Suzume tries some spriting

Started by Suzume March 3rd, 2009 9:36 AM
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Recently I've started to sprite a little for my own fun. First I just wanted to sprite some of my fakemon, but recently I've done some revamping too. Tell me what you think! ^^

Scratches:

V.2:
Mawile pre-evo, 'Mawley'. These are the first sprites I ever made, and now I realize that the light source isn't where it's supposed be. I'll fix it some day. :P

The dragon-type eeveelution. I know it's supposed to be facing to the left, but I just ignored that rule while making this. :P
V.2:
Misdream, the pre-evolution of Misdreavus.
V.2:
Zangoose pre-evo, at the moment called 'Tengoose' (teddy + mongoose) but can change if I think of something better.

Revamps:


^My first revamp. (R/B -> D/P)







Devamps:


Other stuff:

Christmas Manene (Mime jr.). :3

Two recolors with the same color.

Normal-type Breloom. It still looks a little like a fighting type though. :/

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You need to blend the colors better on the Christmas Manene. Other than that, your sprites are really good. I'm guessing you're a bit experienced?

Anyway, may I use your Mawlie in my game?
http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=137545
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Great work and please keep it up. I know you're an advanced spriter since you can make both excellent front and back sprites.
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Wow, another great spriter. Your Mawley looks so good.
Keep up the good work!!
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You need to blend the colors better on the Christmas Manene. Other than that, your sprites are really good. I'm guessing you're a bit experienced?

Anyway, may I use your Mawlie in my game?
http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=137545
Thanks~ Though I'm not sure what you mean by blending the colors better, sorry. ^^" I don't know if I would call myself experienced, since I haven't done any other sprites besides these, but at least I'm improving. :P Sure, you can use it, it would be cool to see it in a game! :D I'll try to scratch some more of my fakemon too (they're all pre-evos or 'crossbreeds', you can see them in my art thread) so you can check if you have any use for them. :3 I made the Mawley sprites for a contest, and also made some stats for it:
Spoiler:
MAWLEY
Is born when two Mawile are bred. (or maybe they would need some kind of item, but I can't think of any ) Evolves to Mawile through happiness.

Pokedex: It is said that the cute smile of Mawley can make even the rain clouds go away.
(I made it like this because Mawley resembles a little those japanese 'teru teru bozu' dolls that should make the rain go away)

Type: Steel

Stats:
HP 40
Attack 45
Defense 50
SpAtk 35
SpDef 40
Speed 30

Attacks:
Start Charm
Start Fake Tears
6 Astonish
10 Sweet Scent
16 Copycat
22 Bite

You can change them too, if you want. ^^
Great work and please keep it up. I know you're an advanced spriter since you can make both excellent front and back sprites.
Thank you! :) I'll try to do some more in the future~

Wow, another great spriter. Your Mawley looks so good.
Keep up the good work!!
Thanks! ^^
Great sprites :D
I REALLY LIKE the Chistmas Manene( should be Mime jr.)
and Mawley!!!
Hope to see more sprites from you :)
Thanks to you,too~ I know it's Mime jr. , I'm just using its Japanese name more for some reason. ;)

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Sorry for double posting, but I just made a new sprite~

It's Misdream, the pre-evolution of Misdreavus. There's still something bothering me in its face, but I'm not sure what... The lower lines of its eyes are so black because it's supposed to have a little black on the sides of its eyes, like Misdreavus has. I wouldn't say that this is a complete scratch, because I just resized my drawing of Misdream and used it as the base. ;)

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You're really making ridiculously awesome sprites, Suzume. Can't wait to see more sprites from you.
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It's so true what HoF said, you have tha skill ;p. By picking the right colors I think he meant that your original fake (dragon evveelution) has contrasting colors which sometimes doesn't look good, soon you'll get to choose the right colors for your sprites as you get more experient =3.

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Awesome sprits, if you keep practicing your bound to get the hang of things.
I wish I could do this sort of thing, but I love looking at other peoples work and seeing how awesome they are. Yours are in the awesome section. =)

Keep the great work up!

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Your Misdream are awesome!! No I think there's nothing wrong with it ^^
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Thanks for all of your comments! <3
I love your Misdream!!
Maybe you should give it another name( to sound more like a baby)
Can't wait to see more :)
The name isn't actually made by me, it was suggested on DA. But I'm already pretty happy with it, so I don't know if I'll change it.

Here's a new one I made:


In the end I didn't use anything as a base, which is why something about the pose still bothers me... And I don't like the shading in some parts, but meh, at least it's done. ^^ I tried to make it transparent, but for some weird reasons it always left some transparent dots all over it, so I gave up. It's a Zangoose pre-evo, by the way. :P

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Thanks for all of your comments! <3

The name isn't actually made by me, it was suggested on DA. But I'm already pretty happy with it, so I don't know if I'll change it.

Here's a new one I made:


In the end I didn't use anything as a base, which is why something about the pose still bothers me... And I don't like the shading in some parts, but meh, at least it's done. ^^ I tried to make it transparent, but for some weird reasons it always left some transparent dots all over it, so I gave up. It's a Zangoose pre-evo, by the way. :P
Glad to see your new sprites again, they look awesome! The sprites of "Misdream" is excellent as well, but well, Crazyboy99 is right and I do think you may need to figure out a better name for this pokemon. Perhaps Moose can help you out, and I'm sure he's capable of coming out with appropriate names for any Pokemon.
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Thanks for your support! <3 I'm all open to name suggestions, because I'm terrible with making up names. ^^

I redid some pre-evos based on critique I got on Serebii:


Nothing big with Tengoose, made the shading little darker, moved the head a little and edited the right eye.


My God, I didn't remember how terrible the shading was with Mawley. I knew it was bad, but THAT bad? x__X I desperately tried to fix it, and maybe even had a somewhat success? :)

Aaand some other stuff:

Charizard revamp (Yellow -> D/P)


Meganium devamp (D/P -> Silver)

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Glad to see you back. The revamped Mawley looks spectacular! Are you participating in the Yellow devamp project? The devamp sprites are awesome too.
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Your sprites are keep goin better and better. Mawley looks gorgeous and your revamps, too.
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That Devamp is delicious. So good I almost mistook it as the original and thought you had revamped it.

The Charizard is top notch too! Please keep it up!
Thanks! ^.^ I'm glad you like them~

Glad to see you back. The revamped Mawley looks spectacular! Are you participating in the Yellow devamp project? The devamp sprites are awesome too.
Thank you~ :3 I'm also kinda pleased with Mawley now. And yes, I've done most of the revamps (all but Meowth) for the Yellow revamp project. Devamping was actually fun and easy, I might do more later~

These are actually pretty cool, Mind if i use one in a sig?

I'll be sure to give you credit for the sprite ^_^
Umm... Sure, go ahead, if you give me the credit. ^^ How can I say no when you have Ginko (<3) in your avatar? :3

I really like your prevos, especially the Zangoose one. Keep up the nice work.
Thanks, I'll do my best! :D

Hey Suzume! I made an icon for your Misdream! Do you want me to PM it to you? It looks rather nice, according to everyone at HOF.
Sure, send it to me~ I'll try to do a back sprite for Misdream too, when I have time. ^^

Your sprites are keep goin better and better. Mawley looks gorgeous and your revamps, too.
Thanks! :) I'll try to improve even more~