Montolio's Quest for Vengence

Started by Raichu Master September 17th, 2004 1:48 PM
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It's been a long while since I made a fanfic here. Actually I only made one fanfic here, and it wasn't too good or popular. So, with more experience under my belt, and more popularity, hopefully this one will be successful.

Chapter 1


"Wake up." A voice said interupting Montolios' dreams.

"Wake up."

"What time is it?" He heard his own voice replying.

"10:30. You're going to be late!"

"WHAT!?" He said snapping his eyes open and jerking out of bed. Looking around he noticed his father by his bedside with his arms folding.

"You heard me, now get up and get ready. You'll be late."

Not answering his father Montolio jumped from his bed and sprinted to the bathroom, that was located on the other side of the second floor. Once inside Montolio almost completely skipped his shower if it wasn't for the fact that it was already running as he entered.

Rushing down the stairs, his mother greeted him by saying, "Breakfast is ready, you should eat before you go."

"No time mum. I need to hurry. I'm going to be late!" and with that he ran out the door, and tripped over the first stair leading down to the concrete walkway.

"Oh dear, are you alright?" He heard a voice call from behind him. But he paid it no attention as he got to his feet and sprinted off again.

* * *

"Are the preparations completed?" A dark and mysterious voice came through the darkness of the room.

"Yes, master. Everything is in order." A voice replied.

"Perfect, now all we need is both Professor Klines'." The first voice hissed with excitment.

"Who, milord?"

"Montolios' parents!"

"Right away. But may I ask what for?"

"They have the information we need to complete the project. Bring them back alive. And send the boy alittle present." The voice cackled as his follower left the room and walked hastily down the corridor.

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Chapter 2

"Sorry I'm late Professor Oak!" Montolio exclaimed as he tripped over a wire and went rolling over one of his computers.

"How many times do I have to tell you, Montolio!? What were you are going!" Professor Oak sighed. "Well I'm glad you're here. You're just in time." He added turning to the three other people.

"This is Tim, Mark, and John. They too are starting out and have been waiting patiently for your arrival."

"Sorry guys. I didn't mean to be late."

"Well now that you are all here, pick which pokemon you want. You all are in luck. I have 4 pokemon. And since you were last, Montolio, you get which ever pokemon is left."

Montolio waited impatiently as the others took there sweet time in choosing. Finally it was his turn and he obviously picked the last pokeball.

* * *

A big blast came in the direction of Montolios' home. Montolio, who hadn't seen who his pokemon was, raced out hoping it wasn't his home that was under attack.

Sure enough, when he got there, his house was completely totaled with signs of bomb explosions everywhere.

* * *

"I've brought the Professors as you instructed."

"Good, put them in the holding cell, until I've in need of their service."

"As you wish"

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Ooh. Creepy. o_o

Well, I like the idea of you putting a misfortunate incident on his day of the Pokemon journey, although the idea of someone attacking someone's parents is a tad overused, but lestwise it's alright. Although you made it very suspenseful and made the readers want to anticipate more by putting whatever the mysterious people want with Montolio's parents, and the small 'present.'

Only real thing I would've loved to see was the details being worked on the length, to make a slightly longer. I REALLY felt you could've added more on some parts, it would've made the chapters a bit more to decent sized, as well as more interesting to read.

Overall, I am wondering what they want with his parents, as well as his first pokemon. It's a nice plot, the ones that makes you want to read more.

Nice job! ^_^

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First two chapters were kind of rushed, I was busy yesterday. Hopefully this one will be better.

Chapter 3

Montolio just stood flabbergasted at the sight he was taking in. Not only was his house destroyed, but there was no sign of his parents. "Mom...dad?" He kept mumbling to himself not wanting to attrach anymore attention, then what it had already caused. Montolio could hear firetrucks coming from a distance, and behind him he could hear people whispering and gasping, even though he didn't turn around to look.

He walked through the rubble, until he found something, it looked like a small sphere from a distance. What was even stranger about the object from where he was standing, it seemed to be where his parents room once was located.

* * *

"What do you want with us!?" Montolios father cryed through the rusted bars of his holding cell.

"Nothing you need to concern yourself with Mr. Kline!" A voice roared as a bulky man stepped forward, his face masked by what appeared, from where Mr. Kline was standing, a cloth drapped over his head but more sucere.

"Well obviously it has something to do with us, or we wouldn't be here!" A womans voice spat.

The man turned around to see Montolios mother reaching for her pokeballs.

"Go! Charizard!" The man roared, as a bigger than larger charizard appeared. "Settle down Mrs. Kline! There is nothing to be worried about, now just rest." The man said chuckling sourly.

"As it seems. You seem to be the one who's alittle worried about us." Mr. Kline said observing how quick the man reached to his wife.

The man than reached his arms through the bras of Mr. Klines cell, grabbed his neck, and then slammed him hard against the bars. "Now tell me why I would be afraid of either one of you."

Mr. Kline just shrugged, not really having a reason to back up his observation.

The abnormaling muscular man just threw Mr. Kline at the back of the cage and walked away. "You always were a quick one to talk but have no reason to back it up, Andrew." He huffed as he sat in his chair near the door.

"What did you call me!?"

* * *

Once Montolio had reached the object, he realized that it was a pokeball, an ultra ball to be exact. He only had time to pick it up before a man grabbed him by the arm, and swung him around.

"Are you alright? What happened here?" Professor Oak said.

Montolio just shrugged as he put the pokeball on his belt, and thought nothing of what was inside, and followed the Professor back to his house to calm down and recollect his thoughts.

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Ah, yet another mysterious chapter!

The part between the stranger and the parents was very intriguing to read, as well as their sole purpose of being there in the first place. I am still wondering about what Pokemon Montolio has, as well as who those people were that stole his parents away. The part when he called him 'Andrew'...now I don't know why, but it was also quit suspenseful to read.

