Some of my sprites

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Ok so i gave spriteing a shot so here are some of my First sprites and i think i did a decent job on them i

Revamped the joteon
Devamped palikia
Spliced that blastorise
And made the green thing with Big red eyes I call him (Skelts)



So tell me what ya think of them criticise it makes me work harder! XD
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You had a decent attempt at the devamp with palkia, although you managed to cut off his tail... and mess up the outlining...

um...jolteon has no shading... you need to fix that right away... it looks way to flat and unprofessional. And since i'm on the topic of unprofessional, you need to clean up after yourself! Get rid of those little marks that plague everywhere! Erase them to make your works more presentable!

As for blastoise/venu... you did a good job editing on venu's head, but then you kind of overdid the sprited with the plant... remember, simple is almost always better!

as for the green guy, it is your best work! it's got great shading, a good pose and good anatomy... i question whether you even made it compared to your other work... but i have been mistaken in the past...

anyhow, keep up the effort! take critism lightly, and use it to benefit, not have a fit ^_^

Keep Spriting!
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You had a decent attempt at the devamp with palkia, although you managed to cut off his tail... and mess up the outlining...

um...jolteon has no shading... you need to fix that right away... it looks way to flat and unprofessional. And since i'm on the topic of unprofessional, you need to clean up after yourself! Get rid of those little marks that plague everywhere! Erase them to make your works more presentable!

As for blastoise/venu... you did a good job editing on venu's head, but then you kind of overdid the sprited with the plant... remember, simple is almost always better!

as for the green guy, it is your best work! it's got great shading, a good pose and good anatomy... i question whether you even made it compared to your other work... but i have been mistaken in the past...

anyhow, keep up the effort! take critism lightly, and use it to benefit, not have a fit ^_^

Keep Spriting!
First thanks for posting and yeah that fake poke took me some time the other one's i just made quickly myself but i spent a lot of time on that one.

Edit here is a evolution of Skelts the big one with red eyes it took me about an hour and I had to restart 4 times because i messed up on this one hope ya like it.

I call him shonx
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Very nice!

The back is a bit rigid... strait as a board to be exact... but it is pretty good. My main concearn here is that it's back is so strait, and it's leafs seem to come out so rigidly, it is just a strained and awkward pose... the shading is good, but try to make it a bit more complex by tri-toning it... the two tone shading is too simple, add a lighter tone of green along the top where the light would be directly burning. I do have to say, this sprite as well as his prevo dwarf your other works. You're doing a good job. Just take the crit lightly, and well...

Keep Spriting!
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Very nice!

The back is a bit rigid... strait as a board to be exact... but it is pretty good. My main concearn here is that it's back is so strait, and it's leafs seem to come out so rigidly, it is just a strained and awkward pose... the shading is good, but try to make it a bit more complex by tri-toning it... the two tone shading is too simple, add a lighter tone of green along the top where the light would be directly burning. I do have to say, this sprite as well as his prevo dwarf your other works. You're doing a good job. Just take the crit lightly, and well...

Keep Spriting!
I like people critism it's kind of a thing that pushes me to work harder and better
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that's good ^_^

What are your plans on the second's back? are you going to change it any, what are you thinking?

i personally think you should arch it a bit, and have spines extruding that support the sail... but that is only my thoughts on it...

either way, can't wait to see what you do...
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that's good ^_^

What are your plans on the second's back? are you going to change it any, what are you thinking?

i personally think you should arch it a bit, and have spines extruding that support the sail... but that is only my thoughts on it...

either way, can't wait to see what you do...
I may do a back sprite for it but right now i'm working on the final evolution of skelts and then i'm going to do fire and water fake pokemon. I might try revamp's and devamp's out to but this time work on it longer.
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No no no... i do not mean make a back sprite... i mean actually fix the back on the existing sprite!!! It is so rigid and strait it looks funny... like i said, you need to arch it a bit more! Also, the spines in the sail need to stand out a bit more...

<sigh>

like this...


you see how the back is curve... like a rainbow? follow the red dots and you can see the back is curved, or "arched". Your is strait as a board... it is awkward...

also, see how the spines are seperated more along the top, so it doesn't look like a round fan? that gives it a more natural feel...

like i said, these are just suggestions...your sprite, your way...right? ^_^

Keep it up...
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Firstly, I'll comment on your Palkia devamp. It looks good though as it has already been said, you cut of the tail and left some mess :P. Also, your shading doesn't really match the Gold/Silver style. Unless it was devamped to R/B/Y style, if so, ignore my comment. Though, again as it has already been stated, fix the outlining.

On the Jolteon, it's not a revam. It has no shading whatsoever, and it still has a black outline. Maybe try searching up a revamping tutorial. Actually, as an example, I'll use a FR/LG Jolteon. You'll notice it has shading and the outline isn't all black. Remember, the light source is to the top left. Also, why does your sprite have a yellow tongue? :\ Anyway, look at modern sprites for help and information, and you could always look at a revamping tutorial.

The Venatoise was actually a good splice until you put the leaf on its head. It looks kinda wierd and ruins the quality IMO. Get rid of that and then it'll look good ;). I also compliment you on how you put the Venasaur's head on Blastoise's body and how you recoloured it :D.

The first scratch sprite is much better compared to your other srites. However, why has its head got a black outline? Also, why are its hind legs facing backwards and the front ones facing forwards. Also, again why does it legs have black outlines? Fix the black outlines and the hind legs and it'll look great! ;)

The second scratch sprite IMO doesn'nt look as good as your first one. For starters, it's head is way too small for its body. Also, their is the back issue which has already been pointed out. There are quite a few anatomy issues in this one, and black outline issues on the legs, however I must say, the shading on the legs are superb! Also, the legs are all facing the right direction XD! The leaf also looks unnatural, maybe make it more jagged? Anyway, I hope I haven't been too harsh and I must say, your scratch sprites are looking great! :D
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Well other people said what I was going to say but I'll give you a little criticism. I've seen you in the scrapbox and know that you hack. I would suggest a different palette if your putting it into a game. That's all I have to say. Other than that it's great.

