Search For Long Time

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[COLOR=Navy]This is my first ever fan- fic. I hope you like it. And do not say fix the grammar or anything. I know that. I'm not good at it that all.
Chapter 1 - Find Me Quickly
Girl was standing on the cliff of Unknown place. She didn't know where she was. Wind was blowing against her brown hair.
" Laven, Laven please help!" someone was calling her name. She looked. It was a man. He was wearing a green shirt, which was ripped and torn apart, a blue jeans which was also ripped and torn apart, and a shoes, which was perfectly normal. He had brown beard, brown hair, like a girl who was standing on the cliiff, though much shorter. She Recognized the man. It was her father.
" Dad?" girl was suprised. :shocked: Her father was supposed to be dead.
" Yes darling I am your father," her father replied, looking so pale. zhe touched her hand.
" What happened to you? I thought you were dead!" girl was crying now. :'(
" No dear, i 'm not dead. But I need your help," said her father.
" What is it?" girl asked, still crying. Her father bent down so he can see her face.
" I was captured by Team Storm. Do you know them? Well they are evil villians that looking for Rayquaza so there will be more sky. I need you to rescue me!" he said.
" But how?" the girl asked. Something crawled on her back. It was Evee.
" It is quite hard. You need to defeat all the region's gym and win the conference of all the regions," her father explined. Girl looked at her father. She have no pokemon.
Suddenly her dad was beggining to disappear.
" dad!" girl cried out.
" No tome! Just do what I say!" her father wave and dissappeared. Girl fell. Her father was still alive. She knew it.
Suddenly she slipped. She fell. She looked. Cliff was very steep. She knew she was going to die. She closed her eyes. Slowly and gently...

" Ring! ring ring!" alarm clock rang. Lavender woke up. She was hot. She looked around. Air- con in her room was turned off. No wonder. She crawled to her window. she can see daylight. She hopped out of her bed and yawned. She thought about her dream. It seemed real. Or was it? She didn't know.

Lavender skipped through the garden of her home to Professor. Birch's office. It was clear day. No rain at all. She closed her eyes and breathed a fresh air. Bump!She fell. She has bumped on Professor. Birch's office.
" Ow...." Lavender mumbled, rubbing her forehead.
" Are you all right?" man asked. It was professor. Birch. He was carrying 3 pokeballs.
" Yeah I'm all right," Lavender answered. Birch smiled.
" Just in time. Do you want Treeko :20: ? Torchick? :19: or Mudkip?" :18: :18:
" Is there anything?"
"Well there is Trapinch..."
" Great! Can I have it?" Lavender asked.
" All right but becareful," Birch warned.

" Thank you professor and bye!" Lavender waved and left. She patted her Trapinch. It was not just Trapinch. It was shiny and she loved it. She hugged her Trapinch and headed for Oldale town.
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Mr Cat Dog

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Well, there were a load of spelling errors, so it's best that you type it up on a word processor or something to abolish at least 90% of them (you need to proofread it anyways to get the other 10 or so%).

You do actually describe things quite well, but it seems to be disconnected from the story in some way, and it makes it feel a bit off at times. Also, there were no real paragraphs, and this isn't script, since you aren't having people talking, then action.

What I do like about this is that you chose a Trapinch as a starter. That is very uncommon in fics like this, and I applaud you for it, but making it shiny does seem a bit overused - but meh... you can't change that now.

Your main problem is the grammar, which is actually very simple to fix if you go on a word processing facility such as Microsoft Word and such. That's abou 50 to 60% of your problems here... so it does need to be fixed before you continue properly in the story.

Please don't think I'm going hard on you, this is just an opinion after all.
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Alright. I'm not good at english and stuff since it is my secon language. I decided I would change my chapter title.
Chapter 2 Fight begins!
Lavender walked around route 101, attempting to catch some wild pokemon. The cloud was hardly seen in the sky. But in Lavenders prediction it will change. She can sure smell foggy. I better get to Oldale town before noon, she thought.. Suddenly grey and black coloured puppy appeared. Lavender didnt knew what it was since she never saw much pokemon in her life. She quickly looked at her new pokedex.