The length got a bit better, although I still stand strong by my word. try adding a bit more details to parts where I would've really appreciated them. I can't wait for the next chapter still, and hopefully it'll be just as great as I thought it would be! ^_~ Good luck!

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Chapter 4

"Don't you recognize my voice!?" The bulky man answered back with a slight chuckle.

Now getting annoyed, Andrew thought of the only people how would call him by his first name. Coming to know possible match up, he just shook his head and said, "No I don't."

The bulky man then removed what was hiding his face. Andrew fell on his butt, wide eyed, as adrenaline pumped through his veins.

"Is it that surprising...brother?"

* * *

"The police are investigating your parents disappearance." Professor Oak said casually, hoping to get the young teens' mind off his parents. "You should start your quest. When I recieve word of who kidnapped your parents you'll know."

Montolio just nodded solemnly, and before the Professor could ask what was wrong, Montolio forced a fake smile on his face as he said, "Well thanks, Professor Oak. I really appriciate you helping out like this."

"Anytime, Montolio."

"I guess I should get going, don't want the others to get too far in head of me."

Professor Oak just nodded, and off went Montolio to become the worlds strongest trainer, with two pokemon, and absolutly no morale.

* * *

Before long, Pallet Town, disappeared over the horizon, that had transformed into a sunset background. "I don't know what pokemon I have yet..." He said realizing that fact as he ran his hand against the Ultra Ball and the Pokeball.

"Well I guess I should find out..." He said throwing the pokeball out in front of him.

"Machop!" Came the a voice as the small pokemon was released from the pokeball.

"Wow, a Machop." Montolio said feeling kind of awkward. "What am I supposed to do now?" He muttered as he stared at his new pokemon.

"Machop?" The pokemon asked curiously as he stalked over to his new master. "Ma...chop?" He slowly asked again as he poked Montolio in the leg.

"Hey, quit that!" He said jerking his leg away from the pokemon. "I guess I should give you a name..." Montolio said as the Machop wondered off trying to find something at least half interesting to play with.

Machop then lifted up a small boulder with one arm trying to find a pokemon or something. "How about Armstrong?" He muttered.

Montolio chuckled a bit and yelled over to his wondering pokemon, "What do you think about it, Machop?"

"Machop!" He said jogging over to his master, wondering if the boy had something fun to do.

"Do you think about Armstrong, as your new name?" Montolio repeated.

Machop thought about it for what seemed like an eternity. Right before Montolio was about to press him for an answer. Machop nodded, and said a quick, "Machop."

"Awesome! Now let's find something fun to do." Montolio said gleefully.

* * *

"The boy has the pokeball." THe same follower said to his master.

"Very good, very good. We need to make sure he uses that pokemon, and trains it well."

"Yes, but how, master?"

"We'll have to send spies, to check on his progress."

"Are you sure he'll be able to handle the pokemon, sir? Are you sure it won't kill him?"

There came a type of throaty noise from the darkness, and then two bright purple eyes shot through the darkness like a lighthouse on a foggy night. "Don't ever question my descisions!" The voice roared as his follower was slammed into the back wall. "Now go check on our prisoners!" The voice spat.

"Yes...yes...sir!" The man said scrambling through the door.

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Chapter 5

"Machop!" the pokemon said grabbing the other pokeball on Montolio belt. Looking at it curiously he asked Montolio, "Machop?"

"I don't know. Let's see who's in here." Montolio said taking the sphere from his pokemon.

"Pokeball go!" Montolio said throwing the ball out in front of him.

* * *

"You can't be my brother! He...he...he..." Andrew studdered in disbelief.

"You thought me dead? That's because my master told you all that. I'm apart of a new league now. My master needs your services, once again." He sneered.

"What do you mean...services, and what does my wife have to do with this!?" Andrew said.

"Ah...Mary...Mary Kline...I still love the ring of that name." He said walking over to Mary.

"What do you want from us?" She said ignoring his last comment.

But Andrews brother continued on his earlier statement. "Yes, Mary Kline. I do so love those two names together. But Andrew beat me to it."

Mary just stared coldly at Andrews brother as she ran her hand across her wedding band.

"Yes, I too loved you. But no matter how hard I tryed you always loved my brother more." He said his voice now bitter with hatred as he paced back in forth.

"Answer my question, William. What does Mary have to do with any of this!" Andrew said as his voice showed signs of his temper rising.

"Unfortunately, that is all past. How I would love to set you free, Mary. And change your mind, and marry me. But my master wants you both here for his project." He said turning so he faced both of them.

"I'd kill myself before I'd mary you, Will!" She snapped angerly.

"That just might be the case, after my master is through with you. If he has no further use for you, he'll kill you both." He said smirking.

* * *

The temperature slowly rose and the sky darkened as a pokemon was released. Fires started to sprout from trees and grass as a wind picked up, feeding the flames with oxygen.

"What's happening!?" He yelled over the howling wind as he looking over at his Machop.

Suddenly a giant roar shook the Earth. Montolio looked over to see a Charizard standing there proud and with a deadly look on his face.

"What is that thing!?" He shouted as he took a few steps back.

* * *

The room lit up, flashing red, with sirens sounding in the background.

"Project X541JI89, has been released from his pokeball!" voice shouted.

The room looked like a giant command center.

"His powers are under control for now."

"Enviroment is becoming dangerous, fires starting within a 30 meter radius!"

As these shouts continued a dark figure loomed from his command chair. His eyes glowed purple and he said, as the shouts silent, "Quiet! Let's see if the boy can handle the ultimate weapon, like we planned. If all goes well, the project will accept him as his master and calm down."

