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View Poll Results: How is it so far?
It's Great! Flawless 5 22.73%
It's Good, But need some inprovements 11 50.00%
Bad, Allot of errors,(Tell Me how can i improve?) 3 13.64%
The Worst,( Why and how can i make it better) 3 13.64%
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Old April 9th, 2009 (3:06 AM). Edited May 14th, 2009 by pokemasterintraining.
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    Pokémon: Galactic Eclipse UPDATED!!
    Intro:
    This game is my first, team made game in wich
    You travel to space in a unknown Cause. Hi I am Lalakoops And This Is My Game Pokemon Galactic Eclipse. This Game Ventures on the Region of Karnaro.
    This game is made in RPG MAKER XP
    Story:
    You are a regular: Boy or girl, Wich ever you choose.
    And you go on a regular adventure, but by time you find out about a secret plot from Neo team rocket. You and Gary Prof. Morilin's Grandson Need to face the odds and difficult challanges To save the world.... so,
    With the help of your starters, Totodile, Cyndaquil, Or Chikorita and other pokemon, you will Need to save the world!!
    The fate of the Earth is with you......

    Play as Ash And Misty to help The World from the Clutches Of Team Rocket. Gary returns As Ash-Misty's Rival. Use Up to 240 Pokemon n In a new adventure that will Make you Fly throught space.
    Neo Team Rocket- Neo Team Rocket
    is Team rocket's Brother Team Commanded By Lorelei. Their goal is to get N-190 And Y-180 Two Mutations Of Ho-oh and Lugia, To Destroy The Ozone Layer of Earth So We would have to move to space, To their Home Planet Nimak, Were we will be slaves of NeoTeam Rocket For Eternity.
    Rocket Force 4- The Four Elites Of Team Rockets. Jessie, James, Butch, and Jenny, Plus Lorelei.


    Characters
    Ash: A small Friend of Misty. His Rival is Gary.
    Misty: Ash's Best friend... but sometimes she feels more then that also Gary's rival.
    Prof. Morilin: A Well Powered Professor Who wants to learn everything about pokemon data.

    Gary: Morilin's Grandson And Ash, and Misty's Rival.
    SCREENIES




    THIS ONE'S ROOF HAS BEEN FIXED!!!










    The members say more than that... i just did not put everything they say....


    Places STILL Available and needed
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    Spriter-CDrew(kindof)-Available-Availabe-Available- URGENTLY NEEDED!!!...Please....?
    Scripter-Available-Available.....URGENTLY NEEDED!!!
    Story And Editor- Xelios-Available
    I will give credits and my deepest thanks to all those
    who join Lalakoops Inc. And Pokemon :Galactic Eclipse
    REMEMBER ALL MY STAFF MEMBERS APPEAR IN THE GAME... THE LALAKOOPS INC. BUILDING TO BE EXACT LOCATED IN VIOLERA TOWN
    Credits
    Cdrew- for some sprites

    Support: Please support Me and my game... It will make me happy!!! Copy one of these banners:





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    Old April 9th, 2009 (3:17 AM).
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      Looks nice so far but more screenshots would be nice. You didn't even post one outdoor screenshot. Also the pixels on Blue look a little messed up. But other than that it looks pretty nice.
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      Old April 9th, 2009 (3:23 AM).
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        Your right, When i actually look at the screenshots, There are no outside screenies....
        I will get right on that!!

        PS: Thanks for Feed back!!!! Would you like to join me and help me make this game?
        If you do tell me what you are good at! hanks
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        Old April 9th, 2009 (3:28 AM).
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        More screenshots and can I ask what did you use for this, I would really wanna help you out if it is Rpg Maker XP.
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        Old April 9th, 2009 (3:41 AM).
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          Im working on my own game right now. but if you need i can fix the distorted sprite of Blue
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          Old April 9th, 2009 (5:01 AM).
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            Why did you make 3 threads on this?
            Anyways, since this one has posts, I'll keep this open and delete the rest.
            Here is what I said in the other thread:
            "I moved this into the plot and story idea space- just fill in the thread requirements for the Game Showcase section and I'll move it back in there.

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            Old April 9th, 2009 (5:09 AM).
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              I will rigt on that, And i made three accidentally because,
              When i made the first one, The computer froze and i pushed refresh, That might have resended the Thread,sorry Neo
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              Old April 9th, 2009 (5:14 AM).
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                I resized Blue for you:



                Now the pixels shouldn't look so distorted and weird.
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                Old April 9th, 2009 (5:35 AM).
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                  Thanks, I will credit you for this!!
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                  Old April 9th, 2009 (5:40 AM). Edited April 9th, 2009 by cdrew.
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                    no need, it literally took 2 seconds.

