The Master Ball

Started by Tamama February 14th, 2009 5:32 AM
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Age 29
Seen July 4th, 2010
Posted July 4th, 2010
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14.3 Years
It is the year 30XX(about 100 years past the anime). The world is overpopulated with people and wild pokemon are scarce. Better pokeball technology(an ordinary pokeball has a capture rate that is 3.14 times better than the pokeballs that the readers of this story use) has allowed trainers to capture legendaries with ease....except for one.

These advances in capture technology allowed inventors to create a Pokeball called the Neo Ball, which has a 99% capture rate, but even though this powerful, not so expensive ball has caught many legendaries like Groudon and Celebi, it has failed to catch the God of all Pokemon, Code named The Deity.

Only the Master Ball can catch The Deity, but there is only one. The process to make a Master Ball is very expensive and requires alot of skill. Also the quarry of the stone used to make a Master Ball had run out about 25 years ago. Even if one did have all the materials for a Master Ball, it would take about 29 years to complete and it has a fail rate of 82%(When a Master Ball fails, it cannot catch any pokemon and has a grayish hue).However one Pokeball maker had successfully created a Master Ball 50 years prior to this story(some said his skill was better than Kurt's). He had known that others were desperate to get his prized creation and he knew that they were wasting the Stone Quarry, trying to replicate a Master Ball like he had. Once the news had spread, The Pokeball Maker had to flee and before he died, he hid the Master Ball and it has not been found prior to this story.

There is one man who has tracked The Deity for many years and tried unsuccessfully to catch The Deity with a mere Neo Ball, but failed. He is Dr. Von Pikius and he is a major part of a secret Team called Team Bane, an organization that wishes to create super pokemon and wants to destroy 95% of the human populace. Von Pikius is the Head scientist of Team Bane and he is a pokemon geneticist as well as a pokemon transmutationer. He can fuse two pokemon's DNA together and can almost hand pick which features can stay or go(example: takes the legs of Ponyta and puts the legs on Geodude). He wishes to have The Deity to experiment and create the Pokemon that will help achieve Team Bane's goals. To capture the Deity, he must first have the Master Ball, which he has already tracked the location of.

~End of this Prologue/Beginning Intro

This is a prequel to another story I may write about and updates shall be posted in this topic. Do NOT post things like when is the next part, Pm me or something. I will accept other users characters, but only after I have gotten to a certain part in the story. I will have a set format for fanmade characters later.
Please add constructive criticism/praise and no one liners like "I luv this story!!!". If this happens, I will get a moderator to mod my story. If you can follow these rules, then enjoy and post with care. If the rules are too harsh for all the one liners there, then DONT post and enjoy this story.

I doubt Ill update this story alot, unless the fans really like it.
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Seen July 23rd, 2013
Posted July 22nd, 2013
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15.1 Years
This sounds like an interesting premise, I would probably follow it. ^^ But shouldn't this thread go in the Author's Lounge if you haven't actually put up chapter one yet?

However... if you're only going to update if we like it, why are you doing it at all?
Age 29
Seen July 4th, 2010
Posted July 4th, 2010
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14.3 Years
I dont feel like updating it alot unless it is popular, but I doubt it will be.
So Ill just update it when im bored.

Ill put up part 1 here it is:

Part I:

Team Bane Minion:"Sir we've found the location of the MB-001. Underground Mt. Coronet, Three Kilometers West."

Von Pikius: "Deliver The Master Ball immediately."

T.B.M.: "Uhh, but sir there's a few problems. The MB-001 is inside a very thick diamond like crystal and there are some very high leveled wild Pokemon guarding the crystal."

Von Pikius: "This is The Deity's doing. It must have been here long before we have, but there is no need to worry. Mwahaha! Minion, use the Gastly Clone I gave you. It should be powerful enough to get past the crystal and steal the Master Ball."

T.B.M.: But, Sir! That Gastly is only level 10! Those Pokemon over here are around level 60!"

Von Pikius:"Like I said, there's no need to worry. Gastly will get the Master Ball."

Part I Continued:

Underground Mt. Coronet, Three Kilometers West:

Minion: "Ok then if Von Pikius says that this Gastly will beat those pokemon, I must trust him. He must have some trick up his sleeve. Go Gastly!"

Gastly comes out of the Neo Ball. Gastly immediately starts duplicating itself and the other pokemon try to defeat the copies, but are overwhelmed by the number of the Gastlys.

Von Pikius: "See? No need to worry. Gastly will keep duplicating until there are at least one thousand copies. This is what genetic mutation does to Pokemon. Mwhahaha!"

Soon all the Wild Pokemon are defeated and a Gastly copy goes through the crystal to get the Master Ball and hands it to the Minion.

~End of part I

Will the Minion safely deliver the Master Ball? Will The Deity stop Von Pikius and Team Bane?


Part I is the shortest part in the story i think. I have some surprises in store for all the readers.
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Seen August 19th, 2020
Posted August 12th, 2017
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15.5 Years
Looks like a good book, however Chapter 1 is too short. It has to be at least 900 words, which is what I do. Try adding some details, not like a script.

You want this to be open, right?
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You may use script for your dialogue, but also include narration and description.
Three sentences that are not dialog is much too little to save your chapter. You should have a lot more narration and description of what is happening in your story. There is far too little in this chapter currently.

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