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On a side note..I won't be able to post anything tomorrow, cause I have an event coming up tomorrow that'll take all day tomorrow. So Chapter 5 is my last chapter until late monday afternoon. So enjoy! ^^

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Well, this is certainly a different start to the typical OT fic, and that's something many newbie authors find it hard to accomplish... but you've done it very well. Congratulations. ^_^ You've also captured the aura of mystery quite well. Even after 5 chapters, we still don't really know the intentions of this group who have Montolio's (which is a cool name btw ^_^) parents.

There are a number of things that concerned me though. The first was that you didn't actually describe the human characters very well. I have no idea of what any of the main characters look like (well, apart from Professor Oak). They could be hairless ten feet rabbits for all I know. They're probably not, but I just need some clarification because of it.

The other thing is the actual length of chapters. You could easily have put in 3 of your chapters to make a nice long one for people to read. If you just combine 2 or 3 together, it'll make it feel more like a chapter, and not bits of one.

Well, improve the character description, and make the chapters a bit longer, and you should be fine ^_^
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Yeah I guess I should have described the characters more...sorry about that...I'm used to rps where the descriptions of all the characters are at the beginning. I'll work on that with my next chapter.

As for length, I was kind of worried about giving too much information away in each of the chapters...I guess that's where description comes in, to act like a filler for the chapter.

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Chapter 6

The charizard walked steadily over to Montolio, which each powerful stride, he readied himself to attack.

Machop! The little pokemon said stepping in front of its master, even though Montolio and the small and rather frail Machop just meant a few sort minutes ago. Machop still felt a strong bond between him and Montolio.

Char! The giant pokemon roared as it sent a fire blast directly at the innocent pokemon.

* * *

Andrew, standing a full 6 feet stood up, to meet his little brother. He wasnt as muscular as his younger sibling, and certainly not as tall, but he still was smarter than the giant, and completely surefooted.

Awlookmy brother wants to challenge me. William Kline said laughing. At a height of seven feet four inches, and muscles the size of Texas, youd think it was funny if you were he.

Remembering his brothers cockiness as his weakness, Andrew just chuckled along with his sibling. Youre right, Im too small and frail, to ever match up to you. Instead I suggest a deal. Andrew said, now it was his turn to smirk evilly, as he ran his hand through his slick black hair.

What kind of deal? Will said, he always was intrigued by any type of negotiation. And that would probably be his down fall.

* * *

Armstrong put his arms in front of him to block the blaze that was about to be upon him. When suddenly Charizards firey eyes snapped over to Montolio to meet his. He immediately stopped the attacked, and looked at the 13 year old.

The Blonde hair, blue eyed boy, his feckles doting his face, and his slim composure, releasing a long forgotten memory of some sort.

The pokemon backed off, and everything going on around them stopped at that moment, the fires evaporated, the wind died down, and the clouds disappeared.

Now it was Montolios turn to gaze upon his new pokemon, and soon to become a valued friend. The charizard, who looked normal, excepted for the purple orbs that cut through him like a hot knife through butter. The piercing gaze made him flinch and turn away. Rubbing his eyes he set his gaze back on the Charizards purple eyes.

Armstrongreturn He said absentmindedly returning his small companion back to his pokeball.

Charizard bent down to sniff at Montolios blue jeans. Funny enough, Montolio didnt hesitate, and somehow knew the intentions of the pokemon.

Bumping into the stone hard thighs of his master, Charizard wiggled his nose. He then ran his nose all the way down his leg, noting that his calf muscles were also hard as a rock. This muscle could only come from riding Ponytas and Rapidashs for so long.

Charizards piercing pupils then softened, making Montolio relax considerable, knowing that the pokemon had accepted him as his master.

* * *

A pokemon battle. If I win, you tell me who your master is and what he wants with us. If you win, Ill ask no further questions, and do nothing more to bother you. That is if you can prove yourself strong enough to beat my pokemon. Andrew said as his pupils turned to flaming orbs, ready for a good battle.

Flinching at how tough his wimpy brother had become in just a slit second.

Unlocking the bars of his brothers cell he let Andrew step out into the hall, with no fear that his brother might attack, for even Andrew knew William could over power him.

Taking a pokeball of his pokebelt, that straddled his hips, his riding fit legs hidden under his black dress pants. Go Charizard! He said solemnly with absolutely no emotion, which ran an unseen fear in his younger brother. A fear that even Will knew, that meant hed lose.

Go Blastoise! William countered. He then gained confidence, You dont have your pathetic project, how do you expect to beat me?

How do you know about that!? He demanded letting down his guard.

Because your son has it! My master gave it to him as an early present, in hopes of accomplishing what you couldnt do! He laughed wickedly.

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I guess this ends my mysterious chapters, if not the next will...maybe not...I might be wrong, but don't get bored, cause I can guarentee plenty of plot twist and unforeseen powers.

Chapter 7

My names Montolio Kline. Montolio said introducing himself to his new companion.

Charizard just shrugged, apparently knowing who the young lad was. Before Montolio could say another word, a voice came from behind him. Hey, you! Montolio! the voice said, for some reason the voice sounded familiar. He recognized it as a girls voice, it was soft although the words sounded bitter, something about it made him comforted, even though he might not have been the right time to relax.

Whipping around to face his female intruder, he gazed upon, a skinny, yet beautiful girl, around the age of 17 which if that were true shed be 2 years old than he. Her soft brown hair was very fair, pulled into a ponytail, but if she had let it down, it would have came to the end of her shoulder blades. Her body more slender, and well rounded, he noticed. She was wearing a white tank top and faded blue jeans, fitting snug around her hip and thigh areas.

May I help you? He said now noticing that he never saw the young lass before.

Yes you can. Are you Montolio? She said her emerald green eyes piercing him like knives.

