Rob-120's Comix Page 2

Started by Rob-120 August 21st, 2008 2:22 PM
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Chicago, IL
Seen January 18th, 2018
Posted January 18th, 2018
128 posts
14.9 Years
hmmm...yeah your right about the whole metal shadow bzzt thing, a freind at my school pointed that out...

Hey! I like the classic text bubbles...I changed them from round to squarish already, maybe I'll change them again later when it really gets meesed up and, that text is just the normal set text and the font is the smallest I could get it without it killing itself (i think, I'll see if I can fix the font a little better)
~Back after who knows when


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Seen January 18th, 2018
Posted January 18th, 2018
128 posts
14.9 Years
UPDATE

~OMG! I ACTUALLY HAVE FREINDS FROM SCHOOL HELPING ME WITH MY COMIXS >.< !!!

~Two new comics for Random Comics are coming out soon so watch for those

Employee News

~FREIND 1!!! (A.K.A. DUDE WHO WRITES STORY) I NEED A STORY LINE WRITTEN UP BY...ummm...SOON!!!

~Freind 2 (GUY WHO WRITES JOKES!) keep up the good work...
~Back after who knows when


Seen October 13th, 2008
Posted October 12th, 2008
1 posts
14.6 Years
Nice use of sprites Connor... But yeah... the plot needs more work.
Some artistic pointers from a fellow friend?

1) When you start a story, always have a background! The story needs a foundation to build off of. With out that. It's screwed.

2) PLOT HOLES!! A big boo-boo for story writing. If you tied the story up more properly, it would be action pack. Add rising action and falling action, like something that puts you at the edge of your seat, and end the comic short to something exciting to make the people poop in their pants to see the next comic.

3) You used Microsoft Paint, didn't you... I HIGHLY recommend you NOT to use MS Paint unless you're drawing it with a tablet and are just making a short picture. Seriously... use FireWorks MX. It's a heck of a lot better. Trust me.

4) IT'S NOT FUNNY! I don't know if it's supposed to be funny. But every great-heart felt-gets-your-girlfriend-tear-eyed story has a little humor in it. I know I'm being a jerk BUT IT'S funny... to Seiji that is...

5) MAKE THE FRICKEN CHARACTERS MORE BELIEVABLE! Always with characters you want to base them off of real people... unless you're godly at making people from the top of your head. The characters have to pop out of the page (not literally or all the characters and friends that I drawn in my comic to do every whim I wanted them to do would kill me with swords, knives, lances and what ever I drew them with.).

So pretty much follow that and your fine. I just created an account on this forum to see how you're doing ;)

Ciao (Dissapears in a dramatic mist of smoke, as the crowd gasps at my amazing exiting pose with two fingers sticking out in a V shape standing for victory as the sounds of my foot steps leaves the stage.)

Oh yeah... You misspelled "friend" D:
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Seen January 18th, 2018
Posted January 18th, 2018
128 posts
14.9 Years
To sam: *bows* I am but a small amobea compared to you and your art skills...I will heed your advice...

To Seiji: What? That was funny but confusing at the same time...and you wrote in like...a run on...its going off to the side of the page on my computer >< !!!
~Back after who knows when


= GPR =

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Age 32
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Seen September 5th, 2015
Posted August 3rd, 2015
655 posts
14.9 Years
lol... nicely done... this is long... grueling... and i did laugh a bit... but im digressing. the speech bubbles were a bit mishped and misplaced, and a couple of times i was a bit lost... but it was very good never the less! great job...

i say from now on we name foxhound captain negativity! that seems to be all he posts!
"In a world of chaos, the picture is one small rectangle in which the artist can create an ordered universe."
~ Charley Harper ~

Seen November 15th, 2008
Posted October 25th, 2008
1 posts
14.6 Years
Connie, I normally wouldn't be writing to you. But here's the message: Ya gotta step up the plate. U wanna no what happens if u dont. LP becomes a sorority group, that's what! swear, man, I have recieved several grim preiews of our fate. There are no words to describe this. Okay there r but not on a pokemon website. anyhoo,Ya gotta step up the plate.

By the way got ur reply. -.-' Genius, man. PURE genius.
Seen January 3rd, 2011
Posted December 25th, 2008
832 posts
14.9 Years
lol... nicely done... this is long... grueling... and i did laugh a bit... but im digressing. the speech bubbles were a bit mishped and misplaced, and a couple of times i was a bit lost... but it was very good never the less! great job...

i say from now on we name foxhound captain negativity! that seems to be all he posts!
Sorry, but Matt's negativity is pretty acceptable, especially in this case.

"Very good" didn't even pop into my head when I was reading this. It's a mess, to be honest. Why people like you give smart people like Matt nicknames like that is beyond me. <_<;
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Chicago, IL
Seen January 18th, 2018
Posted January 18th, 2018
128 posts
14.9 Years
thx seiji and...Mobile TSK...WTH is all I got to say -___- i mean...are you trying topick a fight O.o ...because, thats just stupid, I can't get pissed off anymore by what you say ^^...I have found peace and tranquility...wich to find all I have to do is...EAT PIE ^(^.^)^ !!!
~Back after who knows when


[NovaPirate]

And the rest went riding on.

In that cardboard box down the street.
Seen February 13th, 2011
Posted December 28th, 2009
802 posts
17.5 Years
Rob-120 you have shown repeatedly your incapability to take criticism. I am sorry, but if you're going to post comics on the internet, you're going to have to deal with people who actually can tell what a good comic is. Foxhound is not negative, he is only brutally honest.

