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Old December 13th, 2008 (4:14 PM).
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    My soldier, you hath relented
    Your body intact but your soul segmented
    At Satan's wrath did you fall
    Under his shadow did you crawl
    A lesson so learnt
    Your frame as such burnt
    Spiteful, you may be
    As to send his weapon to sea
    You hate him now, but then not so
    His shameless enemy you owe
    Pray tonight, he detaches
    My soldier, put down those matches
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    Old December 14th, 2008 (8:07 PM).
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    Hmm. Very nice. The ryhme scheme went well, in my opinion. Creates a vivid image as well, I might add.
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