He shuddered at the look she gave him, then retorted, And if I am?

Feisty are we? She said chuckling, her eyes seeming to soften a bit, but still her gaze locked on him. Now tell me, are you Montolio? this time her voice was soft and calm, unlike before.

Feeling less threatened, Montolio slowly shook his head and said, Yes, I am.

She gave out a sigh of relief and flopped to the dusty dirt road. As she crossed her feet she said smiling, Im glad I finally found you. Ive been looking all over for you. Professor Oak said you had already left.

Now let me ask you a question. Whats your name? He said even though she was beautiful, Montolio wasnt about to let down his guard, he had once, and that left him parentless and without a home.

The names Elizabeth Conner. She said stretching her hand high for him to shake, since she was sitting on the ground.

Nice to meet you. Im Montolio Kline. Montolio said shaking her hand, for the moment her hand felt as soft as feathers, and he was amazed that any persons hands could feel that soft.

So what you headed, Monty? Do you mind if I call you Monty? She said leaning back on her elbows and letting the sun warm her face.

Montolio huffed at the goofy nickname, but quietly accepted it. Whatever He muttered. And then came to her first question. Im headed to Pewter City I guess; to collect the boulder badge. How about yourself?

I dont know, I have a message for you. But I forget what it was, so I guess Ill just stick with you until I remember. She said closing her eyes, her skin shone as the sun gave her face a tanner look, than it already was.

Montolio just shook his head and chuckled at the girls forgetfulness.

* * *

What do you mean!? Why did you give my project to my boy!? Andrew spat in vain. Not really surprised that anyone would do that.

To see if your boy had what it takes. After all he is Marys son. He said chuckling as he turned to smile at Mary but she just huffed and turned away.

Hes not ready, he wont ever be ready, I made that charizard to powerful! He protested as he was just about to command his own charizard to blast Will instead of the Blastoise.

Well, thats my masters decision and not mine. Will said still keeping his smile on his face.

Andrew looked at his wife and she nodded, guessing what he had in mind. Charizard hyper beam! Andrew said pointing to Marys cage.

Charizard unleashed the wraith of his hyper beam upon the cage, completely blasting it off its captive.

Lets go! He yelled taking her hand and running as he recalled his pokemon.

Come back! Will said chasing after them, making sure to pull the emergency lever on his way out of the room.

As red lights flashed red and sirens went off, Andrew and Mary narrowly escaped the guards by slipping into a crack in the wall. Quick in here! He called to his wife as he opened a door, and running into the pitch black room, Mary right behind him.

Hello, Professor Kline! The dark voice said to Andrew as he made his way in. Again the glowing purple eyes shone through the darkness.

So we meet again. Andrew replied calmly, grabbing Marys hand, more to calm himself down, then to calm her down.

* * *

So where do you come from, Elizabeth? Montolio asked curiously as he walked down the dirt road, Elizabeth walking at his side.

She shrugged, and said, I travel from place to place. Telling by the fine denim and cotton she was wearing, Montolio easily knew she was lying, but let it settle at that. And call me Izzy, or Beth, will ya Monty? She said casually slapping him on the back.

Yeahsure. Whatever you say, Beth Montolio said shuddering at the name Monty.

What do you plan on doing, now that youre parents arent around? She said, obviously trying to obtain information. And what of project X541JI89, that Charizard you have? She said now acting a bit suspicious.

Montolio whipped around at the mention of his Charizard. How did you know about my Charizard? What do you mean by project? He demanded, determined to get all the information he wanted out of her before they continued.

Well Ive been watching you in the fields when you called that thing out. She said noticing her mistake and covering it up, and not talking about the project. Anyway what are you going to do now? She said changing the subject before she got in trouble.

Montolio walked away continuing back down the path, sensing she wasnt going to follow until she got her answer. Turning 90 degrees and turning his head the other 90 he said solemnly, I plan on finding them.

Elizabeth seemed to hesitate, then jogged up to him, and said trying to change his mind, You sure you want to do that, Monty? Because I bet the people who kidnapped them, arent that easy to beat.

Rubbing the pokeball his charizard was in, he said, Thats what my charizard is for. Yes it was a rash decision, to use that powerful pokemon to take down the force behind his parents disappearance, but it was one of impulse, and he planned to carry it through no matter the consquences.

You cant do that, they could probably control it She said covering her mouth, she had already said to much, Montolio had pieced it together, way back when they first meant, but had givin her time to prove him wrong.

He whipped around and said, You know where my parents are. You know very well the powers of this charizard. You were sent here to keep an eye on me, to make sure I wouldnt try to find my parents, werent you!?

All Elizabeth could do was try to deny it, but she knew that her cover was blown, and shed have to confess everything.

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I'm so sorry for the extremely short chapter...there was alot of information revealed in this chapter, and I hit my first writers block for this fanfic...

Chapter 8

So you still remember me? The voice chuckled.

How could I forget? You took my project because you were jealous I was on the verge of making regular pokemon stronger than you. Andrew said still managing to keep his voice calm.

But the voice could sense the fear coursing through Andrews veins. So whats your plan now?

To escape, now that my son has my project I can leave this place satisfied. Andrew said now forcing a smile on his face.

All the voice could do was laugh, and said nothing more for quite sometime until Andrew spoke up again, How long do you think you can keep this up, Mewtwo?

As long as Id like. The voice said now growing serious, as it stepped out of the shadows, revealing indeed that it was Mewtwo. And youll stay here if you know whats good for you. He said raising his hand and jerking it to the left.

Andrew levitated off his feet and slammed into the wall of the room that lay on the left side. You do know my son will come after you. Andrew said only chuckling as he got to his feet.

Mary just stood there, trying not to show any fear but when Mewtwo came to face her, her facade wore off and she took two steps back, wanting to run, but there was no way shed leave her husband her to face this monster alone.

