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Old August 28th, 2008 (3:14 AM).
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    Well, I had started with the fanfic series 'Sinnoh Saga' and tried to utilise my first attemt and make it worth reading. It's got some twists- but, the problem is, that, no inputs have been made and it seems I am floundering in the storyline-up to now. Please give advice here and reviews in the actual fanfic thread. Suggestions?

    I'll put in a gist of the storyline as soon as I get back.
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    Old August 28th, 2008 (5:30 AM). Edited August 28th, 2008 by Buoysel.
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    Blue Angel and myself don't count? We both posted in you fic. I will tell you this: Your formatting is all messed up. And what happened to chapter 2?

    Go read the Grammar stickies and some good Fan Fictionals. When you read somebodies' fictional. Pay attenation to how they format the paragraphs. If you're lucky, you may pick up a thing or two on how to describe and make scene transitions.
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    Old August 29th, 2008 (1:39 AM).
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      Thanks. You both do count.
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