Night Falls and Day Breaks

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chanchimi

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Posted July 23rd, 2011
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I've finally created all my towns, cities, points of interest for my Fakemon I've created. I have a total 121 Fakemon, and I chose to create a fan-fiction of my Fakemon region and such. Of course, real Pokemon will appear along the story too. But since I am using works of my imagination, I'm going to begin with chapter 1, and also give information for the Fakemon appearing in this chapter, along with area and background info. Please let me know what you think! :)

Ninsai Region-A warm region Made up of islands with bright skies and clear views

In this chapter there is reference to the second town location-Lakeridge Town “A lake with an ancient past” It's home to Daybreak Lake. It's said to be home of a powerful Pokemon that could be the embodiment of daylight.

Fakemon- Panfin: Water Panther Pokemon- Water/Dark type. 1'04 ft, 35 lbs./A small cat-like Pokemon with two front paws, a large fin on it's back. It slightly resembles a mermaid, and lacks two back legs and is replaced by a long tail fin.
Aersito: Mosquito Pokemon- Bug type. 1'00 ft, 11 lbs./ A mosquito Pokemon, it has yellow colored skin and six long limbs it uses to boost it's speed.
Canarace: Ace Flier Pokemon- Flying type. 3'07, 79 lbs./ A strong bird Pokemon. It has large wings that point upwards when closed. It has a bright orange beak and large talons. It's primarily beige in color. It's also angry by nature. They are used often in transport as Canarace's fly just like an airplane.

Teams: Team Nightfall and Team Daybreak. Their intentions will be explained shortly within the story.

And a sprite of Opal (Not in Nightfall uniform):



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V.S. Canarace

Team Member Personal File-ID NO# 183447-NF
Name: Opal
Identification #: 183447
Rank: Area Grunt Rank 2
Affiliation: Team Nightfall
Gender: Male
Current Age: 16
Height: 5'8
Eye Color: Navy Blue
Hair Color: Blonde
Previous Experience/Occupation: Education-11th Grade High School/Job-None

Original Application- My name is Opal. I've researched this organization extensively. I feel that the purpose this organization is trying to reach is for the best. I agree with everything that this organization represents. I don't have any prior experience with a job before. Even with this said, I believe I can be a valuable asset to everyone already affiliated with Team Nightfall. Please take this application into consideration.
Thank you for taking your time and looking at my application. -Opal-

Skill Proficiency Level: 5/10- Skilled in evasion
Current Team: Panfin-Lv.10/Female
Aersito-Lv.7/Male

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“......Nock? Nock, where did you go?” Opal said as he crawled out from a large bush. A small, charcoal colored cat-like Pokemon followed. “Crud. I can't see where I'm going. It's too dark.” The time was 1'o'clock in the morning. The sun would not be rising for at least five more hours.

“Nock couldn't have just disappeared.” Opal said quietly as he pulled a shady looking device from his back pocket

“TNF Headquaters. State your ID number and squad group number for verification” A robotic voice said from the communication device.

“183447; Squad group number-007-212-HNC.”

Opal. Current location-West of Lakeridge town. What is your request?” The voice answered.

“Contact Nock. Rank-Area Grunt Rank 2. He was with me for this operation. He's disappeared and I can't seem to locate him anywhere. Please contact him and tell him to find me!' Opal whispered angrily. He sat by the bush with his very first Pokemon, Panfin, who seemed frightened. “It's ok, Panfin. I'm sure Nock isn't far away from here, and Headquaters is contacting him now.” Opal said while rubbing his Pokemon's head.

The person you are trying to reach is not available at the moment.” The voice returned.

“What the heck do you mean?! Not able to reach at the moment? That's ridiculous!” Opal growled as he threw the device to the floor. Silencing the voice. He then turned his attention to Panfin, who was facing the direction of a sparkling lake.

Daybreak Lake.

“Paa!” The water panther screeched.

“What's the matter with you? I'm not in the mood for-....” Opal paused as he saw a large, glowing-eyed bird flying in his direction.

“Canar! Carace!” The bird screamed as it flew right past Opal and then slowed for a landing. It had it's claws clenched around something metal.

