Destros Spriteys!

Started by Destrozone October 7th, 2008 5:20 PM
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Should the Slize evolution chain become water type?

Seen January 3rd, 2011
Posted December 25th, 2008
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Some of these sprites are just simple/unsual edits.

The lines on this one look sort of 2D. They should curve with the body, which they didn't here.


I don't even consider this a fusion, even though you took the fire from another Pokemon's sprite. I don't really like it; it just looks odd in general.


I can tell it's a fusion with Huntail and something. Interesting, but the placement of the wings could use some work.
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yeah i guess i should take off Murkio. it isnt all that good. And I will redo Darnine. Coonzry is supposed to have to have the lines like that. they are blood vessels. not lines. plus, coonzry is pretty amazing, and i know your totally jealous of it =). i will work on the first two, but coonzry will stay the same for now, until popular demand says i should change it. Until tomorrow, though, i cant do that. after all,im only 13, and i have a bed time. C u tomorrow
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yeah i guess i should take off Murkio. it isnt all that good. And I will redo Darnine. Coonzry is supposed to have to have the lines like that. they are blood vessels. not lines. plus, coonzry is pretty amazing, and i know your totally jealous of it =). i will work on the first two, but coonzry will stay the same for now, until popular demand says i should change it. Until tomorrow, though, i cant do that. after all,im only 13, and i have a bed time. C u tomorrow
Doesn't matter what the lines are. Blood vessels aren't two-dimensional.

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Birding Extraordinaire

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dont take off murkio! i thought it was one of your best ones! flosion is not to bad, he's a bit skinny, but i think it looks pretty cool! zaper is also not bad... you just need to work on the outline of his torso. i have to say though, bugrzy is maybe your best one! there's good form, shading, and even some scratching in it. yes, you can tell it's from a spinarak body, but you transformed it so it looks very nicely done!

Darnine's fire looks to copy pasted... you need to make it look more natural by blending it out... as for the other one of the legendaries, it needs work with the head.

you have seen to mastered the skill of recoloration. so that's a start. you also have shading down some what. you just need to work on your copy and pasting, then you will be able to edit better and make great fusions! Don't get discouraged!

Keep Spriting!
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Birding Extraordinaire

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oh... see! i couldn't even guess that it was a nincada body at first, even though i can totally tell now... but okay.

anyhow, down to murkio! you need to probably work on his arms, they seem mishaped. i actually like the wing location, i just think you need to fix his eyes, huntails dont look good... and redo teh shading by his "nose".

as for new darnine, he looks alot better, but the flame over his head doesnt look good at all! you need to have it connected, almost like a mane. why dont you try to scratch your own fire? it's worth a try, since copy/paste doesn't seem to work here...

Keep Spriting!
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Down to business GP.

1. The eyes on Murkio, they arent his
2. I'll get right down on editing them, though, as well as the arms
3. I will attempt to re-scratch(the fire was already scratched) the fire onto his head
4. Please check out the new darline. I personally dont think its better, but its a start

You know, i might just change Murkio some more, and put back on some arms. i will also revert back to the old darline, because the new one looks abit......heinous
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Well, As you can see by my newer versions, i am improving drastically with the aid of you master spriters. all i need is samsons advice now, and i will be on the path to spriting mastery!
Improved? Absolutely.
Improved Drastically? Abolutely not.

There's still numerous problems with the shading, and I suggest you work on them first.

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i do have to say that these are looking better!

darline 2 had a nice angle to her, but she had a funny looking head. darnine his looking much better. i like how you incorporated the fire like a mane.

I do not like murkio's new four eyed thing... it is alienish and doesn't seem very pokemon like...
...i advise you not to that...

The new darline's head is much better looking... but the water coming out of it's back does not look as good as the one on the darline 2.

It's your stuff, you don't always have to follow what other's say... other than that...

Keep Spriting!
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Yeah, I didnt say this yet, but that murkio turned out badly :( the Arm-like things didnt turn out good, and the eyes were an improvisation. As it says in the edit, i am working on him (and another scratch sprite!) so keep a look out in the original post for updates and news
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Yeah, I didnt say this yet, but that murkio turned out badly :( the Arm-like things didnt turn out good, and the eyes were an improvisation. As it says in the edit, i am working on him (and another scratch sprite!) so keep a look out in the original post for updates and news
What do you mean another scratch sprite? None of these are scratches; you're not fooling anyone.

