Levity-Adam
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The Beauty Of Feebas
It's frowning face and tortured fin,
has this Pokemon carried a befouled sin?
Nay!
What it carries is something so pure,
the beauty within is what Trainers lure.
With eyes that gleam so crystal clear,
It's see's within what we most fear...
The fear of a beautiful Feebas.
It's frowning face and tortured fin,
has this Pokemon carried a befouled sin?
Nay!
What it carries is something so pure,
the beauty within is what Trainers lure.
With eyes that gleam so crystal clear,
It's see's within what we most fear...
The fear of a beautiful Feebas.
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This is the first Pokemon related poetry I have ever written. Please give me some constructive criticism to help me get better!