Opal stood up from the bush and turned away from the lake to face a strong flying type Pokemon of the Ninsai region.

“A Canarace....! This must have been what you were worried about, Panfin!” Opal was shaking from meeting his dull eyes with the glaring-orange eyes of the ace flying Pokemon. But as it landed on the grass that was touched with cold dew, he noticed what was clenched in it's claws.

“Nock's communicator!” Opal yelled in shock.
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This first chapter was rather short, the next ones will definitely be longer.
Thank you for reading! Any comments and criticism is welcome!
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The Present is Redeemable
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Posted March 16th, 2009
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I really like this story so far. I hope you continue it.

I'm new here, so I haven't read anything else of yours, but I like how you make a mini-profile of your characters/fakemon. It helps create images, and you have some vivid detail here.

I'll just be waiting for the next chapter, since you got me interested...

chanchimi

With a Side of Cheddar

Age 29
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In a cartoon!
Seen May 10th, 2022
Posted July 23rd, 2011
547 posts
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I really like this story so far. I hope you continue it.

I'm new here, so I haven't read anything else of yours, but I like how you make a mini-profile of your characters/fakemon. It helps create images, and you have some vivid detail here.

I'll just be waiting for the next chapter, since you got me interested...
Thank you very much! I'm planning on continuing it.

I tried to do a different way of giving profiles for characters like Opal, his is more of a record on him in Team Nightfall.
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The Present is Redeemable
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chanchimi

With a Side of Cheddar

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Chapter 2 is here! It takes place in the same location as chapter 1, but there are more fake Pokemon mentioned.

Moscombat: Combat Pokemon- Bug/Fighting type. 3'04 ft, 52 lbs./ The evolved form of Aersito. It moves at quick speeds, allowing it to land powerful punched easily and escape from danger.
Luchu: Grass Mouse Pokemon- Grass type. 1'04 ft, 12 lbs./ A small mouse that lives in forests and loves to smell flowers. It has two bulbs as it's ears, that are said to bloom into flowers during the spring.

CHAPTER 2-To Follow the Rules

Team Member Personal File-ID NO# 690119-NF
Name: Nock
Identification #: 690119
Rank: Area Grunt Rank 2
Affiliation: Team Nightfall
Gender: Male
Current Age: 17
Height: 5'9
Eye Color: Hazel Brown
Hair Color: Black
Previous Experience/Occupation: Education-11th grade high school/ Job- Pokemart Cashier

Original Application- Hello, I would like to join Team Nightfall. My name, or, nickname, is Nock. I'm interested in this organization, and therefore, want to be affiliated with it. Plus, the nighttime hours happen to be when I am most active, you could almost say that I'm nocturnal. Thanks for reading my application. -Nock-

Skill Proficiency Level: 6/10- Skilled in Battle
Current Team: Moscombat-Lv.17/Male
Zubat-Lv.11/Male

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Opal stood with his eyes locked on Nock's communicator which was being held in the Canarace's talon. The Canarace let out an ear-piercing screech and charged right towards Opal. Opal shut his eyes in shock. Afraid of his own thoughts that he might be killed by the ferocious bird.

“Paan!” The aquatic cat yelled defensively. Opal opened to see that the Canarace stopped in it's tracks and looked down on Opal's Panfin, who was trying to protect it's master.

“No! Panfin! Don't get in the way! You aren't strong enough to put up a fight with this Pokemon!” Opal said to his Pokemon. Then he thought of a way to evade the Canarace and get away. Opal pulled a Pokeball from his belt.

“I'll have to use this Pokemon that Team Nightfall gave me.” He whispered to himself. “Go! Aersito!” He sent out a mosquito Pokemon. “Flash!” Opal's Aersito shot a flash of bright blue light from it's abdomen, blinding the Canarace, which screeched in anger.

“Carrace!” It yelled, then lifted itself into the air, and quickly flapped it's wings to make a whirlwind. Still clutching the communicator.

“Ah! N-no!” Opal and his Pokemon were blown away from it, almost into the lake. “Don't....Don't you come any closer....” Opal said quietly as the Canarace was hovering towards him.

“That's right! Get away from him, now!” A voice yelled from behind the bird.

