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Old March 27th, 2009 (4:21 AM).
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    Well here's another poem of mine, I hope you like it guys, I just made it today=]

    Little Sacrifices

    Being a working student is quite hard for me
    Cause I have to work and at the same time to study
    And if I want to stay long in our dormitory
    Then I should be good and be faithful to my duty.

    But you can't blame me if sometimes I want to give up
    I'm getting tired already and just want it to stop
    But each time I think of my beloved family
    I'm inspired to stand and fight the play.

    Yes! Sometimes I find it very tiring
    To be on top of that stairs dreamed reaching
    But for a long as I believe that something special awaits me there
    All the pain and failures I'll surely easy bear

    And it's so happy looking into reality
    That even I've been in a world that's full of trickery
    My "little sacrifices" will fulfill my dreams.
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    Old March 27th, 2009 (4:27 AM).
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      Whoaa! you just made it today? awesome! I love that work of ya Hain! It somehow describes someone I know somewhere.....hmm//
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      Old March 27th, 2009 (4:37 AM).
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        wow! another poem of yours!
        neat! and you just did it today!
        you're pretty good in making poems. =)
        Keep up the good work.
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        Old March 27th, 2009 (4:57 AM).
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        Good poem ya got there Hain! And you just made it today awesome!
        Keep it up Hain!
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        Old March 27th, 2009 (7:13 PM).
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          wow that's a great poem you did Hain, great work and you just made it in just a day cool.
          Keep it up!
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          Old March 29th, 2009 (5:38 AM).
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            Yes you are really good at making poems, good work Hain!
            I really like it.
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            Old April 2nd, 2009 (8:50 PM).
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              Great poem Hain, I like your work.
              Keep it up!

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              Old April 16th, 2009 (8:17 PM).
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                I guess so...I've been all night doing that...but yeah..tnx..[give reps]
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                Old April 17th, 2009 (2:48 PM).
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                You're one, great poet. I give you my gratitude. [use my Reputation Powers to grant you points]
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                Old April 17th, 2009 (9:31 PM).
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                  That's a nice poem you got there...I've been looking forward to see some of your works sooner.=]
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                  Old April 23rd, 2009 (2:11 AM).
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                    That's a good poem, Hain. Keep it up.
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                    Old April 23rd, 2009 (4:22 AM).
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                    Hahaha! Well, your poem seems to have a great meaning to all of the students in the world...

                    P.S. = Good Job!
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