* * *

Fine. She retorted as she turned to face him.

Im waiting. Montolio said crossing his arms.

Im a spy, for the one responsible for your parents disappearance. You have his project that hes been working on. That charizard is the strongest in the world, and the one responsible for all this wants it badly, but cant have it, instead hes having you raise it for him, and then put you under his control. She said sitting down on a rock, she knew her cover was blown, Montolio was smarter than she anticipated and that was her downfall. She had no choice but to explain everything.

Who is this One guy anyway? He asked.

She meerly shrugged, I dont really know, I was sent by some guy. He was in the shadows, so I never got to see. That was the truth, Mewtwo always kept himself hidden, just incase something like this happened.

So will you tell me where he is? he asked waiting to see if this girl was a friend or foe.

No, I might later, but not now. If I tell you were he is now, then youll go rushing in with only a Machop and that Charizard. She pleaded, mostly because she knew she would be in trouble for telling Montolio.

Montolio just turned around headed back down the road. So many confused thoughts were racing through his mind, so many doubts and worries, he had no choice but to turn and walk away. He had absolutely no clue of what to make of the situation.

What are you going to do? She asked as she watched him walk away, fearing that he did want her to come.

He turned around, and looked at Elizabeth. Obviously Montolio at that point had control, and was to make the decisions from here on out. He just smiled and said, Well, if I need to train, then I need to train. Its off to Pewter City.

Elizabeth just stared, she had mistaken Montolio for a careless and rash teenager, but obviously there was something to the guy, something that qualified him for holding that Charizard. All in all she was ashamed of what she thought about Montolio, he was more honest than any person, yet tougher and brighter than anyone she ever knew. Sure Montolio wasnt ver muscular, but he had guts, and was willing to stand up for what he believed in, but what he believed in, she had yet to guess.

He then turned around to look at her, Well? Are you coming or are you just going to sit there? He chuckled and then turned around and disappeared over the horizon, or hilltop whichever comes first.

She smiled finally, thinking she had him pretty figured out, or at least knew what he was about.

* * *

Are you scared, Mary? He said chuckling putting his hand underneath her chin.

Go Charizard! Andrew cried.

Whats this? You think you can defeat me!? Mewtwo said in an uproar.

I can try! Mary run! He said chuckling menacing to Mewtwo.

Charizard go get him! Andrew proclaimed.

Mewtwo held out his hand to try for a psychic attack. But the Charizard was quicker and stronger than Mewtwo anticipated, and ran right into him, driving the light pokemon into the wall.

Charizard return! Andrew yelled as he ran out the door, running as fast as he could to the exit to the maze of corridors, the walls and floor was that of dirt like the whole headquarters was one big cave.

Charizard ignored the orders and grabbed his master and his wife and flew through the wide corridors.

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Chapter 9

"Quit that!" Elizabeth said as Montolio bandaged her arm, wraping it tightly.

"Quit moving and maybe I can finish!" Montolio answered finishing up his bandaging.

"You didn't have to wrap it so tightly..." She complained, getting up from the stump she was sitting on.

"Well if you wouldn't have been wondering aimlessly, maybe that Beedrill might have left you alone." Montolio spat, irritated by how winy the girl was.

"Well if you wouldn't have got us lost in this forest, maybe I wouldn't have got attacked!" She replied equally sharp.

"We aren't lost!" Montolio protested looking around, the truth was he had managed to get lost, he had never traveled through Viridian Forest before.

"Oh yeah? Then where are we!?" She demanded.

"I...we...we're in a forest." He replied.

"Duh, but do you know where we are in the forest?" She challenged.

"Ye...yes..." Montolio said.

"Then where are we?"

"Why should I tell you?" Montolio said stubbornly as he crossed his arms.

"We're lost..." She sighed and then sat back on the stump she had previously been sitting on.

* * *

"Go Charizard!" Andrew Kline encouraged his charizard as they neared the exit.

"Get them!" Mewtwo commanded to his menions. And shutting the door to the headquarters.

"Charizard! Fire blast!" Andrew yelled closing his eyes.

Charizard successfully melted the door and flew into the clear blue sky.

Mary and Andrew had to sheild there eyes from the glare of the sun, since they had been in that cave for so long.

Charizard flew as fast as he could away from the island that laid close to the seafoam islands which was alitte south of them. And headed up towards Saffron City.

On the outskirts of Saffron, he landed gracefully, yet completely out of energy.

"We did it! We escaped!" Andrew said hopping to the ground throwing his hands up victoriously.

"But Mewtwo will be after us." Mary said as she slid off Charizards back.

Returning Charizard, Andrew smiled and said, "Don't worry, let's just try and get to our son before he does."

"But where is he?" She insisted.

"Well he has to be around Pewter City right now. So let's go to Cerolean City and meet him there!"

* * *

"Armstrong go!" he said sending his Machop into battle with a wild Pidgeotto.

"Cross chop!" Montolio said confidently. Armstrong, jumped into the air but missed as the Pidgeotto took flight.

"Return Armstrong." He said holding its pokeball out in front of him.

"Go Charizard!" Montolio said throwing the Ultra Ball out infront of him.

Charizard roared and the took flight into the air with the bird.

Charizard, who had understood its masters intent from the get go, grabbed the bird pokemon and threw it down to the ground with a seismic toss attack. And then slapped it with its wing. The Pidgeotto rolled helplessly into a rock.

Montolio just stared at its pokemon. "Wow..."

"What did you expect!?" Elizabeth said watching the battle from behind him.

"Well...I...um...uh..." He studdered turned his head to face her.