“Get him, Moscombat!” A large mosquito like creature flew into the air, it had four strong arms, and two tough legs, and even more powerful wings.
“Poison jab!” The Moscombat punched deep into the Canarace's neck, causing it to screech, and drop the communicator in pain.

Opal lifted up himself from the fresh grass. “....Nock, where did you go off too?” But Nock didn't answer, instead he glared at the Canarace that was flying slowly away. It was badly poisoned. Nock threw an empty Pokeball at the bird. The ball fell to the floor. One roll, two, three, captured. Nock bent over to where the ball was and picked it up.

“Nock! Why did you capture that thing?” Opal said angered as he got to his feet.

“The 'thing' was poisoned. If I allowed it to go free, then it wouldn't have survived for very long. That's why.” Nock answered, attaching the pokeball to his belt, and recalled his Moscombat.

“Alright, fine. It's neutral, at least.....What's that behind your leg?” Opal said confused.

“There isn't anything behind my leg. Get your eyes checked.” He returned, but Nock was not acting right. He changed the subject. “I was examining the lake for that Pokemon said to live here, and if Team Daybreak's base was hidden around here. But then that bird came flying by so fast it knocked my off my feet. It stole my communicator from me, and left.”

Opal knew Nock was hiding something from him, but he looked down at Nock's communicator and kneeled down to pick it up. “It's busted.”

“Oh well, headquarters will give me a new one, I'm sure.” He said as he took off one of his gloves and pushed all his hair from his face. Something moved behind his leg.

“Piika!” The creature said from behind Nock's leg.

“A Pikachu? Oh no, you have to get rid of that!” Opal said in panic.

“No I don't. Nightfall will never know I have it.”

“Your wrong. Pikachu is considered a daylight Pokemon. You can't keep it with you. Nightfall elites and admins check all the grunts Pokemon to make sure they don't ever break the rules, or they get kicked out of the team.” Opal said.

“....I just don't understand. It's the only thing I don't get about Nightfal's rules. Why, just because we are in Team Nightfall, we are unable to have certain Pokemon....” Nock said, with a sad tone, looking down at the Pikachu that was clinging to his leg.

“Don't be a baby, remember that your even older than me, too. We can't keep Pokemon that are generally diurnal and sleep at night, when nighttime is when we operate. Think. If me and you went around with Pokemon that normally function during day, then they would be too tired to work at night. And plus, people who represent nighttime would look stupid being with a Sunflora.” Opal expalined.

“Right. I understand. I'll get rid of it....” Nock said, but Opal could tell he wasn't sure he would get rid of it.

“It's alright, if you find a Luchu, you can have that. They're even better than Pikachu's are, and they're nocturnal too, and having it won't result in being expelled or punished.” Opal said trying to ease any pain and uneasiness Nock may have had.

“Right, A Luchu. I'll get one of those, then.” He turned his gaze to the Pikachu. “Go away! Get out of here! You should be asleep during the night. Go!” Scared, the Pikachu ran far away through the trees. “....Rule number one....” Nock took a deep breath. “Operate for the sake of the night.”

“Rule number two.” Opal continued. “Performing treason in any way, will result in severe punishment.”

“Rule number three, work in the night, keep true to the dark, live for nighttime, because soon, night will be all there is.” Nock added.

“And that, is our goal. Nighttime....Always. Now let's return to the headquarters.” Opal said and turned, walking away. Nock following.

Nock turned his head back to the spot they were just in, as if looking for that Pikachu to return.
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The Present is Redeemable
And You Can Be Happy Even if You're

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chanchimi

With a Side of Cheddar

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Posted July 23rd, 2011
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This is still very interesting. Will you be adding members of Team Daybreak to the cast as well?

I think it'd be pretty cool to see sides of the story from members of both teams, so I will still be waiting for another chapter.

Awesome, and keep it up.
Yep! Team Daybreaks side will come soon with it's members as well.

Thank you for commenting on this, too!
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The Present is Redeemable
And You Can Be Happy Even if You're

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chanchimi

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Chapter 3- Good Morning!

I'm beginning this chapter with a change, now the story is in the point of view of Team Daybreak.

