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Old December 23rd, 2008 (8:08 PM). Edited December 24th, 2008 by Likewise.
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    Intro:Hi, I'm ~Element, I'm a gamedeveloper/hacker and here is my game made with rpgmakerXP

    Story:
    You were found as a baby abandoned in the Brook Forest, a man, Professor Shane, found you and took you in, he gave you a place to live, food, he was like a father to you. But he kept two secrets, one: he was not your real father, two: He was a member of the watchers.
    One day, he never came back to the house, you guess he was just running late, until you see an email on his computer.
    (I'm not saying what it says xD)
    You become devistated, all you want is to avenge Shane, so you grab your eevee and run, you run until you finally find the watchers, you beg them to let you join, and they except, this is where the story begins.

    The watchers
    A group that helps to keep the peace, each is assigned to a town, but the most skilled roam around the region defeating people that put a threat to all you reside in the regions.

    Features
    1. Purely story based, gyms are there, but they are not a part of the story.
    2. Training spot, in the HQ
    3. Traveling, across not just one but 3 regions.
    4. Customizable clothing
    5. Something that will actually be finished.

    Maps

    Brooke Town

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    Demos
    None yet, don't ask or I'll make flood bite you O.o

    Credits
    poccil-starter kit
    Fangking Omega- House tiles
    Saurav- tiles
    Keyldove- tiles
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    Old December 23rd, 2008 (11:27 PM).
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    You'll make me bite them o_0...Anyway This is great! Storyline is a plus, and changing your clothing?! I love that! I can't wait to see some progress on this! Good luck
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    Old December 23rd, 2008 (11:38 PM).
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      Wow. It was a great idea.
      I really can't wait to see screenshot of this.
      I like the feature too.
      Keep it up!~
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      Old December 23rd, 2008 (11:45 PM).
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        mmm I really like the idea, it sounds very interesting and the idea of changing outfits is awesome, every1 loves a game where u customize urself
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        Old December 23rd, 2008 (11:49 PM).
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          Thanks everyone!
          You'll see some screens.....maybe tomorrow night (pacific time)
          Right now Im at a friends house.
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          Old December 24th, 2008 (6:40 AM).
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            You were found as a baby abandoned What, are you the 'chosen one'? Or did your parents just not want you? Adption agencies not exist? in the Brook Forest, a man, Professor Shane Is a Shane a tree? I don't think so...good., found you and took you in, he gave you a place to live, food, he was like a father to you How old is/was he? . But he kept two secrets, one: he was not your real father No mommy, then? Nerd..., two: He was a member of the watchers Now you gotta tell me what the watchers are....
            One day, he never came back to the house, you guess he was just running late, until you see an email on his computer.

            (I'm not saying what it says xD) Why not?! The world ain't runnin' on suspense...
            You become devistated, all you want is to avenge Shane So he's dead? And how foolish for a person as apparently important as him to leave his personal e-mail unprotected..., so you grab your eevee ...meh. and run, you run until you finally find the watchers, you beg them to let you join, and they except, this is where the story begins. ...what of the game plot, then? Just because there's a backstory does not have me convinced that there's enough here to fill an entire game plot...

            The watchers
            A group that helps to keep the peace, each is assigned to a town, but the most skilled roam around the region defeating people that put a threat to all you reside in the regions. So they're just a police force?



            3. Traveling, across not just one but 3 regions. Isn't that overkill...? How will you keep the plot runing that long? How will the players not get bored of finding the same pkmn over and over again?
            Refer to the blacks above...
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            Old December 24th, 2008 (6:50 AM).
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              Ooohh, mysterious! :o I'd like to see some progress on this! Good luck!
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              Old December 24th, 2008 (6:55 AM).
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              let you join, and they except, this is where the story begins.
              That should be 'and they accept'. :D

              The plotline looks original, something that might be quite interesting to play :3 I await your screens, ~Element <3

              Good luck with everything~
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              Old December 24th, 2008 (9:12 AM).
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                The story is alright, but it leaves too many questions, something that is and always will be a big turn off. Obviously the watchers have something to hide, but there's hardly enough detail to guess what any of the characters might be thinking.

                Interesting, but how long could you carry on the story before it gets boring? You need to mention things like an in-game plot, character development (and a description in the first place), and what makes this game have such a great plot that you wouldn't need gym leaders...
                P.S. Everyone says their project will be finished, few (more like none) live up to that...
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                Old December 24th, 2008 (5:48 PM). Edited December 24th, 2008 by Likewise.
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                  Now for an update.....

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                  made by me, edited by flood





                  Now for a map...

                  Brooke town
                  credit to alistar
                  and fangking omega for the tiles.
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