                    Here's a resize of the sprite used during the intro of fr/lg if you want:



                    EDIT: Whoops I double posted........ sorry about that.
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                    Old April 9th, 2009 (9:18 AM).
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                      Hi it's me again!!! I anyone is interested In Joining my team, Or at least
                      Help me with some stuff like CDrew... Post A reply on this, PM me
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                      Old April 9th, 2009 (11:53 AM).
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                        Before I tell what you need to improve, I need to warn you that you shouldn't make promises you can't keep. A demo on May 1st doesn't really sound manageable.

                        If you're going to base this game off characters from Johto...at least keep some Johto background. A baby normal Ho-oh or even a shiny one would make more sense than an unexplained colorful one.

                        Think you could tell us more about this "space theme?"
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                        Old April 9th, 2009 (12:04 PM).
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                          I'm just helping him with graphics and music, not the story :\

                          Oh by the way I finished the rocket battle theme. I'll pm it to ya in a sec.
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                            Before I tell what you need to improve, I need to warn you that you shouldn't make promises you can't keep. A demo on May 1st doesn't really sound manageable.

                            If you're going to base this game off characters from Johto...at least keep some Johto background. A baby normal Ho-oh or even a shiny one would make more sense than an unexplained colorful one.

                            Think you could tell us more about this "space theme?"
                            1st, The Ho-Oh In The Menu, IS THE shiny one From Poccils starter kit,
                            BLUE is not a character from jhoto.

                            2nd I will tell you more about the space theme after The demo, In the Demo That WILL Be here in May... Maybe not may 1st... Will explain with more details about this... You can Ask Proffesor- Carlos...
                            When the demo comes He will tell you about that...BUT I can tell you that 1/4 Of the game will be in space, That is about 90-110 maps....
                            Because This isn't jhoto... But after you rescue Elm you will be able to o to Jhoto.... Oh and there is No elite 4 You will need the badges to advance throught The V Rocket Squad... They Will only battle you if you have the right Gym badge....

                            Im sorry if it sound rude...

                            Anyways Thanks for the feedback If you have more than... I would gladly take it..... And.......Thank you....
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                            Ok...

                            Your outdoor maps need some work, they seem...bleh :x

                            But other than that, i'd like to see more progress.
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                              And that's where I come in (again). I can help you with your mapping if you need. It's fun to take a break from making my own game to help other people with theirs.
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                                110 fakemon??? that will take you a long time, how far are you?
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                                  I have about 65 Fakemon... Most are not made by me,
                                  But The guy that made them said that anyone could use them...
                                  The only Problem is The PBS i hate adding them in there, Plus i am horrible in adding status....

                                  I need help in adding a PBS any Help?
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                                    Ok...

                                    Your outdoor maps need some work, they seem...bleh :x

                                    But other than that, i'd like to see more progress.
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                                      pokemasterintraining, plz check ur private messages....
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                                      Old April 11th, 2009 (8:26 PM). Edited April 12th, 2009 by Xelios.
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                                        Srry for double Posting...

                                        I hve made some banners too....





                                        Dey r not the best of there kind... but if any1 wants to use em.. they r welcome..

                                        Hey, we r already on the Games Showcase..?????:D
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                                        Let’s be ourselves, let’s not pretend tonight,
                                        There’s life in you, don’t let me die tonight.

                                        Just as you wrote 4 a scribble of mine..
                                        Do not hold back emotions thine..
                                        Say it.. altho you may fear hurt
                                        But its a feeling you shudnt skirt..
                                        Go ahead..
                                        take your Try..
                                        Life dznt alwayz lie!

                                        It did hurt, but i'll never say
                                        Why my end comes this way;
                                        Honey, My sunshine roses are blue
                                        You'll never know, but my stars shone on you!



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                                          Xelios you do realize you can edit posts you have made. click the little pencil icon in the corner of the post.

                                          anyways did you get your game back? or is it still showing the errors.
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                                            Srry, just didn't luk... n btw, the old post is two days old.... i didn't want it on an old post...
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                                            Say it.. altho you may fear hurt
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                                            Go ahead..
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                                            Life dznt alwayz lie!

                                            It did hurt, but i'll never say
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                                            Honey, My sunshine roses are blue
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