And new Fakemon are introduced as well: Brushbun:Rabbit Pokemon-Grass Type. 2'01 ft, 27 lbs./ A grass rabbit Pokemon. Generally happy-go-lucky, they love to have fun. Brushbun's are popular Pokemon when it comes to beginners who plan on participating in battles. The healthier a Brushbun, the bigger the leaves on it's ears are.
Flyeid Tiny Fly Pokemon- Bug Type. 1'01, 10lbs./ A small bug Pokemon that is capable of reaching speeds of over 75mph, an amazing speed for it's size. It's large eyes are known to have crystal-clear vision.
Wolfaux Imitation Pokemon- Normal/Dark Type. 5'00 ft, 162lbs./ A wolf-like Pokemon with the features of a wolf but with two long Doduo legs. They tend to be sly and enjoy tricking people and Pokemon.
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Team Member Personal File-ID NO# 791414-DB
Name: Jade
Identification #: 791414
Rank: Area Surveyor Rank 1
Affiliation: Team Daybreak
Gender: Female
Current Age: 16
Height: 5'4
Eye Color: Deep Green
Hair Color: Dark Blue
Previous Experience/Occupation: Education-11th Grade High School/Job-None

Original Application- Hello, my name is Jade. I'd very much like to join Team Daybreak. I am confident I would be a very helpful member to this team, I'm reliable and responsible, you also couldn't find a harder worker than myself. Please look over this applictation and I hope to become a member soon. Thank you very much. -Jade-

Skill Proficiency Level: 7/10- Skilled in Surveying
Current Team: Brushbun-Lv.15/Male
Flyeid-Lv.10/Male


“As many of you are probably aware of this, a group of Nightfall grunts investigated this area of Daybreak Lake last night.” A voice echoed through many intercoms. “Thankfully, they didn't manage to find the underground entrance to our base. I want everyone to be on the look-out for any suspicious activity around the base. Other than that, continue your work as usual. That is all.”

“Idiot Nightfall's. They're so stupid, they wouldn't be able to see the ground beneath their own feet working during the nighttime.” A young girl said as she made her way through a long hallway.

“Yo, Jade. The boss told me to let you know that it's your job to head out and make your way over to Luminet City. I mean, not all in one day, since it's two cities over, whoops! I mean, uh, a town, and one city over.” A tall teenage boy said to the young girl, Jade.

“Yeah, I get it, Brem.” She replied, annoyed.

“Uh, well, just letting you know.”

“So what happens when I get there?” She asked Brem.

“They'll let you know when you get there.” Brem responded nervously. “See ya.”

“Bye.” Jade said as she made it to a steep staircase and walked up. The staircase lead to the exit of the Daybreak base. “Here, you can come along with me.” Jade said and sent out a rabbit-like Pokemon out of it's pokeball.

“Brubun!” It screeched in joy. The rabbit Pokemon, Brushbun, followed Jade in delight.

“It's gonna take about a day to make it to Luminet City from here, and about six hours to make it Applains Town. Soooo, in six hours it'll be dark, so we'll spend the night in a hotel in Applains Town and continue in the morning.”

So Jade and Brushbun walked for hours. She began to get tired after four hours. She kept pressing on anyways, but stopped after she realized she was being followed. She heard steps in synch with her own for the past hour, but she didn't think much of it. Now, she was getting suspicious. Could it be someone from Nightfall? No, that couldn't be right, they never come out in the daylight. So then who could it be?

Jade turned around and what she saw was no human she'd ever seen before. Her eyes locked with those of a Wolfaux, an adult-sized one at that.

“Crud.” Was all she could say.
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Yep, well that's chapter 3. I hope you like it, and thanks for reading!
The Future Can Be Likeable
The Present is Redeemable
And You Can Be Happy Even if You're

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Threed, Eagleland
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Posted March 16th, 2009
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14.4 Years
It's been a while, but this story is still going great. Kinda wish it'd be a bit longer, y'know?

Regardless, I thought you'd forgotten about this thread, but I guess not. So, as usual, I'll still be awaiting the next chapter.

Oddly, your story here is starting to inspire me to write my own again... It was a hobby I did back then, one that I definitely wouldn't mind going back to.