That's pretty neat. I've never really thought about making a Pokemon poem before. (Oh great, now I'm going to end up trying to make one and it'll be a total failure.) Anyway, I like how you incorporated Pokemon into it, it made it seem...I don't know. I don't have a word, really.
There were a few spelling/grammar mistakes:
Originally Posted by Giratina's Server
While I sit with my pokemon pal.
Pokemon should be capitalized, as it's a proper noun.
Originally Posted by Giratina's Server
I see some murkrows starting to fly to south,
Murkrows is not correct. It should be Murkrow. No matter how many Murkrow you have, it is always used as Murkrow. That's a weird rule with Pokemon. Singular and plural are always the same, like sheep. Also, it should be 'to the south' or just get rid of the 'to'.
Originally Posted by Giratina's Server
My biggest dream will be,
Is this implying that he hasn't had the dream yet? You should probably change it to 'My biggest dream is' to make it sound better.
Originally Posted by Giratina's Server
That summer would be forever,
But that's not up to me.
No criticism here. I just really liked that line.
Originally Posted by Giratina's Server
The wind blows,
As my budew grows.
I liked the rhyme scheme here. Just capitalize Budew, as it's a proper noun.
Originally Posted by Giratina's Server
While drifloons cover
Capitalize Drifloon, and remember that both singular and plural are the same in Pokemon, so it is always Drifloon.
Originally Posted by Giratina's Server
The sun of my sight
Pretty metaphor. I liked it.
Overall, a good poem. I'd say 8.5/10. It could've been longer and a bit more descriptive, but don't try to change anything major.