Poochyena, biting pokemon. Poochyena looks cute in the way, but in inside it is not. It is quite vicious pokemon and will bite anyone. Lavender thought for a moment. She want to have that Poochyena to bite the gang that stole her father, whether it is true or not. She took out her pokeball. Poochyena growled.

Go, Fifi! Lavender called out and came out a shiny Trapinch. Poochyena growled once again and was ready to battle. Fifi, us,s take down! Fifi shot straight forward to Poochyena. Fifi knew he was gonna hit it. But all of sudden it dodged it. What! Lavender yelled. That Poochyena was fast. Oh well, now Fifi use sand attack! Fifi turned around and faced the back on Poochyena. It then sprayed handful of sand in to Poochyenas face with its back leg like dogs do when they finished going to toilet. Poochyena cried in pain. She knew she had a chance. Now finish it with tackle! Trapinch headed toward the Poochyena. Poochyena went sliding on the ground and hit the nearby tree. This is her chance.

Go, pokeball! she threw the red and white Sphere. It moved once twice and ding. Lavender picked it up. She was shaking all over. She couldnt believe it. She caught a Poochyena!

Not bad, But I could do Better. Lavender looked. It was a boy. He looked bit like Silver, who see saw on TV. He was wearing black shirt and a short like Silver. Lavender frowned. She knew boys was so competitive, since she grew up with 4 brothers and 2 sisters. But this one was different. He looked really smart. Lavender turned away from him.
Go away! she yelled. She didnt know what she said. She couldnt help it. She was feeling something. Sorry. Suddenly another feeling came to her. Anger. She was really irritated.
Oh yeah? Well I dont want to hang around with some stupid girl! boy turned around. Now Lavender was really angry. Her head was getting hotter and hotter.
What did you call me? A stupid girl! Well let have some battle! she yelled once again. Boy shrugged.
All right. But you better heal your pokemon. There is healing machine that was just invented is there, the boy pointed at the machine. Lavender nodded and headed for it.
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In about 5 minutes Lavender was ready. She wasnt sure she will win. Nana, her Poochyena, wasnt trained and as she looked at her pokedex, she was only Lv. 5. Fifi, her Trapinch, only had one match against Nana. She sighed. She chose to do this. She got out her pokeball and threw it.

To Be Continued.
Next chapter Win or Lose
I said Mr. Cat dog don't say about grammar and such things in first post! Please, if you people gonna say that go away. I'm not being rude, ok?
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Well, if you don't want my advice about grammar, you won't get it. I'm sorry for my beforehand comment. So... to review this chapter:

This one is a lot better than your first one. The battle was short, but since it was only really against a Poochyena, anything longer would have just made it overly long and boring. The way you described the Sand Attack was very funny in a way of the simile you used.

You could use a bit more description, as description is a key element in a story such as this one. Although you did describe the basic things like the sky and the Poocheyna quite well, you could describe them even better by delving into more metaphors and similes to make it really stand out from the bland description of other fics I've read.

Well, on the whole, this chapter is MUCH better than Chapter 1. Just work a little more on the length, and use a bit more desciption and you'll be fine. ^_^

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Thanks. I got Microsoft word and it really doesnt do anything. I might not going to write a story tonight. Its just that I want to look at other peoples fan-fic and I want to go to neopet. (Since I didnt went there for long time) sorry for being so snappy. I was just so stressed about school works and stuff.
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Chapter 3 Win or Lose
Lavender sighed deeply. This is it, she thought. She looked around. It was getting dark, even if it was noon. Storm is coming. She looked around once again. There seemed to be to be trees and trees. Trees looked darker than she thought. Behind the trees she could see shadows. Shadows strangely wasnt trainers. Lavender scratched her head.


