Love:3

Started by deliriouspurple February 28th, 2009 8:50 PM
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deliriouspurple

Female
Seen February 14th, 2016
Posted October 15th, 2015
1,519 posts
14.8 Years
Love is a word that I don't believe
Coz I think even without it I'll find relief
But this all changed since the day you came
You gave me love I'll never feel again.

You made it possible for me to believe in love
You did give me love as pure as a white dove
My life has never been the same
All have changed since the day you came.

You gave me hope and courage to face my days
So for these I wont ever give you rainy days.
I never felt this happiness all my life
So I thank you for entering my life

And now that I've already found you
I'll never want to lose and hurt you
I want to thank you for giving me love
And I want you to know you're everything I have.


So do you liked it?
¿Que Pasa?

Vie

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germany
Seen March 17th, 2011
Posted December 24th, 2010
1,113 posts
15.7 Years
I really liked it, but you could try to find more different rhyme patterns...I am not a friend of aabb.
there is nothing better than a love poem :3
If there is a light in everybody, send out your ray of sunshine.
7.4.2010 - My babygirl, my beautiful mess.

deliriouspurple

Female
Seen February 14th, 2016
Posted October 15th, 2015
1,519 posts
14.8 Years
I really liked it, but you could try to find more different rhyme patterns...I am not a friend of aabb.
there is nothing better than a love poem :3
I'll try....but thanks a lot.
¿Que Pasa?