Tell me what u guys think about this poem! I wrote it...so pls be honest!
Walking Through Shadows
Each day of my life
I feel like I'm walking through shadows.
The way the world is
Darkness is all that I can see
It festers in the air
Hate and corruption
Are fuel for these shadows
Death feels welcome
I fear the world is ending
And everything I know with it
Who will save us?
The future looks Grim.
idk about this one...really let me know if its any good!
its ok imo.
Theres a hundred poems about the crap in the world, you have to make yours stand out. Instead of saying whats happening (like walking through the shadows) describe it to the reader, really develop and bring all the emotion out.
They confiscated my monkeys.
Dammit sky! It's hard talking to cactus. I think my head is dying It's like being trapped in a room of smells