Well we got some companies, boy grinned. Lavender wondered. Boy grinned more wider as he noticed Lavender wondering.
Oh, I guess I know what you are wondering about. My eyes are like a cat, so I can see through darkness. Here take this, boy said, handing Lavender a torch. She pressed on button.
Flash of light came from glass part. She stepped forward and found out what is the figure was. It was pokemons. Over hundred of them. There were all kinds of colours. Black and white, red, white and brown and all kinds that you couldnt be sure how many.
Well I wonder what are they doing, Lavender wondered. She shivered. It was getting cold. She looked at the grass. Tiny white bug (which is not pokemon) surrounded her. Lavender stepped away. It constantly followed her, its tiny mouth gaped open as they showed their tiny sharp teeth.
Back away! That bug is dangerous! It can kill you! boy pulled Lavender. Too late. Bug gaped its tiny teeth wider and went deep into Lavenders leg. It constantly was trying to suck her blood. But in luck it spitted it out.
Guess it didnt like AB blood type, Lavender smiled. Boy stared at her in disbelief
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You were lucky that Brea (bug) didnt like AB blood type, boy said. It was dark. Lavender was shivering with coldness. They were sitting inside the Duncans (that seemed be boys name) tent. They had some tea and ate a little.
Um so how about battle? Lavender asked. Duncan, who was trying to find his new blue jacket stared at her.
Now? In the dark? Im not sure he stopped for a moment.
Come on. Anyway its just a little rain now, Lavender insisted him. Duncan then nodded.
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Now, is double battle ok? Duncan asked. Lavender nodded. She fiddled inside her bag ( which is full of mess ) and found her two pokeballs, both same colour.
Ready? Lavender asked. Duncan nodded. He threw his pokeball and came out a pokemon that looks like raccoon and a pokemon with fire on its back. Lavender felt more curious and opened her pokedex:

Zigzagoon tiny raccoon pokemon. Zigzagoon always walks in zig zag way. It always get curious on things they see. It may sometimes play dead.

Cindaquil flame mouse pokemon. Cindaquil is quite rare and if you are lucky you could meet them. When there is flame on its back it is the sign that they are ready to battle.

Well thats good pokemon. Here is my pokemon. Go, Fifi and Nana! Lavender threw her ball. There came out a Trapinch and Poochyena. They looked like it was ready to battle.
Go Flame, use ember! Duncan ordered. Cindaquil gaped its mouth open and shot little tiny flame from its mouth. Poochyena luckily dodged it. But Trapinch wasnt lucky. It hit directly on Trapinchs stomach. Trapinch was gliding across the ground and hit the nearest rock.
Dont give up! Fifi, use bite, and Nana, use tackle! Lavender ordered. Both Trapinch and Poochyena was headed for two opponents. Trapinch, whos mouth was open wide, bit at Cindaquil. It cried in pain. Poochyena also went for Zigzagoon. Zigzagoon dodged it.
Good work Zigzagoon! Now, use headbutt! Duncan yelled. Zigzagoon dashed straight into Poochyena ready to strike with its head. But Poochyena dodged it.
Yes! Fifi, use sand attack and Nana, use tackle! Lavender said. Trapinch shot sprays of sand at Cindaquil and Zigzagoon. Both of them closed their eyes. Lavender smiled. This is her chance. Poochyena went straightforward to both pokemon and tackled both of them. Both of them didnt know what happened and fell. Lavender looked around. There was too much sand that she couldnt see what was happening.
What the heck? Duncan coughed. Storm of dust were surrounding them.
Trapinch, stop! Lavender commanded. Trapinch stopped. They could see battle field clearly now. There stood two pokemon. Both of them, Duncans. It looked like they fainted. He ran over to both of them, bringing back to their ball.
Well done Lavender. I am impressed. Well, I should get going, he said, sadly. Lavender felt some loneliness. Ever since she met Duncan, she felt like he was travelling with her. Even if he looked like Silver, he was a kind guy.
Wait! Why dont you travel with me? Lavender asked. Duncan turned around at her. He smiled.
Sure! Duncan said. Lavender smiled too. She patted both of her pokemon. She knew this was start of shining new friendship.

To Be Continued

I havent been posting story for few days! Oh my god! Next chapter: Just to frustrate.
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Nobody posted in my fan-fic. Really sad :'(
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Nana, finish it off with bite! Lavender yelled. Poochyena went forward, opening its mouth. Little youngster looked frightened. Poochyena then bit at Ralts. It fainted.
Thanks! You were awesome! boy said and left.

