The Original Story

Started by ~MasterMind~ October 13th, 2008 4:47 PM
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~MasterMind~

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Seen October 5th, 2010
Posted July 21st, 2010
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I was at school today and had nothing to do so i wrote a little story its based off the original story you can find in pokemon D/P/P in the canalava library its a bit like it but i added ALOT this may be a chapter booki m still not sure its not very long but atlest its something hehe
and after you read it i would want to hear your opinion (if you dont like it dont be to harsh) and i would love if i misspeled something in the story or i didnt put punctuation please tell me cause i want my story to be the best it can be well here it is hope you like it
and just to say this is my first threard here in this forum


"The Original story"

There was once nothing but Absolute Darkness except for one pure vortex of chaos. the sole purpose of that vortex was to create an Egg, one
single egg. This one egg was beutifully decorated with glistening gold and Silver and gems spread all over it particulurly Ruby's, Saphires, Emeralds, Diomands, and Pearls.

Hundreds of thousands of years went by while that egg was frozen in the black nothingness. And then all at once "BAM" the beutifull Egg of Creation had hatched. Planets, Dimensions, Chaos, Tranquility everything was happening at once and after it was over a Creature so little in size came out. The Alpha Pokemon or "The Original One" (Arceus) with its silver colored body and has a large, golden wheel around its abdomen, connected by spikes filled with gems.


Hundreds of years passed by as Arceus Grew larger and better adapted to his responsibility to govern creation. but one Day it sat in the Hall of Origin Thinking only Thinking and the moment that day was over it stomped its golden feet and almost instantly Three Great Beasts were Created.
One of Time (Dialga) one of Space (Palkia) and one of Dimensions (Giratina).
he didnt create these three great creatures for nothing he created them for a purpose to govern over what Arceus was to busy To watch over.
And so they did Dialga Made Time so that Everything may move Freely. Palkia Created Space so that there would be room for life to be created. And Giratina Created Dimensions so that there could be more then one infinent Universe......But Giratina Was Greedy for power and he wanted more he asked Arceus to give him more power and Strength, Arceus Refused knowing that if he did Giratina would shurely try to overthrow him. Giratina Fireicly Tried to Destroy Arceus. Arceus Stamped his foot once more Banishing Giratina to a dimesion he had created Specifically for the dead, Arceus Creid while doing so because he knew he created Giratina and knowing how giratina must feel he was sickened. After that Arceus Created the Three Beings one of Knowledge (Uxie) one of willpower (Azelf) and one of Emotion (Mesprit) to make sure that giratina stayed where he was banished. Mesprit who was the kindest and most playfull and she loved to play with her brothers Uxie, and Azelf but she knew she could make so many more freinds to play with. So she asked Arceus if he could Create a whole World of Freinds that she can play with, Arceus looked at Mesprit and smiled. He Gladly Granted her what she had wished for he looked in the distance his eyes glowing he created a beutifull planet with oceans, forests, mountians, Lakes, And Mesprits favorite part the Flowery Feilds and then he created what is thought to be the very first three creatures to ever be made. They are simple creatures created to look similiar to mesprit yet created to look different it was Mew, Celebi and Jirachi After that Mesprit was eternally happy.

Everything that Arceus had Created was doing what they were suppose to do until Dialga, The Creature of time and Palkia, The Creature of Space started to despise one another each thought that there Creator Arceus liked the other one better and they fought for Several Days until Arceus was fed up by there quarrel.
and banished them to seperate dimensions one made for time the other for space.
Arceus felt the same way he had when he banished Giratina. Arceus was Destroyed.
he had banished the first three great creatures that he had created the ones he put the most time and effort into he was destroyed. he passed the responsibility of making sure that the world he had created will ever so flourish with life he gave that responsibility to Uxie, Mesprit, Azelf and all of mesprits Freinds and they did what he had asked. Arceus Devastated as he was returned to his birthplace "The Hall of Origin" and Crying he fell into Eternal Sleep.

~The End For Now~

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Fearless Love

self-proclaimed anime dork

Age 26
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Seen March 21st, 2020
Posted February 9th, 2014
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15.2 Years
Wow that was great. It was very creative in my opinion. The way it was formated and the idea's, you must have put a lot of work into it. I surley can't wait for the next part Darkrai 45!! i'll we waiting
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