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OK, seeing as noone is responding, admin, can you close this thread? I shall have to start a differnet one that will include buildings and other such things, as well as a plot and title screen snapshot
thanks alot...

all i ever do is try to praise you, help ya out a bit... we need to have a talk!
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Hoppyfred

Froggy Friend of Feebas

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Posted April 20th, 2009
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Aha! I have been looking for this thread, 'Greatest Spriter of our Time'. :P

EDIT: Whoops. You edited your signature.

:P Ah well, onto the criticism.


Darnine: Version 3.0 just owns the rest.

Darline: Version 3.0 is the best

Murkio: Alter the body position a bit, use the old version's arms on the new version's body, and either remove the wings or place them closer to its neck.

Fliosion: It seems that its head is coming out of its right wing...

Zaper: Shading on the arms looks different to the rest of body, like a different palette...otherwise good. Only realised it was a splice upon second glance.

Bugzry: Fine

Coonzry: Looks too much like Cascoon and Silcoon...unless it's meant to, in which case, not much point in using new sprite

Spizry: Fix palette / shading of head

Slize: Way worse then all your others...take it off :P


What do you mean another scratch sprite? None of these are scratches; you're not fooling anyone.
He almost fooled me :P


Buzry was an almost scratch sprite! why must you criticize me so? instead of saying, oh, you dont have any scracth sprites! why dont youjust say how im doing on the sprite THAT I JUST POSTED! if you wish to give me snide comments, then put them in the end of your message, so that i dont have to read them. yes, i know that i have not done any scratchs (excluding Buzrey, by technicality), so you dont have to state it. unless you have something to comment on, like shading that needs reworking, or some other SPRITE RELATED TOPIC, then I suggest that you bugger off!

This is why you dont make me angry! GP got one of these discussions as well!

So, heed my advice above, Mobile, and pick your side, Buggering off, or talking about something that matters, and then placing comments in the bottom, or pming me them!

As for the rest of you, I do not blame you for mobiles fault. you may criticize me in any form, so long as it isnt too off topic. Please continue posting your ideas/comments/improvements on this thread, and remember to keep on viewing this page! I would not have anything if not for all of you!

P.S. I shall be editing Slize a bit more to make it look less 2d, so Murkio will have to take a rest for awhile
But Burzy ISN'T a scratch sprite: it ALMOST is, but isn't. Also, try not to insult each other.


OK, seeing as noone is responding, admin, can you close this thread? I shall have to start a differnet one that will include buildings and other such things, as well as a plot and title screen snapshot

You could just edit the first post...seems to make more sense...

:P


Hope you accept my criticism and use it to help you improve!
Back from long hiatus.

Sig was all out of date, so...yeah. Currently re-building.
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you know what, ill do that!

P.S. I know slize looks bad, seeing as he is my ahem technical first scratch. I am reworking him. th second one kinda looks like a worm :(

P.P.S. thanks! i kinda needed more criticism that was nice like this stuff.

P.P.P.S. Sorry gyrados. i edited the post, so that should make it all better
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Domin-8

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Posted November 3rd, 2010
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Some of these sprites are just simple/unsual edits.

The lines on this one look sort of 2D. They should curve with the body, which they didn't here.
Actually it does curve with the body, the aren't striaght lines, and blood vessel are too small to make it 3D it looks fine.
Most of your posts are not very helpful, give more helpful info.

Now to this thread. Your sprites aren't bad for a beginner. If your want to get better at scratching sprites study the style your going for. Look how they have the lines curve smoothly, how they shade certain areas.

You can improve and all of this will help. If you need any tips PM me something you've done and I'll help you out.



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yeah i guess i should take off Murkio. it isnt all that good. And I will redo Darnine. Coonzry is supposed to have to have the lines like that. they are blood vessels. not lines. plus, coonzry is pretty amazing, and i know your totally jealous of it =). i will work on the first two, but coonzry will stay the same for now, until popular demand says i should change it. Until tomorrow, though, i cant do that. after all,im only 13, and i have a bed time. C u tomorrow
Jealous of what? It's cascoon with a blue eye.

Although the ground/water one is pretty cool, only the 2nd version though.
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Yeah, i'd better change that up to having spikes......
and, btw, murkio is getting some reworking, so expect to see some changes.
Oh, and btw btw, i would appreciate it if you continue your inputs(yes, even you mobile tsk) because, well, i need it very much
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