Her expression was as hard as ever, and looked like she was about to slap him. "That Charizard is special, I myself don't know it's powers but it seems to know what your intentions are when you send it into battle. Now just capture the Pidgeotto and we can get on with trying to find our way out of here!" She said noticing the confussed look on Montolios face.

Montolio nodded, and said, "Go Pokeball!"

* * *

"Where do you think they're going?" Will asked his master as they watched the two fly off.

"Most likely to find their son. Little do they know we have a spy with him, so we know where he is." Mewtwo said turning around and heading back into his cave.

"What are we going to do?" Will demanded as he caught up with Mewtwo.

"Nothing for now...just monitor Montolios actions, and observe the powers of that project." Mewtwo answered disappearing completely, obviously going to his secret base, hidden deep within the headquarters.

* * *

"Yes! I caught a Pidgeotto!" montolio said jumping into the air happily.

"Good for you now let's go." Elizabeth said coldly, she didn't like being in the forest, and she didn't like bugs, so she wanted to get out of there most of all.

Charizard followed the girl leaving Montolio by himself.

"Hey guys wait for me!" Montolio called running to catch up with them.

Returning charizard to his pokeball, Elizabeth suggested, "You should give it a nickname."

"What?" Montolio said not really hearing the question in the first place.

"You should name your charizard, as well as your Pidgeotto." She repeated more clearly.

"Yeah, I should. But that can wait, let's get out of here first." he said with a nod, of course he wanted to stop and take time to name them. But he knew as long as they were in the forest, Elizabeth would keep hounding him to continue on.

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"Finally!" Elizabeth said as they made it out of the forest. "Thank god, we made it out!"

"It's like you doubted my sense of direction." Montolio said walking passed her.

"You knew where you were all along didn't you!" She said finally putting the peices together, that Montolio was just pulling her leg about being lost.

"Hey I said we weren't lost, but you insisted that we were, so I just agreed with you, so you would shut up." Montolio grinned as he turned around.

"Ew...you're a real jerk sometimes..." She muttered as she caught up to him.

"No I'm not. you've only known me for a day. Can't judge a book by it's cover." Montolio said as they neared the pokemon center.

"I guess not..." she said. By the way her face was set, it looked like she was in deep thought, apparently regretting something that she did.

"Is there anything wrong?" he asked noticing the way she was frowning.

"Um...nothing's wrong..." She said blushing out of embarrasment, the truth was there was something bothering her, something she agreed to long ago, but now she's finally regretting it.

"Well it's getting late. Tomorrow we face Brock. We should rest up before then." Montolio said opening the door for Elizabeth, and then walking in behind her.

Noticing how polite he was being, she turned around and her face turned cold. "Why are you being so polite!?"

"What do you mean?" Montolio asked innocently, he had no clue why she was acting up again.

Eyeing him suspiciously she continued, "First you include me by saying 'we're facing brock'. And then you open the door for me!"

Montolio, who was still confused at what she was getting at, just meerly said, "You're my travel buddy, so of course you'll be by myside in the battle tomorrow. And I was just doing what I always do."

Elizabeths face turned red again from embarrasment, but still kept thinking that he was trying something funny. "Your travel buddy!? Since when!? And being polite? The way you treated me in the forest, you don't have a polite side. What are you trying to do?"

"Well I just figured since you've been with me since pallet town, that you were going to stay with me through this whole thing. I fix your arm, and then you accuse me of getting us lost, then you go off on me for being myself. i've showed you nothing but kindness, and all you can repay me with is this?" Montolio spat. "If you don't want to join me, then I guess this is good bye." he shruged as he passed her.

She just watched, trying to figure out if he was telling the truth or telling her a bunch of lies. Meanwhile Montolio gave his pokemon to nurse joy, and she pointed him in the direction of the rooms. Montolio closed the door behind him and sat his back pack on the ground next to the desk in the left hand corner of the room.

The next morning, Montolio woke up and slid his back pack on his shoulder, and exited the room. Paying Nurse Joy for the room, and taking his pokemon back, he went off to see if Elizabeth had gone or if she was planning on staying.

"Good morning, sleepy head." A voice came from behind him as he was about to exit the pokemon center.

"Finally decided to join me?" Montolio chuckled turning around to face ELizabeths calm, yet bright emerald eyes.

She huffed, her gentle voice becoming rough again, "Only until you're strong enough to make it on your own. Besides you need a strong woman by your side, to keep you in line, without me you'd still be lost in the woods." she said, even though her voice was rough, her expression stayed light and friendly. She walked passed him and went to leave the pokemon center.

"The way I see it, you're staying around because you need the protection, you would have been lost if it not for me, and you're the one who needs a strong man by her side." Montolio said chuckling, his voice friendly and soft, as it's been ever since he set off on his journey, through the accident with his house and parents, he's learn to be optimistic and keep an open mind. Also not once has he let down his guard, no matter how soft his expression might be, his thoughts and mindset stayed as solid as a rock, and as inpenetrable as his charizard.

Elizabeth turned around to listen but then quickly turned around so Montolio couldn't see her blush, that was the reason she was sticking around, that and to keep an eye on his Charizard, but she soon began to let down her guard around Montolio, even though they only just met. There was something about him, something that she could relax, and feel secure and comfortable.

"Well let's get going, Brock is just waiting to be beaten!" Montolio said walking passed her and out the door.

"Wait for me!" She called as she watched him turn the corner, not waiting for her.

Standing at the doors to Brocks rocky gym, he stared in amazement at how the gym resembled a rock, it was something Montolio never saw before.

"You couldn't have at least waited for me!?" She said panting.

Montolio sighed, "I figured you need the excersise."