It was few day since Lavender and Duncan traveled together. They already passed Oldale and Petalburg. Lavender had already caught Wingull. Her pokemons gained some level and her Poochyena learned to use bite. Duncan told her that now, Petalburg gym leader only allow people to battle his gym when they got at least 4 badge. Of course Lavender yelled saying, Why didnt you told me so!

They were headed for Petalburg forest. Lavender was thinking of pokemon that Nana just battled. She was thinking so deeply. So deeply that she didnt noticed the rock that she might get tripped on. But she didnt rather tripped on it. Stepped on it. She didnt noticed that either. Her thought was filled with I want that Ralts. I just want Ralts.

Lavender! We are here! Duncan yelled. Lavender looked. She didnt realized she was at Petalburg forest. Forest was filled with trees and pokemons. Berries were falling from the trees. Above was cloudless sky. Some black coloured pokemon with white colour on its stomach and a face colour of red, flew. It spread its wing and flew in packs. Lavender opened her pokedex:
Taillow, Tiny Swallow pokemon. Taillow is very gutsy and never gives up. Often in the situation, you are troubled.
Well, this place is so peaceful Duncan said. He was right. Leaves of Lime Green made a small noise that make you relax. Pokemons lived in harmony. Nothing was wrong with this place.

They sat down in nearby shades. Duncan opened his backpack and took out a dark yellow notebook which has neat cover of sketch of Typhlosion with Quilava. He opened the book. Lavender went closer.
What are you doing? she asked.
Im sketching, Duncan replied. He flicked through the pages and showed her the sketch. Lavender gaped her mouth open. The picture was just marvelous. Background was full of neatly sketched flowers, trees, and speck of pokemons. Berries looked really real. Main biggest picture in the sketch was Dratini. Its beautiful skin sparkling. It was splashing in the cool bathe of the water. Its black eyes were full of mysteries.
Cool, Lavender said.
This is one of my best sketches. It is rare to meet Dratini you know, Duncan said. He flipped through another pages and took out his pencil. It was dark red and it had pointy end. He looked around and pointed at north- west side. Lavender looked at the direction. It was an egg. It had green patch everywhere and triangle mark on each side. She moved closer.
I wonder who the mother is she mumbled. She touched it. It felt smooth.
Lost eggs I guess . Its common here, Duncan explained. Lavender looked at him and picked up an egg.
Thats terrible! I will take care of him or her, she said, cuddling it.
What! Do you know how hard to take care of baby pokemon! Duncan said, dropping his pencil. Lavender looked at his sketching again. He was trying to sketch her with mysterious egg.
He was halfway through when all of sudden she saw bright light. Egg was hatching. It started to grow white. It was beginning to form a shape. Duncan dropped his sketch pad. Growing stopped and there stood a pokemon with green hair thought of pokemon who looked blind due to that. Its body looked though it was dress and it had 2 horn, one on front forehead and one on back of the head.
Ralt feeling pokemon. Ralt usually hide from humans for its shyness. It will only appears to human with great heart.
Yes! Lavender jumped around happily. Ralt smiled and went beside Lavender. It knew she has great heart. It curled around and slept beside Lavenders tall leg.
Easy for you to say. Now I have to sketch all over again, now Im just getting frustrated! Duncan said, grimly. He began sketching again, thinking how unfair life was.
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Few hours later, they reached to end of the forest. They stopped and smelt a fresh air.
Well that was quick, Duncan said. They walked around . They saw some unusual trees, some pokemon, which they have never seen in another routes before.
How many hours to Rustbro? Lavender asked. Duncan looked and pointed at the map.
About couple days, he said. Lavender shook her head and said, What! which made her run so fast.
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Couple of hours later they have arrived at Rustbro. City was crowded with lots of people. It had many buildings and even a tower that you can look through the city. Yet it was not the tallest buildings of all.
There was one building. This building was extremely large and was painted in silver. There were lots of people coming and going, workers, assistant, customers. Above the door was large letter Saying D.
Hmm They seemed reconstructed the design of Devon corp. Duncan said. Lavender too nodded. Even she knew what Devon corp. was. It was most famous company in Hoenn.
Rustbro have gyms. Are you ready to fight? Duncan asked. Lavender nodded. She was going to battle. She smiled and ran as fast as she could.
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*******************Chapter 5 As hard as rock!******************
Lavender felt excitement in her body. She couldnt believe that she was going to do this! She fiddle around her skirt ( she sometimes do that when she cannot control herself ). Even though it was only 6 am and gym doesnt open until 10 am, she already got dressed. Today she was wearing pink sleeveless top with 04 written on it, skirt with pattern of yellow spot and a background colour with blue, full brimmed hat with mark that said, I wanna be a Champion, a plain long white sock and a sneakers. She strapped her mini bags on around her waist. Her brown hair was tied in plat on both ends. She then sat down on the chair. She took a paper from the desk and started to think about strategies.
I better look at Duncans gym guide book Lavender said. She sat up and tip toed all the way to Duncans room.

