A New Journey!!! *pg-13*

Started by Jhotos_Power September 3rd, 2004 7:00 AM
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Age 32
Seen September 24th, 2006
Posted November 18th, 2005
873 posts
18.8 Years
it seems i have just arrived in the nick of time to help out kenta the greatest pokemon battler in history against the dreaded neo team rocket
"well u have finally arrived" said kenta
"sry if im late i had a little trouble with some rockets back there"
"well all that matters now is that you are here now, we will need all the power we can get to stop neo team rocket be prepared for the worst"
"yes sir"
"well get ready!!! go typhlosion!!!" shouted kenta
"go blaziken!!" i shouted
"use flame wheel" kenta said
"blaiken use blaze kick"i shouted
"do you guys really think u have a chance?" said a neo grunt
"yeah u have no chance against us!!" said another grunt
"go charzard"yelled the grunt
"go arcanine" shouted the other grunt
"use flame thrower!!!" they shouted in harmoney
as the powerful forces collied some thing so unpredictable happened something so horriable not even a hypno could of stop it from happing i WOKE UP!!!!!

Frostweaver

Ancient + Prehistoric

Age 34
Male
Canada
Seen September 11th, 2016
Posted July 30th, 2016
8,246 posts
19.7 Years
there's still no point in closing it, as it's not like it got flames or anything

and everyone starts out bad for fanfic writing, but you'll just have to be consistent in order to improve. Learn from your reviews and do better next chapter/fanfic ^^