Pokepark Sprite comic

Started by obLonG August 29th, 2008 3:28 PM
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obLonG

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Seen July 18th, 2012
Posted January 12th, 2010
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14.7 Years


THE HIATUS IS OVER!
IMPORTANT:I am looking for an assistant with the comics.Pm me if you want to sign up.
This is my first sprite comic,whaddaya think?Isn't the banner awesome?And please comment if I need work done or just want to comment about my comic:
These comics are rated from G to pg-14

Title Page

1: Brendan and Handy.

2: Not Goodity

3: Hated Love

4: The hand, the bitxx and the axxhole

5:This is not a Plot Device

6:Stupid backpack,love is for kids

7:Rise of demon may

8:Beams and Pee

Filler: Point of view

9: He looked

10: They're shiny

11: Discussing, Disgusting

12:Suspense and Crossbreeding

Filler:Important Generation Rape

13: Slap of Bitxxiness[Pg-13]

14: The Anti-Heroes [NEW]
Ya I'm back!After a long time of being bored and doing nothing deh obLonG has returned.I hope all of you out there can forgive me for suddenly leaving like that.Again.

You can stand and pee.Sure just go ahead and tinkle.Have some fun.Knock yourself out for all I care.Heck,pee all over your bathroom if need be.Just don't stand and poop.

Who Am I?
I AM


Pokepark, my old comic. Is now dead. And it will stay dead. Instead I've moved on to a new project.



My new video series(demos available for feedback, click the link to go to the thread):


The spinarak egg has been made by -DefaulT

obLonG

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Seen July 18th, 2012
Posted January 12th, 2010
73 posts
14.7 Years
In pokemon Ruby you start out in a moving truck,so hes in a moving truck playing ping pong on the computer with a giant floating glove
Ya I'm back!After a long time of being bored and doing nothing deh obLonG has returned.I hope all of you out there can forgive me for suddenly leaving like that.Again.

You can stand and pee.Sure just go ahead and tinkle.Have some fun.Knock yourself out for all I care.Heck,pee all over your bathroom if need be.Just don't stand and poop.

Who Am I?
I AM


Pokepark, my old comic. Is now dead. And it will stay dead. Instead I've moved on to a new project.



My new video series(demos available for feedback, click the link to go to the thread):


The spinarak egg has been made by -DefaulT

obLonG

Now for half price!

Seen July 18th, 2012
Posted January 12th, 2010
73 posts
14.7 Years
He's just on the computer(The box thingy hes sitting in front of)playing ping pong with the hand.
Ya I'm back!After a long time of being bored and doing nothing deh obLonG has returned.I hope all of you out there can forgive me for suddenly leaving like that.Again.

You can stand and pee.Sure just go ahead and tinkle.Have some fun.Knock yourself out for all I care.Heck,pee all over your bathroom if need be.Just don't stand and poop.

Who Am I?
I AM


Pokepark, my old comic. Is now dead. And it will stay dead. Instead I've moved on to a new project.



My new video series(demos available for feedback, click the link to go to the thread):


The spinarak egg has been made by -DefaulT

obLonG

Now for half price!

Seen July 18th, 2012
Posted January 12th, 2010
73 posts
14.7 Years
The hands not really a computer.Its a living breathing hand(breathing not actual feature)just read comic 2
Ya I'm back!After a long time of being bored and doing nothing deh obLonG has returned.I hope all of you out there can forgive me for suddenly leaving like that.Again.

You can stand and pee.Sure just go ahead and tinkle.Have some fun.Knock yourself out for all I care.Heck,pee all over your bathroom if need be.Just don't stand and poop.

Who Am I?
I AM


Pokepark, my old comic. Is now dead. And it will stay dead. Instead I've moved on to a new project.



My new video series(demos available for feedback, click the link to go to the thread):


The spinarak egg has been made by -DefaulT

obLonG

Now for half price!

Seen July 18th, 2012
Posted January 12th, 2010
73 posts
14.7 Years
Thanks and no its just a normal hand.
Ya I'm back!After a long time of being bored and doing nothing deh obLonG has returned.I hope all of you out there can forgive me for suddenly leaving like that.Again.

You can stand and pee.Sure just go ahead and tinkle.Have some fun.Knock yourself out for all I care.Heck,pee all over your bathroom if need be.Just don't stand and poop.

Who Am I?
I AM


Pokepark, my old comic. Is now dead. And it will stay dead. Instead I've moved on to a new project.



My new video series(demos available for feedback, click the link to go to the thread):


The spinarak egg has been made by -DefaulT

obLonG

Now for half price!

Seen July 18th, 2012
Posted January 12th, 2010
73 posts
14.7 Years
The titles are also written in normal text right above the Comic but I'll fix the titles in the next comic.I also got the Title page up
Ya I'm back!After a long time of being bored and doing nothing deh obLonG has returned.I hope all of you out there can forgive me for suddenly leaving like that.Again.

You can stand and pee.Sure just go ahead and tinkle.Have some fun.Knock yourself out for all I care.Heck,pee all over your bathroom if need be.Just don't stand and poop.

Who Am I?
I AM


Pokepark, my old comic. Is now dead. And it will stay dead. Instead I've moved on to a new project.