Now, onto the actual comic. Your Sonic (Or whatever it is) comic is a disorganized and haphazardly placed comic with a style blend. Do not mix styles/generations of sprites in the same comic. Unless done perfectly, it looks horrible. You have a God/Author character, which is an amazing cliche and an excuse for you not to have a plot. Which you do not have. Not a respectable one, at least.

Your Kirby comics I did not bother to touch. Maybe later. Your Pokemon comics are also a generation blend. Must I reinforce this? DO NOT BLEND GENERATIONS. You also seem to have a knack for bad grammar and bad plots. I'm not sure if this comic was intentionally horrible, but it fails nonetheless. Here you have a generic Pokemon comic with generic Pokemon sprites and plot, with no humor whatsoever (Therefore taking any hopes of it being a good spoof comic OUT) and yet you seem to like arguing that it is better than everyone elses.

Frankly, listen to advice, read a few good tutorials, develop a nice plot, DON'T BLEND GENERATIONS, stay away from horrible recolors, and start over. Please don't go back to your Random Comics, and don't quit, just keep on doing as I said until you either become a better comic maker or move on. Now have a nice day.

Gaah.
This signature is under construction.
But dun worry.
It will most likely stay like this FOREVAH.
Because I'm nowhere near as active as I used to be.
-[NP]
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Chicago, IL
Seen January 18th, 2018
Posted January 18th, 2018
128 posts
14.9 Years
no see...what I do is..I take your criticisum...then I kill every other word you said so what I got out of what you said just now was...

~listen to advice, read a few good tutorials, develop a nice plot, DON'T BLEND GENERATIONS, stay away from horrible recolors~

Edit: Lol...you know whats funny is I didn't blend generations in my pokemon comic >< Get your eyes checked out man...(unless you count how I'm useing the national pokedex from Diamond and Pearl when I'm useing Fire Red overworld sprites...I think)

UPDATE

~ Because of hateful disgust to my Random Comics...Ashura's story will be in a seprate comic and the Advanced sprites will be in another comic...the god/author complex is going to stay with the Advanced comic because it goes with the
plot dam it ><


Employee news

~THOMAS!!! GET YOUR BUTT ON THAT STORYLINE!!! ACCORDING TO THESE PEOPLE MINE SUX!!!
~Back after who knows when


Age 32
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Seen May 16th, 2011
Posted October 28th, 2010
5,058 posts
18.4 Years
lol... nicely done... this is long... grueling... and i did laugh a bit... but im digressing. the speech bubbles were a bit mishped and misplaced, and a couple of times i was a bit lost... but it was very good never the less! great job...

i say from now on we name foxhound captain negativity! that seems to be all he posts!
I say we call you captain stfu. Because all you seem to post is spoon fed crap.

I mean, this thread is 78% spam, 20% poor comics, 2% me.

I find it funny, how anyone who is a decent critic, is automatically labeled a bad guy. Yet you've failed to mention the idiots spamming the forum up with pure crap, which is against the rules.

And yes Rob, NP is right, you did mix styles. You;ve got MD overworlds, FR/LG overworlds and then R/S/E overworlds.
Seen January 3rd, 2011
Posted December 25th, 2008
832 posts
14.9 Years
~ Because of hateful disgust to my Random Comics...Ashura's story will be in a seprate comic and the Advanced sprites will be in another comic...the god/author complex is going to stay with the Advanced comic because it goes with the
plot dam it ><
Regardless of whether it goes with the plot, it's still an old, overused joke that stopped being funny quite a few years ago.
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Seen January 18th, 2018
Posted January 18th, 2018
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I say we call you captain stfu. Because all you seem to post is spoon fed crap.

I mean, this thread is 78% spam, 20% poor comics, 2% me.

I find it funny, how anyone who is a decent critic, is automatically labeled a bad guy. Yet you've failed to mention the idiots spamming the forum up with pure crap, which is against the rules.

And yes Rob, NP is right, you did mix styles. You;ve got MD overworlds, FR/LG overworlds and then R/S/E overworlds.
you know dude, just because you can do that, doesn't mean you have to, if you don't like it say so, say whats wrong and stop posting here. And you know what Fox Hound, I see I've messed up O.o...I think...I have no idea -___- but dude...if you can tell the diffrence there..wow...cause I truly can't...you guys are just picky...O.o have you ever heard that stupid girl song that goes "Nobody's perfect blah blah blah" well I'm not perfect -___- deal...
~Back after who knows when


Seen September 29th, 2017
Posted September 29th, 2009
1,613 posts
17.6 Years
Look, I liked it, for a sprite comic, it is pretty good. Also, just to say it....

You don't need to be a first degree ******* to be a critic, constructive criticism is one things, being like you guys are being is a... Mockery of how real criticism should truely be.
Age 32
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Posted October 28th, 2010
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Look, I liked it, for a sprite comic, it is pretty good. Also, just to say it....

You don't need to be a first degree ******* to be a critic, constructive criticism is one things, being like you guys are being is a... Mockery of how real criticism should truely be.
If you actually liked the comic, then had the nerve to give us lip, I'd call you the mockery to criticism. I mean, Jesus, do you think film critics are paid to be extra nice even if the film sucked? Course not. Why should it be any different for comics?

Mr. Epic

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Posted December 22nd, 2010
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15 Years
I mean, this thread is 78% spam, 20% poor comics, 2% me.
and 0% Kyen :classic:
Yeah okay the comics are pretty bad but come on. I would say people begin posting helpful criticism instead of arguing!:rambo:
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