kingdom hearts guys and the trainers.BTW the grey things are called Nobodies. Anyway, keep it up.

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Birding Extraordinaire

Age 32
Illinois
Seen September 5th, 2015
Posted August 3rd, 2015
655 posts
14.9 Years
the bags are very nice. as for the new trainers, the overworlds are great, while the sprites arent to bad for being made in 20 minutes. theres just some inconsistancies with shading.

great job!
"In a world of chaos, the picture is one small rectangle in which the artist can create an ordered universe."
~ Charley Harper ~

Tialgo

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Posted October 27th, 2008
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So, before I post the sprite I want say that i'm really sorry KageX, I thought it were free to use and in the future i'll ask you (if you make more of this).
So, and now i want say that u can use this Heroine I made for a Game, she isn't ready now but tomorrow she will. Here she comes - My Cowgirl!^^

PS: If theres anything to critism, plz tell me i'll make it better^^

Yume Tsuki

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er.. i see a heroine fishing from fire red/leaf green :x back sprite of the riding rapidash is a bit bad :X try to put the legs at the sides of rapidash because it now loos like it stands on rapidash (poor pokémon)

if i look at the pose of the trainer i see it's really the heroine of fire red/leaf green

Tialgo

Hey, wanna buy a E?

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Seen May 20th, 2010
Posted October 27th, 2008
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14.9 Years
lawl sorry I er I made her yesterday midnight^^. Looks she better now?


Update
I've got good news - I make Tilesets what look like the Wild West^^. Because of that i made the Heroine, but i don't make a hack, so you can use it for a Game or Hack if you give Credits.



And here are some Maps with the tiles...

testmap 1


testmap 2


testmap 3
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Chicago, IL
Seen January 18th, 2018
Posted January 18th, 2018
128 posts
14.9 Years
Heroine
The only thing I see wrong here is...the backpic...her arm looks like it isn't connected to the body, her hat looks odd, and that one out stuck hair just looks like its in thje wring place...

Test Map
This is better then what I could do...but there needs to be more shading and the doors look kinda weird...
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And the rest went riding on.

In that cardboard box down the street.
Seen February 13th, 2011
Posted December 28th, 2009
802 posts
17.5 Years
Stay away from pillow shading :]
I would recommend recoloring existing tiles, THEN doing minor edits to existing tiles, THEN doing major edits to tiles, THEN scratching your own.

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Birding Extraordinaire

Age 32
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Posted August 3rd, 2015
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I LOVE the rapidash rider! that's so cool! i have tried repeatedly to make my ow riding a gyarados ow, like in my avitar, but alas... i am no good! anyhow the tile set is nice, not very "pokemonish" if that is what it was supposed to be. Then again, ive been wrong before! ANYHOW, keep up the great work!
"In a world of chaos, the picture is one small rectangle in which the artist can create an ordered universe."
~ Charley Harper ~

Yume Tsuki

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I LOVE the rapidash rider! that's so cool! i have tried repeatedly to make my ow riding a gyarados ow, like in my avitar, but alas... i am no good! anyhow the tile set is nice, not very "pokemonish" if that is what it was supposed to be. Then again, ive been wrong before! ANYHOW, keep up the great work!

ever tried to take a PMD sprite gyarados? those PMD sprite really help with OW's