My new video series(demos available for feedback, click the link to go to the thread):


The spinarak egg has been made by -DefaulT

obLonG

Now for half price!

Seen July 18th, 2012
Posted January 12th, 2010
73 posts
14.7 Years
Thanks man.And i'm sorry that I took so long to get the 4th comic up.Its just that I had this play I had to perform.
Ya I'm back!After a long time of being bored and doing nothing deh obLonG has returned.I hope all of you out there can forgive me for suddenly leaving like that.Again.

You can stand and pee.Sure just go ahead and tinkle.Have some fun.Knock yourself out for all I care.Heck,pee all over your bathroom if need be.Just don't stand and poop.

Who Am I?
I AM


Pokepark, my old comic. Is now dead. And it will stay dead. Instead I've moved on to a new project.



My new video series(demos available for feedback, click the link to go to the thread):


The spinarak egg has been made by -DefaulT

obLonG

Now for half price!

Seen July 18th, 2012
Posted January 12th, 2010
73 posts
14.7 Years
It was the originaly going to be the pc hand but I changed it to the Sinnoh trainer card hand cuz thats more manipulatable to show what its doing or how it feels.And comic 5 is up.Do you think I should make some supporter banners?
Ya I'm back!After a long time of being bored and doing nothing deh obLonG has returned.I hope all of you out there can forgive me for suddenly leaving like that.Again.

You can stand and pee.Sure just go ahead and tinkle.Have some fun.Knock yourself out for all I care.Heck,pee all over your bathroom if need be.Just don't stand and poop.

Who Am I?
I AM


Pokepark, my old comic. Is now dead. And it will stay dead. Instead I've moved on to a new project.



My new video series(demos available for feedback, click the link to go to the thread):


The spinarak egg has been made by -DefaulT
Age 30
Male
Your Mother
Seen June 29th, 2010
Posted May 29th, 2010
2,796 posts
17.2 Years
... I still don't really understand alot of this. Okay, so you have a hand as a character, I get that, but...

Okay, the 2nd makes sense for the most part, but then what's with the weird transition between 3 & 4? The mudkip chasing the person does nothing really funny or important, it's just kinda thrown in there. I assume it was just to set up for #4, but... it just seems like wasted potential, that could've been entertaining if it wasn't rushed through.

#5 confuses me also witth he masterball part, but... I'm not sure I want to know. XD

And, may I ask... what is going on with the backgrounds of random sprites? They're distracting from the actual comic, and look time-consuming. You could just use your time to make more comics, since I doubt anyone has a positive reaction to them. The first comic's layout looks nice, and the title doesn't distract from the comic. I suggest using that, it looks much nicer.

obLonG

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Seen July 18th, 2012
Posted January 12th, 2010
73 posts
14.7 Years
Thanks for the feedback and yes #3 was just a set up for #4.And you don't want to know the masterball meaning in #5.Trust me I didn't like it either.
Ya I'm back!After a long time of being bored and doing nothing deh obLonG has returned.I hope all of you out there can forgive me for suddenly leaving like that.Again.

You can stand and pee.Sure just go ahead and tinkle.Have some fun.Knock yourself out for all I care.Heck,pee all over your bathroom if need be.Just don't stand and poop.

Who Am I?
I AM


Pokepark, my old comic. Is now dead. And it will stay dead. Instead I've moved on to a new project.



My new video series(demos available for feedback, click the link to go to the thread):


The spinarak egg has been made by -DefaulT

obLonG

Now for half price!

Seen July 18th, 2012
Posted January 12th, 2010
73 posts
14.7 Years
A note to say that this comic is now on hiatus(as if it wasn't while I was gone.Heh)until further notice.Read my sig for details.
Ya I'm back!After a long time of being bored and doing nothing deh obLonG has returned.I hope all of you out there can forgive me for suddenly leaving like that.Again.

You can stand and pee.Sure just go ahead and tinkle.Have some fun.Knock yourself out for all I care.Heck,pee all over your bathroom if need be.Just don't stand and poop.

Who Am I?
I AM


Pokepark, my old comic. Is now dead. And it will stay dead. Instead I've moved on to a new project.



My new video series(demos available for feedback, click the link to go to the thread):


The spinarak egg has been made by -DefaulT

obLonG

Now for half price!

Seen July 18th, 2012
Posted January 12th, 2010
73 posts
14.7 Years
For those of you think I'm just sitting there trying to fool you,well you're wrong!
To show you what I'm working on I'm going to upload a sneak peek from time to time to show you anything new underway.

So sneak peek #1 away!:
Ya I'm back!After a long time of being bored and doing nothing deh obLonG has returned.I hope all of you out there can forgive me for suddenly leaving like that.Again.

You can stand and pee.Sure just go ahead and tinkle.Have some fun.Knock yourself out for all I care.Heck,pee all over your bathroom if need be.Just don't stand and poop.

Who Am I?
I AM


Pokepark, my old comic. Is now dead. And it will stay dead. Instead I've moved on to a new project.



My new video series(demos available for feedback, click the link to go to the thread):


The spinarak egg has been made by -DefaulT