Suzume tries some spriting Page 2

Started by Suzume March 3rd, 2009 9:36 AM
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The misdream backsprites look spectacular! You have reasons to be proud of your sprites now, and please keep the good work up!
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:o Your sprites are just a good as your drawings!!! I'm amazed! I'm so glad you're started to sprite!!! ^^

X3 Wow, they seem so perfect I have nothing to comment on about.
I guess I'll just make one tiny comment.

I don't think this really matters, but the shading near the fire on Charizard could be brighter, like in the original sprite.

^^ you know, you should really sprite some more, your sprites are EXTREMELY impressive. I envy you. :)

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Yes, you must be proud cause you can make backsprites AND you made it beautiful. Great job, once again.
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Thanks for your comments, everyone~ I'll see if I can do something about the Charizard. ^^

Most of my 'random' sprites have been made for the Weekly Spriting Contest on Serebii, by the way. Same goes for these two, as I would've never thought of these without a given title:


Flygon with the colors Finnish flag, made for WSC 24.

This one is for WSC 23, where we had to make up another evolution for a three-stage evolution line. I'll just quote myself from Serebii:

God, I'm so tired of this sprite. x__X I worked with it for days, keeping MS Paint open all the time, and yesterday I finally got it done: I closed Paint, and almost immediately realized that I had saved it as jpg. @[email protected] I was SO mad at myself, since I had to start over with only outlines. With this version, I didn't bother to try many different shades of colors, I just took whatever I got. So, while the first one wasn't perfect either, I know this one has a million parts that look wrong, but I just don't want to work on it anymore. :P


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Those fakemon are really well-designed and nicely sprited. :3 Lovin' the re-vamps, too, especially the shading on the Articuno. Well done!




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There's nothing particularly bad about your work. Your spriting is good and is improving day by day. Just re-check the revamped Charizard's skin and the revamped Dragonite's wings: I think an extra lighter tone wouldn't deteriorate them...
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Can't believe I haven't left any comments on this thread for a while. I did see the new pre-evolution pokemon sprite and it looks even better than the previous ones. Keep up the good work, Suzume. You get my support and I will check out your thread every now and then!
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I love it! I think it's your best recolor so far. However, the belly looks like it could use more texture.
Thanks~ I think I know what you mean, I could've made a blue cross (which is in the Finnish flag) on it's belly or something, since the sprite was supposed to represent the flag,

Thanks to all the others as well! :3 I finally finished a sprite I've been working on little by little. Both sprites, front and back, are based on my own hand-drawn artwork.

It's the pre-evolution of Pachirisu, called Pachip. (I know that what Pachirisu needs more is an evolution, but I'm not good at those. ;))

I also made a back sprite for Tengoose (seriously, please someone think of a better name, I already hate this one :P):


I think both of the new sprites look okay, but they propably have some flaws as well, so point them out and I'll try to fix them. ;)

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Thanks~ I think I know what you mean, I could've made a blue cross (which is in the Finnish flag) on it's belly or something, since the sprite was supposed to represent the flag,

Thanks to all the others as well! :3 I finally finished a sprite I've been working on little by little. Both sprites, front and back, are based on my own hand-drawn artwork.

It's the pre-evolution of Pachirisu, called Pachip. (I know that what Pachirisu needs more is an evolution, but I'm not good at those. ;))

I also made a back sprite for Tengoose (seriously, please someone think of a better name, I already hate this one :P):


I think both of the new sprites look okay, but they propably have some flaws as well, so point them out and I'll try to fix them. ;)
Glad I'm the first one to reach your thread and leave comments. The sprites look spectacular, especially the back sprites for Tengoose. Like I said before, the ability to make pokemon backsprites is crucial in distinguishing outstanding spriters and decent spriters. You're among the top pokemon spriters already, and I'm not kidding.

The Pachip sprites look great as well. You may also make its head a little bit smaller if you want to. The tail seems to be too small for us to recognize it as a Squirrel pokemon. Well, this is really not a big problem at all. Does Pikachu look like a Mouse pokemon? Anyway, I love this sprite very much and please keep up the excellent work. I will check out your thread whenever you make an update.
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Thanks~ I think I know what you mean, I could've made a blue cross (which is in the Finnish flag) on it's belly or something, since the sprite was supposed to represent the flag,

Thanks to all the others as well! :3 I finally finished a sprite I've been working on little by little. Both sprites, front and back, are based on my own hand-drawn artwork.

It's the pre-evolution of Pachirisu, called Pachip. (I know that what Pachirisu needs more is an evolution, but I'm not good at those. ;))

I also made a back sprite for Tengoose (seriously, please someone think of a better name, I already hate this one :P):


I think both of the new sprites look okay, but they propably have some flaws as well, so point them out and I'll try to fix them. ;)
Woah! I'm amazed! Tengoose and Pachip look great. As for a name for Tengoose, why not name it Zhandy, Zandy, Zendy, Zendil, or Shandil ro something like that. Yeah, I suck at names too. :\ Pachip's hea dis a little too big and Tengoose's tail I think should be a little darker, as it is quite far from the light source. Overall, well done! :D

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Ahhwwww! Your pre-evolutions are the cutest things! ;D You are good at the cute things.

I think the Dragon type Eeveelution is pretty neet in concept, but it looks alot like a fire-type and it feels like too me it's got rubber skin. It's a good sprite but I think it could be much better with a little reworking.

Oh, and Pachip's head seems really big. I mean Pachirisu has a big head but I feel the tail balances it out. (Literally and visually)

I think Tengoose is adorable, and I like that name for it.




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I haven't seen this thread for a loooong time...(i finally found it XD)

Pachip:OMG!The Pachip is so cute!
Just that it needs a bigger tail and a smaller head.

Tengoose:In my opinion, its tail needs to be smaller and it should look more cuter :3(try making it smile instead of frown)

And...Pleeaaasee make more fakemon!:P
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I think Suzume is a little bit stuck with college stuff recently. Perhaps we can see more sprites from her this summer, but let's give her some time.
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All of your sprites are amazing keep up the good work ;)


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Thanks for the comments, and even bumping this thread after some time~ ;) Pachip's head is indeed too big. I think I originally meant it to be that way, because I felt like it has to be bigger than Pachirisus head, but now I see that it doesn't really work. :P I haven't done much spriting lately, so I haven't had anything new to update. But since Serebii had an interesting topic in their spriting competition this week, I made this:

It's a Sandshrew with a body style of a bird. It's still a pure ground type since it can't fly with such small wings. Personally I really like it. ^^

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Thanks for the comments, and even bumping this thread after some time~ ;) Pachip's head is indeed too big. I think I originally meant it to be that way, because I felt like it has to be bigger than Pachirisus head, but now I see that it doesn't really work. :P I haven't done much spriting lately, so I haven't had anything new to update. But since Serebii had an interesting topic in their spriting competition this week, I made this:

It's a Sandshrew with a body style of a bird. It's still a pure ground type since it can't fly with such small wings. Personally I really like it. ^^
And just where have you being young lady? :<
Good to see you're back.

The sandsrew is really cute, and I love the pose, but the beak looks a tad out of place.