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Old March 1st, 2009 (3:53 PM).
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I fared the placid sea of moonlit night
They dared to rush back to the fearless height
To soar the highest mark I thrust my strength
They pulled me back to where I'm restricted
Tomorrow might just see me one dead soul
And they'll cast their eyes on me that cold
Gone are the words that cuddled me for life
Since birth they missed to hit the mark
and when the sun rose from its grave
They tossed me all that they were
And the yoke I bore were theirs before
Should lose or win press to play more
The moonlit night runs through my veins
Day and night I wait the sea of dream.

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Old March 1st, 2009 (3:58 PM).
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change is good.
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wow pretty good:3 you're doing a good job
keep it up

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Old March 1st, 2009 (4:00 PM).
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that's quite good
I like it good work=]


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Old March 1st, 2009 (4:35 PM).
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wow that's 2, anyways good work I love it keep up the good job

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Old March 1st, 2009 (7:42 PM).
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stop calling me d:
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I liked it good work you got thereC:

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Old March 6th, 2009 (4:24 PM).
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good work on that I liked it

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Old March 18th, 2009 (1:23 AM).
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I think I learned something about here...

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Old March 21st, 2009 (8:30 PM).
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I liked it, it's good....nice work you got there.
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Old March 26th, 2009 (5:38 PM).
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Good poem, great work ya got there!

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