Lovely poem =) So nice to see someone who knows Feebas is beautiful.
I have a issue with these lines:
the beauty within is what Trainers lure.
^ Is that supposed to mean that the beauty within lures trainers?
With eyes that gleam so crystal clear,
It's see's within what we most fear...
Does the last line mean that we see the beauty that we most fear? Or Feebas sees what we most fear? The apostrophes confuse me a little there ^_^
Sorry about the lagging reply...
'The beauty within is what trainers lure'. In this line I mean that Trainers want a feebas because of it's inner beauty, thus 'luring' them.
'It see's within what we most fear'.This line means that Feebas see' what the trainer fears.
Sorry if my poem wasn't clear enough, I'll work at a better one in the near future!
Thanks for commenting though!