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Old September 25th, 2008 (5:34 PM). Edited September 25th, 2008 by Game Master.
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Pokemon:Battle of the Elements
     
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    Hey Everyone!
    I'm starting a game called Pokemon Titaniun White.

    Starters: Charpeg, Vernam, Leafpaw
    Country:Innos
    Starts: Town of Shersan
    Proffesor Ake
    Mascot of game(ex. Diagia for Diamond) Chartitlian
    Ememy: Team Dyansty

    So what do you think?

    Update!
    When your character get lost in a new town, he is taught the way of the pokemon. One the Epha Cube is taken by a mysterious force causing all the legendary pokem to cominde causing chaos
    I'ts up to you to save the world!
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    Old September 26th, 2008 (2:38 AM).
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    I'm Right.
       
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      Chartitlian sounds weird and the fire starter probably shouldn't start with 'Char-'.

      Other than that, it sounds alright, I guess.
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      Old September 26th, 2008 (12:54 PM).
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        "Legendary fight" isn't really the best plot... You might want to improve it. Why would the Epha Cube cause it? Has it happened before? And why is it up to you? Surely, more experienced trainers, such as Gym leaders or the Elite 4, would be the best choice... You could always use the "chosen one" plot device, but if you do, you'll have to go into detail. Lack of an evil team sounds interesting, though.
        As a final point, you might want to rethink the names. The starter names sound too generic, and Chartitlian doesn't make sense and is too long (Pokémon names can be up to 10 letters long).
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        Old September 27th, 2008 (5:37 AM).
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          mm, no. not feeling right now. no costructive advice. can't think.
          this is practically a pointless comment but im not sure how to delete so sorry about that.
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          Old September 28th, 2008 (11:02 AM).
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          Pokemon:Battle of the Elements
             
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            Starters: Pickacu(I cant spell it), Vernam, Leafpaw
            Country:Innos
            Starts: Town of Shersan
            Proffesor Ake
            Mascot of game(ex. Diagia for Diamond) Darrceu
            Ememy: Team Dyansty

            So what do you think now?

            Update!
            When your character get lost in a new town, he is taught the way of the pokemon.
            The legendary Epha cube is taken. The Epha cube keep the world in Harmony. Team
            Dyansty take it to Sky Pillar and summons Darrceu pokemon of time and space.
            Mor updates later
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            Old October 3rd, 2008 (7:23 PM).
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              . do you mean pikachu ?
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              Old October 10th, 2008 (8:52 PM).
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                yes and look at my new thread it is better...this is closed
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