i'm going to tell you the same thing i tell everyone who writes poems like these. Instead of repeating yourself, find something they all have in common and focus on that or find one of the stanzas you feel the best about and really develop it. Its like the saying "you don't want a lot of a little, you want a little of a lot" (dilated peoples lol). Basically depth not breath.
Hope that helps.
They confiscated my monkeys.
Dammit sky!
It's hard talking to cactus.
I think my head is dying
It's like being trapped in a room of smells