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Old March 1st, 2009 (7:31 PM).
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It doesn't matter how fast your wish come true;
The only thing that matters is that it was wished by you.
Love is something that can make you come back in just one sway.
Anger makes you lonely and gray;
Happiness makes you happy with sunshine rays.
Somethings are wrong and few are right
But true love is something you can't fight.
All these feelings may fade away,
But all will come back another day.

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Old March 1st, 2009 (7:35 PM).
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I liked it again pretty good job C:
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Old March 1st, 2009 (7:41 PM).
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wow! you made another one C: pretty good work!
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Old March 2nd, 2009 (9:34 PM).
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good work you got there:3
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Old March 2nd, 2009 (11:38 PM).
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pretty good poetry good work.
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Old March 7th, 2009 (4:56 AM).
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well that's feelings
good work I liked it

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Old March 21st, 2009 (8:16 PM).
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How cute it rhymes too, I like it good work on that.
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Old March 26th, 2009 (5:30 PM).
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Cool I like your work there..I wish I can do that too.
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Old April 3rd, 2009 (2:44 AM).
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y does everyone keep saying good work?....its like a house of mirrors or something?....anyway great poem....honestly....not to hurt ur feelings....bu the ryhme just doesnt sit right with me.....but all in all really good!
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