Pokémon Exterminators Page 2

Started by Decepticon October 2nd, 2008 6:51 PM
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Planet Earth
Seen September 14th, 2016
Posted October 18th, 2008
1,368 posts
17.5 Years
Episode 7 is up, also I fixed that one run on sentence in Episode 6 (I think)

@Con~: Thanks, but most of chapter 1 is already made so it will be the mostly the same as with the prologue; although I did end up taking your advice and edited some of the chapter 1 episodes so the text doesnt overpower the picture as much. (in afew panels of future episodes it was cutting off the characters so I changed it)

@ryushin5: thanks :)
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Where Giving Up Is Not An Option
Seen December 1st, 2014
Posted November 14th, 2010
947 posts
17.6 Years
I disappear for the better part of October from this forum and Exterminators comes back... the irony!

Would love to give a long winding review praising and deconstructing the comics, but I have no time this time, but will give some general comments...

Nicely done! I mean, it's the Exterminators we all know and love, but it's so shiny remade and the new characters you made yourself (Right?) is a nice change. I look forward to see how you change things this time around (If any happen). Go Exterminators! :D
Planet Earth
Seen September 14th, 2016
Posted October 18th, 2008
1,368 posts
17.5 Years
I disappear for the better part of October from this forum and Exterminators comes back... the irony!

Would love to give a long winding review praising and deconstructing the comics, but I have no time this time, but will give some general comments...

Nicely done! I mean, it's the Exterminators we all know and love, but it's so shiny remade and the new characters you made yourself (Right?) is a nice change. I look forward to see how you change things this time around (If any happen). Go Exterminators! :D
w00t, Matt Silver is back! I knew you'd show up eventually!

and kinda about the characters, I just edited the Brendan and May sprites so they arn't wearing headgear and edited Avatar's Wally sprite to make Rory!

Thanks for the comment Matt, I look forward to maybe a winding review, praising, and deconstructing in the future ;)

Sumomo & Kotoko

Seen February 14th, 2012
Posted February 14th, 2012
1,947 posts
18.8 Years
I really enjoyed reading what you have so far of this comic.

I agree with ArmyGuy that the text could be darker (hard to read).
You said you'd already take care of that, so its all good. ^_^


The only other problem I noticed was one or two spelling errors.
But we're human. Thats normal. Haha.


Great comic, put together very nicely. Great story line.
I look forward to reading what you have instore. =]