Onii chan's art.

Started by super onii chan March 17th, 2009 3:11 PM
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NeonFire

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Age 27
Female
UT
Seen September 25th, 2009
Posted September 23rd, 2009
48 posts
15 Years
Keep up the good work and you'll be a master of the pencil in no time! You're much better at drawing clothes than I am. I don't know where to put the wrinkles...:/

Nice job on that first one. ^^ Any guy with hair like that has gotta be tough. :D
Age 30
Male
Cheesecake Factory =)
Seen February 26th, 2011
Posted February 6th, 2011
363 posts
15.4 Years
aw thanks :3, and trust me.. i have NO idea where to put wrinkles/folds. I just randomly put them anywhere. Theres a forum that actually helps with drawing and its pretty sweet, they crit on your art, and EVERYONE is nice. ^^ pm me if you want the link or if you want more info on it :P

I colored that weird dragon person i did up top ^^.
http://fc42.deviantart.com/fs43/f/2009/078/7/9/Dragon_dance_color_by_shinyhunter011.jpg
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ShinjisLover

Seen May 11th, 2016
Posted July 5th, 2010
3,043 posts
14.4 Years
If I may be so bold: You need to work on the facial structure. Right now, it's fairly bland and flat. It needs to be pushed outward. As for the first picture, the hair was. . Odd, to say the least, and it looked like it was pushed off to the side too much, making the face look disproportionate to the rest of the body.

The second picture had the same problems. That, and it looked like you put way too much emphasis on his stomach, making it look sloppy and unappealing.

I will say that I liked the female picture, except you need to work on your shoes.