"Yeah...thanks..." she said, she was just about to make an insult, when she hesitated. Not because she didn't want to insult Montolio for making fun of her being out of shape, it was Montolios expression that made her hesitate. The soft and welcoming face that she had grown to enjoy, and was starting to love, had become as solid as a rock, and his dark brown eyes were like flaming orbs, in his pupil burned a fire so great that not even the most feirce water pokemon could extinguish. Although she feared him at that moment, she soon respected and admired his bold look, it was a look and a determination that would save her many times on this journey they were about to enter.

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Well, at least the chapters have gotten longer. That's certainly an improvement on the last review. And the description has gotten much better than before. You can picture things much clearer than before. And the parents part has also been cleared up - I kinda imagined something like Mewtwo or Deoxys would be behind it at the end of it XD

You only really slipped up on grammatical errors. You often spelt Charizard without the capital letter, and often ended speech with periods instead of commas... but other than that - you're doing well. ^_^
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Ugh...yeah I'm tryin' my best with the grammar stuff. I'll try and fix it with this chapter.

Anyway thanks for the compliments! Yeah I figured I'd have to give up the mysterious part eventually, I was thinking near the end, but by then you would be able to guess, so yeah...

Anyway here's chapter 11 (YAY I made it to chapter 11! This is the farthest I've got in any fanfic ever! ^^)

Chapter 11

"Who enters my gym!?" Brock announced as two dark figures entered the dimly lit gym.

"Montolio Kline from Pallet Town and this is Elizabeth Conner. We've come to challenge you!" Montolio stated the determination still burning in his eyes. Elizabeth would have argued that she could introduce herself but she kept quiet, and stood at his side.

"Very well then. This'll be a two on two battle," Brock said walking over to his rocky arena.

"Agreed. Go Armstrong!" Montolio said swinging his arm wide and then throwing the pokeball into the feild.

"Go Onyx!" Brock said, knowing for a fact that this was going to be an easy win.

"Armstrong seismic toss!" he commanded.

"Onyx bind!"

Armstrong, who was the fastest of the two, quickly closed in on his victim. Wrapping his arms around the huge pokemons tail, he tryed to pick the rock pokemon up, with no success.

"What!?" Montolio said, obviously confused at why Armstrong wasn't following through with the attack.

As Brock's Onyx wrapped its tail around the small pokemon, Brock said, "Onyz is way too heavy for your small Machop to pick up. That's why he couldn't finish the attack."

"Oh..." Montolio muttered, embarrassed that he didn't think of that before he sent his Machop blindedly in to attack.

"Now Onyx! Finish it off, throw it out of the arena!" Brock ordered pointing out of the white lines drawn to signify the boundaries.

Onyx nodded, and with a simple flick of his tail threw Armstrong flying out of bounds.

"No!"Montolio yelled, that was all he could do, at that moment, he never had that happen to any of his pokemon.

"Use your Charizard," Elizabeth suggested quietly to him.

"Right," Montolio nodded and then turned to his dissappointed Machop. "It was my fault, don't blame yourself. Return Armstrong."

Armstrong let out a sigh of dissappointment as he was called back into his pokeball and huge back on Montolios pokebelt.

"Go Charizard!" Montolio said throwing the Ultra Ball into the arena. "It's time to see what you can do..." Montolio said quietly, wanting to explore the capabilities of the project before wining the battle.

"Onyx, this is an easy win! Rock throw!" Brock said smiling at the double weaken of the Charizard.

"Um..." Montolio said, not knowing how to command the pokemon. Almost instantly an image of his Charizard catching the rock and throwing it back at the Onyx popped into his mind.

All Charizard did is nodded and took flight. Onyx at that moment hurled a boulder the size of Golem at the flying pokemon.

Charizard skillfully stopped the bouler with one hand and smashed it back to the Onyx like a volleyball.

You happy now? a voice rang in Montolio's head. Can we stop playing around, and do something difficult? the voice said again.

Charizard? Montolio guessed.

Answer my question! the voice persisted, as the Charizard landed and his purple eyes bore into Montolio again.

Yes, that would be nice. Was all Montolio could reply, hoping that it was Charizard and not some voice he was hearing in his own mind.

Charizard nodded and flew back into the air. Spreading his hands and feet apart, Charizard prepared to use a fire blast on the Onyx.

"Onyx! Earthquake now!" Brock said before the fire came shooting down.

Onyx, on impulse, obeyed his master, slamming his tail hard against the ground, cracking the floor beneath.

At that moment Charizard let the fire blast go, hitting Onyx. While the Onyx was fighting to put the fire out, Charizard was about to get hit from behind from the bits of roof, that was falling apart from the earthquake.

Look out! Montolio cried, in his mind before it came out of his mouth.

Charizard, without looking, grabbed the huge peice of debri and flung it at the Onyx who was still dancing in the flames.

The peice of roof, that was about the size of the Onyx, smashed the rock pokemon into the ground.

"Return Onyx," Brock said returning the pokemon that was trapped under the rubble.

"Go Golem!" Brock said, knowing not to use a geodude on such a strong opponent.

"Okay do what he did to Armstrong! Throw the Golem out of the arena like a bowling ball!" Montolio demanded as he pointed to the Golem.

Charizard, who was no ordinary Charizard, thought this task under his abilities, and that the Golem should be brought down on its hands and knees, to beg for mercy. But still Charizard, understood that his new master needed more experience, so he did the seemingly simple task.

"Golem rock sma-" Brock was about to say but the speed at which the Charizard moved stopped him in his tracks.

Charizard had used a move, resembling extreme speed to boost himself from the sky onto the Golem, then he picked the rock up and rolled him like a bowling ball out of the arena and into the wall of the gym.

"Return Golem!" Brock said admitting defeat.

"Here you are, Montolio Kline from Pallet Town. This is the boulderbadge." Brock said meeting Montolio and his Charizard in the middle of the field.

"Thank you," Montolio said admiring the badge that Brock handed him.