She opened his bag and fiddled inside, until she finally got what she wanted. She tiptoed again. She sat down, feeling much safe. She opened the book and found the page for Rustbro gym leader
Book says that her name is Roxanne. According to picture she had strange hairstyle on both ends, wearing blue dress and had a brown eyes.
She uses rock type Lavender mumbled. She took another paper and started to plan.
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Lavender and Duncan was headed for Rustbro gym.
I wonder if shes tough, Duncan thought, nervous about his first gym match.
Dont worry, Lavender patted him. Duncan gulped.

Lavender and Duncan at last arrived at gym. It was cave looking gym that says: Rustbro Gym. They entered quietly and saw a lady with children. Gym looked sort of like a secret base. Above there were many lights and a camera. Battlefield was based on grounds. Door that she opened before was painted in white and had handle on both ends.

Welcome! Dont mind about my students please. They are trying to learn about pokemon battles, lady who Lavender saw as Roxanne said.
Thats all right. My name is Lavender and this is my friend Duncan. Can you battle us? Lavender asked. Roxanne nodded.
Sure, which one of you will go first? she asked. Duncan quickly took out a two strange object and gave it to Cindaquil before he raised his hand up.
Me, he said. Roxanne smiled and walked to the battlefield without a word.

Is one on one match ok? she asked, grabbing her pokeball. Duncan nodded, also grabbing his pokeball.
Go, Onix! she threw red and white sphere ball. There then stood a giant snake like pokemon. Lavender looked into her pokedex:

Onix Rock snake pokemon. Onix has magnet in its brain. It becomes more rounder and smoother as it becomes older.
Onix eh? Go, Flame! Duncan threw the pokeball and came out a Cindaquil.
Onix, use screech! Roxanne ordered. Onix started to make a loud noise. Everyone in the room blocked their ears. The terrible noise continued on and on.
Flame, use ember! Duncan ordered. Cindaquil spit a ball of tiny flame which only stopped Onix from screeching.
Onix, use Wrap! Roxanne yelled. Onix started to wrap its body around Cindaquil It screamed in pain as Onix wrapped its body tighter and tighter.
Flame hang on! Duncan said. Cindaquil looked at its master and nodded.

Suddenly Cindaquil started to glow. It started to change. It got more skinnier and place of flame started to change.

Then it stopped glowing, showing quite different looking pokemon. Lavender looked at her pokedex.
Quilava Volcano pokemon. Quilava lives in hot places and is quite rare to find.

Flame use quick attack! Duncan ordered. Quilava moved fast that Lavender couldnt barley see its flame. Quilava then attacked Onix, which it lost balance.
Onix rock throw! Roxanne ordered. Onix scooped up some rocks and threw at Quilava..
Quilava use double team! Duncan ordered.
Quilava! Quilava then created multiple of its copy. The rock hit some Quilavas but not the real one.
Quilava use ember! Duncan yelled. Quilava spits out tiny flame which fainted Onix.