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First i would like to thanks everyone for the crit it helps me work harder ^^

I may not use them in my game i just make them for fun also if anyone would like to use them just give credit thanks

I have two new sprite for ya

The final evoulution of (Skelts) I call him skites i need to make better names for these fake poke's

And another one a fire type i named him (poro) again i need better names ok here they are tell me what ya think
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I like them. Did you get your inspiration for Skelt's line from Treecko's? And on Poro The right ear doesn't have the inside coloring like on the other one so it looks like the ear is facing backwards. These are really nice overall though.

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Skelts looks awesome :D! You really have imporoved.

Poro on the other hand isn't so good. Firstly, as baseballscooper has already said, the ear looks like its backwards O_o. Also, there are loads of black outlines (too many!) Its design, however, is very good! :D

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I like them. Did you get your inspiration for Skelt's line from Treecko's? And on Poro The right ear doesn't have the inside coloring like on the other one so it looks like the ear is facing backwards. These are really nice overall though.
Yeah i know and i just couldn't think of another design for him and yeah i did for treecko. Okay here is the second stage of (poro) i've just wanted to do a lot of sprites today i don't know why anyways here it is its called (Picerow) bad name??????

Now (pice row ) took me some time also i had to think what he looked like it was pretty hard for him prob the most hardest i have done. Ok so tell me what ya think.
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Now this is REALLY good! besides the black outlining on the head and the arms where the light is supposed to be shining, this is near perfect! The shading is great, the pose and anatomy make sense, and the coloration is still nice. Again, the only thing that is a bit funny is the fin on the back...it seems a bit round, but the this looks really good!

Kudos to you!

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Um, i think theres a problem here, the fakemon ssprites are stolen. Ive seen these sprites so many times before its not even funny. This being the third time seeing them here on pc. I think it would be best to take them down, so a moderator will not have to be involved.

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Hey people who said they were Stolen don't be mad or anything because i can sprite a little if you want i can teach you a bit. Don't spam my page because its not cool and next time i'll report ya.

Ontopic: Okay so i did a little bit more i did a devamp of groundon tried to make him look like the 1rd gen poke and another fake poke and haters up there don't say i stole any fake pokemon sprites becuase i didn't. Here is a new fake poke named (lunke) need better pokemon names i did that one like a month ago so i thought i would post it.


Groundon devamped
luzke: He is a pre evolution of licktounge
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Hey people who said they were Stolen don't be mad or anything because i can sprite a little if you want i can teach you a bit. Don't spam my page because its not cool and next time i'll report ya.

Ontopic: Okay so i did a little bit more i did a devamp of groundon tried to make him look like the 1rd gen poke and another fake poke and haters up there don't say i stole any fake pokemon sprites becuase i didn't. Here is a new fake poke named (lunke) need better pokemon names i did that one like a month ago so i thought i would post it.


Groundon devamped
luzke: He is a pre evolution of licktounge

hah, youll teach me somthing id like to see you try. those sprites are stolen, and in all technicalitry theft of sprites is on topic because they are talking about the sprites you are trying to pass of as your own. id also really love it if you reported me, dont mess with sprite theft, not cool.

-KageX

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Hello again my haters i have a suggestion why don't you guys go and make a group it can be about hating on other peoples sprites because you guys suck at makeing sprites and you dream every night of makeing your own someday Ha!!!!!!!!

Serious guys this is your second strike if you excuse of stealing others people work again then it will be your 3rd and i'll report you both haters okay. So what i'm trying to say is.


Stop hateing on my sprites i didn't steal know ones work okay you spammers now stop posting on my thread!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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I believe you. Know one has shown any proof so as far as I know they're 100% yours. I think your scratches are great but Luzke's shading seems a little strange. I can't describe it but it doesn't seem to fit.
Thanks scooper ^^ Finally at least someone knows how to come on a thread and post a good comment or a suggestion and yeah i think his shading was kinda off also i may fix him up a bit.
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Hello again my haters i have a suggestion why don't you guys go and make a group it can be about hating on other peoples sprites because you guys suck at makeing sprites and you dream every night of makeing your own someday Ha!!!!!!!!

Serious guys this is your second strike if you excuse of stealing others people work again then it will be your 3rd and i'll report you both haters okay. So what i'm trying to say is.


Stop hateing on my sprites i didn't steal know ones work okay you spammers now stop posting on my thread!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

im not hating im making a point, i think the sprites are stolen. dont get angry give me proof theyre not. "...hating on other peoples sprites because you guys suck at makeing sprites and you dream every night of makeing your own someday Ha!!!!!!!" this is actually disrespect to members, and i could report you for that, but right now i plan on hitting you with theft. prove theyre yours ill leave, but dont you dare say that Gfa nad my sprites suck!

-KageX

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im not hating im making a point, i think the sprites are stolen. dont get angry give me proof theyre not. "...hating on other peoples sprites because you guys suck at makeing sprites and you dream every night of makeing your own someday Ha!!!!!!!" this is actually disrespect to members, and i could report you for that, but right now i plan on hitting you with theft. prove theyre yours ill leave, but dont you dare say that Gfa nad my sprites suck!

-KageX

Don't try to threaten me i could report you for coming here and accusing me of something i did not do and you don't even have proof to back it up.

And for that part on my dis you also dised me of my work it's the same like telling a member you couldn't do that.
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