here's a little flow i freestyled

Started by Desaparecidos September 14th, 2004 2:04 AM
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Age 38
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Seen October 15th, 2004
Posted October 8th, 2004
85 posts
18.7 Years
it's just about the things that are happening in today's world. basically really literal.


Oh no here comes the blast off outer space and Im still a castoff

Real gangsta with an extreme drunken style Im like kung fu jigga street fighter guile do you know about those kids with electric fades? We break bricks with the lyrics we spit, steel tongue jigga's that are for real and for one, Id like to take this moment in a breath to exhale we overcome obstacles we overcome fails, and another player get's shot and another player is left bloody hot, just like this beat it's getting fierce drinking 40's and smacking beers Im like a magician with words a technician of bombs you heard I can't be stopped it's impossible to defeat my apostles my disciples are battling temples of all that's holy and true
A hallway of truth and peace we stole the keys running our mouths but backing it up with iron fists and spinning kicks it's all a blur it's somewhat of a cure to the ears of all mankind we find we break we take the mistakes that are left to engulf the united states where everyone hates it's a disgrace but to who are we to replace try to erase so you hit the rewind but this time we stole the tape the cd rom with heavy arms you try to harm the youth with disregard of the censorship and pencilship you forge the name of uncle Sam upon the hand of every military man give the child a gun replace his feelings with articles of aiming for fun now we gotta kid with an itchy trigger finger and now the fields lay bloody and wars still linger we gotta fight for what's right if we want to live if we want to give a $%#^ but I do and I know you do but it's still a factor of the bible's chapter in which we studied but never took too seriously it's delirious it's a component of a stronger opponent each one of us needs to battle wish upon a new born with a rattle and this baby is innocent but is born in a world of horror and terror on which Im speaking and leaking feelings into words that I hope fly like birds into the ears of all that will listen and sign petition's to end all the fighting and lighting the flags and bags full of democracy and hypocrisy but it's too late and it must just be fate cause I can't reach all that hate so I guess I should just stop maybe just chuck this rock it's already passed two o clock Im a hit the lights so good night
Maybe someday the world will be all right
But not tonight
I can feel it won't be tonight
Yea I know it won't be tonight
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Age 35
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I caught where it rhymed, but it wasn't particularly following any sort of beat or scheme. :\ Even a rap follows a beat, but I jsut couldn't catch it out of that.


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Age 38
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Seen October 15th, 2004
Posted October 8th, 2004
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idk it was pretty easy to me. plus the rap i listen to is underground, and not commercial. that's how underground sounds. it's not all about cliche rhyming every line. but thanks for the comment =D
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Age 34
east siiide
Seen March 20th, 2005
Posted December 19th, 2004
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no offense, i listen to underground too and i could burn you in a rap battle. no don't challenge me, it would be too complicated to do here or even on aim... i can spit, ask anyone on sppf whose seen one of my old siggies...
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Age 38
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Seen October 15th, 2004
Posted October 8th, 2004
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18.7 Years
loll i don't want to battle anyone. it wasn't even an insulting flow. it was serious and literal.

thanks a lot Pika Wolf :D
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c ABRA l st a: my cat has aids :-(
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