Onix is unable to battle! Quilava wins! Referee called out.
Yes Flame! Duncan said happily.
Quilava! Quilava jumped. Roxanne walked over to Duncan.
Congratulation and here is your badge, Roxanne said and gave Duncan a weird shaped badge that is colour of yellow.
Thanks! he smiled. Lavender stepped forward. She left her Ralt on the seat.
How about 2 on 2 sound? Roxanne asked. Lavender nodded.

Duncan sat on the chair beside Ralt. It jumped and hid under the chair. Duncan laughed.
Go Graveler! Roxanne threw the ball and appeared a strange looking pokemon that looks bit like a rock. Lavender looked for her pokedex. She opened it, but then slipped out of her hand broke. Lavender groaned.
Oh well. Go Wiwi! Sapphire threw the pokeball and appeared Wingull. Roxanne smiled.

Type advantage wont help you! Graveler use roll out! Roxanne ordered.
Gra! Graveler yelled and curled up. It then started rolling towards Wingull. Apparently Wingull was on the ground and was hit by Graveler.
Wiwi dont give up! Use water gun! Lavender yelled. Wingull got up and sprayed a loads of water. Graveler was furious. It turned little of red and was smashing the ground.
Graveler rock throw! Graveler lifted the huge rock up and threw at Wingull. Wingull was directly hit and fell.
Win. gull.
Wingull is unable to fight! Graveler wins! The judge called out. Lavender sighed and returned her Wingull.
You did a great job. Well here it goes, go Nana! Lavender threw the ball and appeared Poochyena.
Grr! Poochyena growled. It snapped its jaws.
Nana use iron tail! Poochyenas tail started to grow. It shot straight forward and hit the Gravelers body with iron tail. It was advantage, weakness or both that made Graveler faint. It was unconscious.

Graveler is unable to fight! Poochyena wins! Lavender jumped up and down. Roxanne smiled and took out her pokeball.
Not bad! Well here it goes! Go Larvitar! Roxanne threw the ball and appeared a green coloured pokemon with horn. Lavender knew that her pokedex was broken.
Lavi! Larvitar yelled.
Larvitar use screech! Roxanne yelled. Larvitar opened its mouth and screamed. Poochyena covered its ears. Lavender was starting to get headache.


Poochyena! Poochyena screamed.
Larvitar use earthquake! Roxanne ordered. Larvitar stopped screaming. It jumped and caused a big earthquake that broke the field. Poochyena fell.
Nana, dont give up! Use shadow ball! Poochyena opened its mouth. Black ball appeared from its mouth and was shot straight to Larvitar. Black ball hit the Larvitar. It fell, but got up.
Larvi! it growled.
Larvitar use your strongest attack! Roxanne ordered.
You too Nana! Lavender yelled. Poochyena used shadow ball and Larvitar, hidden power. Moved collided, which caused giant explosion. The smoke appeared.

When the smoke cleared they looked. Both pokemon was standing.
Larvitar finish this off with bite! Larvitar moved, but fell. It was unconscious.
Larvitar is unable to fight! Poochyena wins! the referee yelled. Lavender jumped in joy and hugged her pokemon.
Here is your badge and TM rock tomb for both of you, Roxanne smiled and handed Lavender a badge and weird looking thing that was a shape of rock.

Thanks! Return Nan. She couldnt finish the sentence when suddenly Poochyena started to glow. It got larger. When it stopped growing it revealed a pokemon with grey fur, long black hair, mean looking eyes and muscular body. Pokedex started to beep. Automatic fixing. It said and turned back to normal. Lavender gasped in astonishment. She couldnt believe that pokedex fixed by itself. She shrugged and scanned the new pokemon.



Mightyena bite pokemon. Mightyena is evolved form of Poochyena. It is said that Mightyena will only obey trainer that is strong worthy. Type: Dark. Ability:Intimidate
Wow pokedex has been upgraded, Lavender said. She returned her Mightyena. Thanks Roxanne.
Youre welcome, Roxanne smiled and they shook hands. Lavender waved good-bye and she and Duncan left.

Meanwhile the man with brown hair was sitting on the chair grinning evilly.
Sir we detected that Lavender won the first gym match, the guy with ninja like green ninja like uniform informed. The man with brown hair grinned more evilly.
Excellent, he said.
To Be Continued
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