Draciana

Credit to ME for the avatar!

England, United Kingdom
Seen August 9th, 2009
Posted April 13th, 2009
57 posts
14.3 Years
Revamps:
Revamps 1.PNG
silvercharedit.PNG
Just a few revamps I did just now. I like the Charmeleon and the Blastoise the best.

Poképarts:
scratch, edit and cut poképarts.PNG
Parls i've cut from other pokémon, edited, or made myself. It's just a sheet I used when making my fakémon, but not all the pokémon I used are on there.

Cut and scratch Fakémon:
made-up pokemon 1.PNG
These fakémon are a bit like Eevee, yet still lack a name and a base evolution. Also, all stages are not yet complete. They were made from bits and pieces of other pokémon and a few scratch edits.

Random trainer card:
Trainer card 2 by me.PNG
I got bored.

Click to enlarge.
:)


Owned by a pokéball.
(All your dignity has vanished in a split second.)

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Name: Alana
Friend Code: 3351 - 9822 - 8358

Only add me if I have had contact with you, be it trading or battling.

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PM me if you are interested.

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= GPR =

Birding Extraordinaire

Age 32
Illinois
Seen September 5th, 2015
Posted August 3rd, 2015
655 posts
14.8 Years
your revamps aren't really revamps...

you need to actually redo the shading to d/p standards, with the light source in the top right corner, and more than the the two tones of each color. your best bet would be to just rid of the old shading and redo it entirely.

they're just basic recolors otherwise, good ones, but basic.

as for the parts, anyone can cut blazien's legs off, or decapitate golem...they are irrelevent, and require no skill...

the "scratchs" (since they have copy pasted parts...) have one BIG booboo... you used paint's default color pallette. NEVER use those colors, they are horrible and burn the retina. It is scientifically proven...if i had a degree if retinology... but really, don't use those, they look horrible. as for the sprite's body form, it is very choppy and awkward looking, especially in the area of the neck. you need to work on making the body flow more smoothly.

Don't get discouraged though, this is all stuff you can make better if you practice and work on it.

Keep Spriting!
"In a world of chaos, the picture is one small rectangle in which the artist can create an ordered universe."
~ Charley Harper ~

Draciana

Credit to ME for the avatar!

England, United Kingdom
Seen August 9th, 2009
Posted April 13th, 2009
57 posts
14.3 Years
Thanks, i'll definately take that into account next time when I update this thread.
The poképarts were just...there...so I put them up because I scratch edited a couple of them.
I re-shaded parts of the Charmeleon.
And that was my first fakémon, so...yeah.
I never ONCE used the default pallette, might I add.
Thanks for criticising!
:)

Owned by a pokéball.
(All your dignity has vanished in a split second.)

- - - - - -

Name: Alana
Friend Code: 3351 - 9822 - 8358

Only add me if I have had contact with you, be it trading or battling.

- - - - - -
What I have to Trade: Scyther Eggs/ Dratini Eggs/ Trapinch Eggs/ Ralts Eggs/

PM me if you are interested.

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Age 29
In a box.
Seen April 12th, 2015
Posted June 5th, 2011
599 posts
14.7 Years
As GP said, you should just redo all the shading. Look at the DP sprite for reference.
Also, for the four revamps at the top, the outline looks a bit light. In contrast, the Charizard revamp's outline looks a bit dark. (I can't really tell if it's black or just really dark red/orange.)

But, keep spriting! These first attempts are pretty good compared to mine. xDD