Returning to the pokemon center so that Nurse Joy could take care of his battle worn pokemon, Elizabeth noticed that the flame that was burning in Montolios eyes was now gone.

"Nice job," She finally said after an awkward silence between them as they sat down and waited for his pokemon.

Montolio just nodded, seemingly busy with other thoughts.

"You miss your parents?" Elizabeth asked, trying to guess why he was so sad.

Montolio again just nodded absentmindedly.

"I'm going for a walk," Elizabeth said after about 5 minutes of silence.

"Ok, see you when you get back," Montolio said then went back into deep thought.

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Elizabeth snuck off and turned down an alley between two houses about two blocks from the pokemon center. Certain no one was watching her, she took out a small communicator out of her pocket.

On the screen appeared Mewtwos face. "How is the little project coming along?"

"Fine, Montolio just beat Brock," She replied.

"Did he use the Charizard?"

"Yes, and you should have seen it! He was wonderful!" Elizabeth said, smiling warmly, at the very thought of Montolio. She then realized she had developed a crush on him, and blushed.

Mewtwo, who didn't like the smiling or the blushing, ignored it. "Good, then everything is going as planned?"

"Um...uh...yeah," Elizabeth replied snapping out of her daydream.

"Good, contact me again when you make it to Cerulean City."

Elizabeth nodded and the screen went blank. She put the communicator away and faced a delima. "How am I supposed to Montolio now, without blushing?"

* * *

it was lunchtime by the time Montolio came out of his thoughts, and Elizabeth still hadn't came back. At first he was just going to wait there, but then his stomach told him otherwise.

Montolio exited the pokemon center and went to the pizza shop across the road, hoping he could have lunch without Elizabeth coming back and complaining about how he was missing.

Quite frankly Montolio just saw her as a hassle, so far all she's done was complain, and complain. He was beginning to like this down time from her. Although she was really cute, Montolio really didn't think she was his type, and planned on getting rid of her as soon as he was reunited with his parents. Cause afterall, that was the reason he was letting her stick around, in hopes of her leading him to his parents.

"Two slices of cheese please." Montolio said walking up to the counter of the small pizza parlor.

"Thanks." He said with a smile as he took his pizza and sat down with it.

* * *

Elizabeth, had finally came out of the shadows and went to the pokemon center, hoping she wouldn't get worked up at the sight of him.

Entering the pokecenter, she saw no sign of him, and went over to the counter and asked, "Have you seen Montolio around anywhere?"

"Yes, he said he'd be getting lunch, and that if you came I should tell you that he was headed across the street to the pizza shop," Nurse Joy said pointing at the shop.

"Thanks," she nodded and started over to the pizza parlor, in hopes of finding her partner.

Indeed when she entered the shop Montolio was at one of the booths eating his pizza silently.

"Hey," she said lamely as she took the other side of the booth.

Montolio rolled his eyes and said, "Hey."

"We heading out to Mount Moon today?" she asked trying her hardest to keep her head from turning red.

"yep, as soon as I'm done with my pizza." He said as he pushed the other slice to her. "I figured you'd show up adventually so I bought you a peice, better eat it before it gets cold."

ELizabeth would have blushed at the thought he put into her, except for his attitude. He sounded really annoyed, and bothered by her being there, which dampened her spirits.

She silently accepted to the peice and ate quietly. It bothered her that he had suddenly became annoyed by her presence. "Um...can I ask you a question?"

Montolio stopped and actually thought about whether he wanted to know the question. Her voice hinted that she had been hurt by his suddened attitude. He sighed and tryed to make his voice at least a bit more pleasant. "Let's hear it."

"Well, I noticed ever since I threw that temper tantrum back at the pokemon center, you've been getting frustrated with me," she said it wasn't a question, but Montolio knew what she was asking.

"Sorry, but I am annoyed with you," he said honestly. "I've done nothing but help you, yet you just seem to complain more and more, the more I help, the more you complain."

This time she did blush, because she was now embarrassed by her passed actions. But she was determined to set things right, if the were ever right before. She didn't want to be alone again, not like the last time, no she would fight to be by his side, to continue on with him, not to be dumped in the mud and forgotten about. "I'm really sorry about that. It's just...that I was hurt once...and I didn't want to be hurt again."

With that new information, Montolio want to press her for answers, but he decided that she would tell him when she was ready and left it at that. "I see, so you thought, but me being polite, that I was trying to get to your heart, only to break it for my own gain?"

Elizabeth silently agreed, and bent her head down in shame, she was shamed of the fact that she hadn't given him a chance.

Should I trust her? After all the complaining, should I trust her? What if she's lieing just so she can keep monitoring Charizard? Montolio thought to himself, trying to decide whether to believe her.

Trust her. She's telling the truth. The voice said, ringing clearly in Montolios mind.

"Well I'm not like that, no sirrey," Montolio said leaning back and putting his hands over his head. His voice turning back to is carefree tone. "I'd never do anything like that to anybody."

Elizabeth felt herself relax under Montolios voice, as tears brimmed her eye lids. "Thank you, Monty..." she said weakly, and then ran out the door and into a bedroom at the pokemon center.

Montolio, who had no clue what that meant to her, just scratched his head in confusion. "She didn't eat her pizza..."

Montolio grapped the half ate pizza, and finished it for ELizabeth, letting out a satisfying belch.

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>_>; <_<;

Ugh, I hate members who always include it in one of their posts, "I'm leaving <insert random forums' name here> for good, so close this thread."

It makes me sad seeing people leaving. ;-;!

But this was a good fic Raichu Master...

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How could he do this to us???

After all we read and wanted to know.

Man, this is bad. Now I'll always wonder about his parents, and Mewtwo, and everything!

Thanks a lot Raichu Master :(

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